七、书面表达。(共20分)
为弘扬优秀传统文化,展现国家文化软实力,你校英文报以“My favourite Chinese movie”为题发起征文活动,请你结合下面的要点提示写一篇100词左右的短文投稿,介绍你最喜欢的中国电影。要点如下:
1. 你最喜欢的中国电影是什么?
2. 该影片讲述的故事;
3. 你喜欢该影片的原因;
4. 你的推荐理由和观后感受。
My favourite Chinese movie
为弘扬优秀传统文化,展现国家文化软实力,你校英文报以“My favourite Chinese movie”为题发起征文活动,请你结合下面的要点提示写一篇100词左右的短文投稿,介绍你最喜欢的中国电影。要点如下:
1. 你最喜欢的中国电影是什么?
2. 该影片讲述的故事;
3. 你喜欢该影片的原因;
4. 你的推荐理由和观后感受。
My favourite Chinese movie
答案
One possible version:
My favourite Chinese movie
Watching movies can help me relax and give me something to think about. Among all the Chinese films I've watched, my favourite is Ne Zha 2, which was directed by Jiaozi, a famous director in China.
It is an educational cartoon that tells us a story about a famous mythological hero named Ne Zha. He is rebellious and brave enough to fight against the evil with his family and friends. More importantly, the story not only moves me to tears, but also teaches me that justice is always the winner.
I highly recommend this film to you because it reminds us of something that we sometimes forget—don't judge a book by its cover. Also, Ne Zha's life experience shows the old saying that where there's a will, there is a way.
My favourite Chinese movie
Watching movies can help me relax and give me something to think about. Among all the Chinese films I've watched, my favourite is Ne Zha 2, which was directed by Jiaozi, a famous director in China.
It is an educational cartoon that tells us a story about a famous mythological hero named Ne Zha. He is rebellious and brave enough to fight against the evil with his family and friends. More importantly, the story not only moves me to tears, but also teaches me that justice is always the winner.
I highly recommend this film to you because it reminds us of something that we sometimes forget—don't judge a book by its cover. Also, Ne Zha's life experience shows the old saying that where there's a will, there is a way.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My favourite Chinese movie”为题写100词左右的英文征文,需涵盖四个要点:1. 最喜欢的中国电影名称;2. 影片讲述的故事;3. 喜欢该影片的原因;4. 推荐理由及观后感受。解题思路:先确定符合要求的中国电影(如动画电影《哪吒2》),再按“引出电影→介绍影片内容→阐述喜欢原因→给出推荐与感受”的逻辑组织内容,确保覆盖所有要点,语言通顺,符合征文的正式性。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 开头:点明最喜欢的中国电影是《哪吒2》,介绍导演为中国知名导演饺子;2. 主体:说明影片是教育类卡通,讲述神话英雄哪吒叛逆勇敢,与家人朋友并肩对抗邪恶的故事,传递“正义必胜”的核心;3. 结尾:说明推荐理由(教会不要以貌取人、有志者事竟成),表达观后感受,完成征文。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite Chinese movie
Watching movies can help me relax and give me something to think about. Among all the Chinese films I've watched, my favourite is Ne Zha 2, which was directed by Jiaozi, a famous director in China.
It is an educational cartoon that tells us a story about a famous mythological hero named Ne Zha. He is rebellious and brave enough to fight against the evil with his family and friends. More importantly, the story not only moves me to tears, but also teaches me that justice is always the winner.
I highly recommend this film to you because it reminds us of something that we sometimes forget—don't judge a book by its cover. Also, Ne Zha's life experience shows the old saying that where there's a will, there is a way.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,完整覆盖所有要求要点,结构清晰、逻辑连贯;结合中国传统神话人物,传递积极向上的价值观,语言流畅自然,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的范文,适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以“My favourite Chinese movie”为题写100词左右的英文征文,需涵盖四个要点:1. 最喜欢的中国电影名称;2. 影片讲述的故事;3. 喜欢该影片的原因;4. 推荐理由及观后感受。解题思路:先确定符合要求的中国电影(如动画电影《哪吒2》),再按“引出电影→介绍影片内容→阐述喜欢原因→给出推荐与感受”的逻辑组织内容,确保覆盖所有要点,语言通顺,符合征文的正式性。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 开头:点明最喜欢的中国电影是《哪吒2》,介绍导演为中国知名导演饺子;2. 主体:说明影片是教育类卡通,讲述神话英雄哪吒叛逆勇敢,与家人朋友并肩对抗邪恶的故事,传递“正义必胜”的核心;3. 结尾:说明推荐理由(教会不要以貌取人、有志者事竟成),表达观后感受,完成征文。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite Chinese movie
Watching movies can help me relax and give me something to think about. Among all the Chinese films I've watched, my favourite is Ne Zha 2, which was directed by Jiaozi, a famous director in China.
It is an educational cartoon that tells us a story about a famous mythological hero named Ne Zha. He is rebellious and brave enough to fight against the evil with his family and friends. More importantly, the story not only moves me to tears, but also teaches me that justice is always the winner.
I highly recommend this film to you because it reminds us of something that we sometimes forget—don't judge a book by its cover. Also, Ne Zha's life experience shows the old saying that where there's a will, there is a way.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,完整覆盖所有要求要点,结构清晰、逻辑连贯;结合中国传统神话人物,传递积极向上的价值观,语言流畅自然,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的范文,适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.7
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