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九、书面表达。（共19分）
请根据校英语俱乐部的征稿要求，以“I have become a better student”为题，用英语写一篇发言稿，发表你的想法。
注意事项:1. 短文须包括以上所给内容要点，并展开合理想象，适当发挥；
2. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I have become a better student
Dear teachers and students, I am glad to make a speech. During this year, I have become a better student.
请根据校英语俱乐部的征稿要求，以“I have become a better student”为题，用英语写一篇发言稿，发表你的想法。
注意事项:1. 短文须包括以上所给内容要点，并展开合理想象，适当发挥；
2. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I have become a better student
Dear teachers and students, I am glad to make a speech. During this year, I have become a better student.
答案
One possible version:
I have become a better student
Dear teachers and students, I am glad to make a speech. During this year, I have become a better student.
In the past, I was crazy about computer games. I used to feel sleepy in class. I didn't like learning English because I thought I was unable to learn it well.
However, in the eighth grade of junior middle school, my English teacher, Miss Wang, changed me. When she knew I often played computer games, she talked to me. She told me the importance of learning English and often helped me with my English. Thanks to her help, I made great progress.
Now I have achieved a balance between playing and learning. I plan my daily study and life well. I make full use of every minute to learn more. I believe I will do better in the future.
I have become a better student
Dear teachers and students, I am glad to make a speech. During this year, I have become a better student.
In the past, I was crazy about computer games. I used to feel sleepy in class. I didn't like learning English because I thought I was unable to learn it well.
However, in the eighth grade of junior middle school, my English teacher, Miss Wang, changed me. When she knew I often played computer games, she talked to me. She told me the importance of learning English and often helped me with my English. Thanks to her help, I made great progress.
Now I have achieved a balance between playing and learning. I plan my daily study and life well. I make full use of every minute to learn more. I believe I will do better in the future.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：以“I have become a better student”为题写英语发言稿，需覆盖表格中“过去、影响、现在、未来”的所有要点，100词左右，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 确定时态：描述过去状态用一般过去时，现在情况用一般现在时，未来打算用一般将来时；2. 结构安排：承接开头，先写过去的不良状态（沉迷游戏、上课犯困、不喜欢英语），再写影响自己的人及帮助，接着写现在的改变，最后写未来期望；3. 内容填充：每个要点展开细节使文章连贯，控制字数；4. 检查：确保要点全覆盖，语法正确，语句通顺。
【解析】1. 审题：明确写作主题、体裁（发言稿）、要求（覆盖要点、字数、时态）；2. 时态选择：过去经历用一般过去时，现在状态用一般现在时，未来计划用一般将来时；3. 要点落实：①过去：沉迷电脑游戏、上课犯困、不喜欢英语；②影响者：英语老师王老师，她的帮助：谈话讲英语重要性、辅导英语；③现在：平衡玩与学、规划生活、利用时间；④未来：会做得更好；4. 组织语言：用连贯语句连接要点，符合发言稿语气，控制字数；5. 核对：检查要点是否遗漏、语法是否正确、字数是否达标。
【答案】I have become a better student
Dear teachers and students, I am glad to make a speech. During this year, I have become a better student.
In the past, I was crazy about computer games. I used to feel sleepy in class. I didn't like learning English because I thought I was unable to learn it well.
However, in the eighth grade of junior middle school, my English teacher, Miss Wang, changed me. When she knew I often played computer games, she talked to me. She told me the importance of learning English and often helped me with my English. Thanks to her help, I made great progress.
Now I have achieved a balance between playing and learning. I plan my daily study and life well. I make full use of every minute to learn more. I believe I will do better in the future.
【知识点】英语书面表达，一般过去时，一般现在时
【点评】本题为英语书面表达题，考查学生叙事能力、时态运用及语言组织能力，要求覆盖给定要点并适当发挥，难度适中，适合初中学生练习。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 审题：明确写作主题、体裁（发言稿）、要求（覆盖要点、字数、时态）；2. 时态选择：过去经历用一般过去时，现在状态用一般现在时，未来计划用一般将来时；3. 要点落实：①过去：沉迷电脑游戏、上课犯困、不喜欢英语；②影响者：英语老师王老师，她的帮助：谈话讲英语重要性、辅导英语；③现在：平衡玩与学、规划生活、利用时间；④未来：会做得更好；4. 组织语言：用连贯语句连接要点，符合发言稿语气，控制字数；5. 核对：检查要点是否遗漏、语法是否正确、字数是否达标。
【答案】I have become a better student
Dear teachers and students, I am glad to make a speech. During this year, I have become a better student.
In the past, I was crazy about computer games. I used to feel sleepy in class. I didn't like learning English because I thought I was unable to learn it well.
However, in the eighth grade of junior middle school, my English teacher, Miss Wang, changed me. When she knew I often played computer games, she talked to me. She told me the importance of learning English and often helped me with my English. Thanks to her help, I made great progress.
Now I have achieved a balance between playing and learning. I plan my daily study and life well. I make full use of every minute to learn more. I believe I will do better in the future.
【知识点】英语书面表达，一般过去时，一般现在时
【点评】本题为英语书面表达题，考查学生叙事能力、时态运用及语言组织能力，要求覆盖给定要点并适当发挥，难度适中，适合初中学生练习。
【难度系数】0.5
