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主题词网
优选词汇
成员：parent father mother aunt uncle sister brother；son daughter wife husband grandparent grandfather grandmother
职业：postman teacher doctor nurse policeman；manager worker driver businessman actor/actress
外貌：handsome tall short fat thin beautiful；hair eye ear nose mouth face
性格：funny kind clever friendly helpful silent；serious strict outgoing bright quiet funny
写作实例
有人说“父爱如山”，也有人说“父爱是无声的爱”。假设今天英语课的主题是“父爱”，请你根据以下写作要点，以“My father and I”为题写一篇短文，描述你父亲对你的爱。
写作要点：1.简要介绍你父亲的一些基本信息；
2.讲述你和你父亲之间的关系；
3.谈谈你是如何看待你父亲对你的感情的。
写作要求：1.文中须包含所有写作要点，可适当发挥；
2.词数80左右。
My father and I
写作支架
教材原文
P48 For years, the father served as the postman for this area.
P49 His love may be silent.
P51 We are a family, together or far away.
优秀范文
My father and I
I’d like to tell you about my father. ① For years, he served as an engineer for a car factory.
He works hard every day. Although he is busy②, he loves his job.
My father is a silent person. He doesn’t say much, but he does a lot for me. He sends me to hospital when I am ill②. He gives me advice when I ask him for help②. Sometimes I argue with him, but② he never gets angry with me.
His love may be silent, but I know he loves me.③ I love my father. We are a family, together or far away.
①
介
②
从全
③
“
主题词网
优选词汇
成员：parent father mother aunt uncle sister brother；son daughter wife husband grandparent grandfather grandmother
职业：postman teacher doctor nurse policeman；manager worker driver businessman actor/actress
外貌：handsome tall short fat thin beautiful；hair eye ear nose mouth face
性格：funny kind clever friendly helpful silent；serious strict outgoing bright quiet funny
写作实例
有人说“父爱如山”，也有人说“父爱是无声的爱”。假设今天英语课的主题是“父爱”，请你根据以下写作要点，以“My father and I”为题写一篇短文，描述你父亲对你的爱。
写作要点：1.简要介绍你父亲的一些基本信息；
2.讲述你和你父亲之间的关系；
3.谈谈你是如何看待你父亲对你的感情的。
写作要求：1.文中须包含所有写作要点，可适当发挥；
2.词数80左右。
My father and I
写作支架
教材原文
P48 For years, the father served as the postman for this area.
P49 His love may be silent.
P51 We are a family, together or far away.
优秀范文
My father and I
I’d like to tell you about my father. ① For years, he served as an engineer for a car factory.
He works hard every day. Although he is busy②, he loves his job.
My father is a silent person. He doesn’t say much, but he does a lot for me. He sends me to hospital when I am ill②. He gives me advice when I ask him for help②. Sometimes I argue with him, but② he never gets angry with me.
His love may be silent, but I know he loves me.③ I love my father. We are a family, together or far away.
①
介
②
从全
③
“
答案
My father and I
I'd like to tell you about my father. For years, he served as an engineer for a car factory. He works hard every day. Although he is busy, he loves his job.
My father is a silent person. He doesn't say much, but he does a lot for me. He sends me to hospital when I am ill. He gives me advice when I ask him for help. Sometimes I argue with him, but he never gets angry with me.
His love may be silent, but I know he loves me. I love my father. We are a family, together or far away.
I'd like to tell you about my father. For years, he served as an engineer for a car factory. He works hard every day. Although he is busy, he loves his job.
My father is a silent person. He doesn't say much, but he does a lot for me. He sends me to hospital when I am ill. He gives me advice when I ask him for help. Sometimes I argue with him, but he never gets angry with me.
His love may be silent, but I know he loves me. I love my father. We are a family, together or far away.
解析
【分析】
本次写作主题为“My father and I”，需涵盖三个核心要点：一是简要介绍父亲的基本信息，二是讲述与父亲的相处关系，三是表达对父爱的看法。写作时需结合给定的写作支架，运用合适的人物类词汇、性格类词汇及句式（如让步状语从句、时间状语从句），确保结构清晰、内容贴合主题，词数控制在80左右。
【解析】
按照写作要点和支架内容，依次完成各部分写作：
1. 开头部分：介绍父亲身份与职业，用“Although”引导让步状语从句体现父亲的工作态度，即“I’d like to tell you about my father. For years, he served as an engineer for a car factory. He works hard every day. Although he is busy, he loves his job.”
2. 中间部分：通过具体事例展现父亲沉默却付出很多的特点，即“My father is a silent person. He doesn’t say much, but he does a lot for me. He sends me to hospital when I am ill. He gives me advice when I ask him for help. Sometimes I argue with him, but he never gets angry with me.”
3. 结尾部分：升华主题，表达对父爱的理解与爱，即“His love may be silent, but I know he loves me. I love my father. We are a family, together or far away.”
【答案】
My father and I
I'd like to tell you about my father. For years, he served as an engineer for a car factory. He works hard every day. Although he is busy, he loves his job.
My father is a silent person. He doesn't say much, but he does a lot for me. He sends me to hospital when I am ill. He gives me advice when I ask him for help. Sometimes I argue with him, but he never gets angry with me.
His love may be silent, but I know he loves me. I love my father. We are a family, together or far away.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；英语句式运用；英语词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“父爱”主题，结构清晰，分为介绍父亲、讲述相处事例、表达对父爱的看法三个部分，语言简洁流畅，运用了合适的句式，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的主题短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作主题为“My father and I”，需涵盖三个核心要点：一是简要介绍父亲的基本信息，二是讲述与父亲的相处关系，三是表达对父爱的看法。写作时需结合给定的写作支架，运用合适的人物类词汇、性格类词汇及句式（如让步状语从句、时间状语从句），确保结构清晰、内容贴合主题，词数控制在80左右。
【解析】
按照写作要点和支架内容，依次完成各部分写作：
1. 开头部分：介绍父亲身份与职业，用“Although”引导让步状语从句体现父亲的工作态度，即“I’d like to tell you about my father. For years, he served as an engineer for a car factory. He works hard every day. Although he is busy, he loves his job.”
2. 中间部分：通过具体事例展现父亲沉默却付出很多的特点，即“My father is a silent person. He doesn’t say much, but he does a lot for me. He sends me to hospital when I am ill. He gives me advice when I ask him for help. Sometimes I argue with him, but he never gets angry with me.”
3. 结尾部分：升华主题，表达对父爱的理解与爱，即“His love may be silent, but I know he loves me. I love my father. We are a family, together or far away.”
【答案】
My father and I
I'd like to tell you about my father. For years, he served as an engineer for a car factory. He works hard every day. Although he is busy, he loves his job.
My father is a silent person. He doesn't say much, but he does a lot for me. He sends me to hospital when I am ill. He gives me advice when I ask him for help. Sometimes I argue with him, but he never gets angry with me.
His love may be silent, but I know he loves me. I love my father. We are a family, together or far away.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；英语句式运用；英语词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“父爱”主题，结构清晰，分为介绍父亲、讲述相处事例、表达对父爱的看法三个部分，语言简洁流畅，运用了合适的句式，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的主题短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
