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假如你是刘浩，你的朋友John来信询问你每天的学校生活，请根据提示回信。
要求：1.包含以上提示信息，内容充实；2.条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4.词数：不少于70（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.
What’s your favourite subject?
Yours,
Liu Hao
假如你是刘浩，你的朋友John来信询问你每天的学校生活，请根据提示回信。
要求：1.包含以上提示信息，内容充实；2.条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4.词数：不少于70（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.
I have seven classes a day. School starts at eight and I have four classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I have three classes from two thirty to five o’clock. After class, I play basketball and soccer with my friends.
My favourite subject is Chinese because it is interesting. I don’t like maths because it is too difficult for me.
My favourite subject is Chinese because it is interesting. I don’t like maths because it is too difficult for me.
What’s your favourite subject?
Yours,
Liu Hao
答案
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.
I have seven classes a day. School starts at eight and I have four classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I have three classes from two thirty to five o’clock. After class, I play basketball and soccer with my friends.
My favourite subject is Chinese because it is interesting. I don’t like maths because it is too difficult for me.
What’s your favourite subject?
Yours,
Liu Hao
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.
I have seven classes a day. School starts at eight and I have four classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I have three classes from two thirty to five o’clock. After class, I play basketball and soccer with my friends.
My favourite subject is Chinese because it is interesting. I don’t like maths because it is too difficult for me.
What’s your favourite subject?
Yours,
Liu Hao
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书信写作题，需以刘浩的身份给John回信介绍学校生活。解题思路：1. 明确书信格式，开头已给出，需补充正文内容；2. 整合提示信息：课程（上午四节、下午三节）、课后活动（打篮球、踢足球）、喜欢的科目（语文，原因有趣）、不喜欢的科目（数学，原因太难）；3. 适当增加时间等细节让内容连贯，确保语句通顺、语法正确，满足词数要求。
【解析】正文部分先介绍一天的课程安排：说明一天共七节课，上午四节，下午三节，补充时间细节使内容更充实；接着写课后活动：和朋友打篮球、踢足球；再说明喜好：最喜欢语文因为有趣，不喜欢数学因为太难；最后衔接结尾的问句，完成回信。
【答案】
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.
I have seven classes a day. School starts at eight and I have four classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I have three classes from two thirty to five o’clock. After class, I play basketball and soccer with my friends.
My favourite subject is Chinese because it is interesting. I don’t like maths because it is too difficult for me.
What’s your favourite subject?
Yours,
Liu Hao
【知识点】英语书信写作，英语句子表达
【点评】该作文完整覆盖所有提示信息，补充了合理的时间细节，语句通顺、语法正确，符合书信格式，内容连贯，满足词数要求，是一篇合格的回信。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】正文部分先介绍一天的课程安排：说明一天共七节课，上午四节，下午三节，补充时间细节使内容更充实；接着写课后活动：和朋友打篮球、踢足球；再说明喜好：最喜欢语文因为有趣，不喜欢数学因为太难；最后衔接结尾的问句，完成回信。
【答案】
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.
I have seven classes a day. School starts at eight and I have four classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I have three classes from two thirty to five o’clock. After class, I play basketball and soccer with my friends.
My favourite subject is Chinese because it is interesting. I don’t like maths because it is too difficult for me.
What’s your favourite subject?
Yours,
Liu Hao
【知识点】英语书信写作，英语句子表达
【点评】该作文完整覆盖所有提示信息，补充了合理的时间细节，语句通顺、语法正确，符合书信格式，内容连贯，满足词数要求，是一篇合格的回信。
【难度系数】0.5
