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假如你是李华,你校将开展以“My School Life”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文参加此次活动。
审人称:以第一人称为主
要求:1.要点齐全,可适当增加细节;2.不少于80词。
审词数
My School Life
审主题
假如你是李华,你校将开展以“My School Life”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文参加此次活动。
审人称:以第一人称为主
要求:1.要点齐全,可适当增加细节;2.不少于80词。
审词数
My School Life
答案
完整范文：
# My School Life
I'm Li Hua. I go to school from Monday to Friday. Now let me tell you something about my colorful school life.
I get up at 6:30 every morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. I have breakfast at 7 o'clock at home. Then I walk to school, because my home is just 10 minutes' walk away from our school. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. I study hard at all my subjects at school.
After school, I usually play basketball with my good friends on the playground for about half an hour. After getting home, I first have a short rest and enjoy the warm dinner my mother prepares for me. Then I do my homework carefully. After that I usually read my favorite English storybook for a while before going to bed.
In a word, my school life is busy but very happy, and I love my school life so much.
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写作支架参考填充内容：
1. I'm Li Hua. I go to school from Monday to Friday.
2. Now let me tell you something about my colorful school life.
3. I get up at 6:30 every morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth.
4. I have breakfast at 7 o'clock at home. Then I walk to school as my home is near the school.
5. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon.
6. After school, I usually play basketball with my friends on the playground for half an hour.
7. After getting home, I first have a short rest and enjoy the dinner my mom makes.
8. Then I do my homework. After that I usually read my favorite books for a while.
9. In a word, my school life is busy but very happy, and I really enjoy it.
# My School Life
I'm Li Hua. I go to school from Monday to Friday. Now let me tell you something about my colorful school life.
I get up at 6:30 every morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. I have breakfast at 7 o'clock at home. Then I walk to school, because my home is just 10 minutes' walk away from our school. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. I study hard at all my subjects at school.
After school, I usually play basketball with my good friends on the playground for about half an hour. After getting home, I first have a short rest and enjoy the warm dinner my mother prepares for me. Then I do my homework carefully. After that I usually read my favorite English storybook for a while before going to bed.
In a word, my school life is busy but very happy, and I love my school life so much.
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写作支架参考填充内容：
1. I'm Li Hua. I go to school from Monday to Friday.
2. Now let me tell you something about my colorful school life.
3. I get up at 6:30 every morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth.
4. I have breakfast at 7 o'clock at home. Then I walk to school as my home is near the school.
5. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon.
6. After school, I usually play basketball with my friends on the playground for half an hour.
7. After getting home, I first have a short rest and enjoy the dinner my mom makes.
8. Then I do my homework. After that I usually read my favorite books for a while.
9. In a word, my school life is busy but very happy, and I really enjoy it.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份，用第一人称完成“My School Life”主题征文，要求要点齐全、词数不少于80词。解题思路：1. 确定时态：描述日常学校生活使用一般现在时；2. 搭建文章结构：开头引入主题，中间分“在校日常作息（起床、上学、课程）”“课后活动”“回家后的安排”三个部分展开，结尾总结对学校生活的感受；3. 适当添加细节（如步行上学、和朋友打篮球、读英语故事书等）丰富内容，确保覆盖所有要求要点，满足词数要求。
【解析】按照写作思路，先介绍身份与学校生活的总体情况，再依次描述日常作息（起床、早餐、上学方式、课程安排）、课后活动、回家后的安排，最后总结感受，注意使用第一人称，语言流畅自然，适当添加细节。
【答案】My School Life
I'm Li Hua. I go to school from Monday to Friday. Now let me tell you something about my colorful school life.
I get up at 6:30 every morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. I have breakfast at 7 o'clock at home. Then I walk to school, because my home is just 10 minutes' walk away from our school. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. I study hard at all my subjects at school.
After school, I usually play basketball with my good friends on the playground for about half an hour. After getting home, I first have a short rest and enjoy the warm dinner my mother prepares for me. Then I do my homework carefully. After that I usually read my favorite English storybook for a while before going to bed.
In a word, my school life is busy but very happy, and I love my school life so much.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、英语句子衔接
【点评】该范文紧扣“My School Life”主题，结构清晰，要点齐全，语言流畅自然，符合征文的字数要求，为学生提供了规范的写作范例，适合参考学习。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作思路，先介绍身份与学校生活的总体情况，再依次描述日常作息（起床、早餐、上学方式、课程安排）、课后活动、回家后的安排，最后总结感受，注意使用第一人称，语言流畅自然，适当添加细节。
【答案】My School Life
I'm Li Hua. I go to school from Monday to Friday. Now let me tell you something about my colorful school life.
I get up at 6:30 every morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. I have breakfast at 7 o'clock at home. Then I walk to school, because my home is just 10 minutes' walk away from our school. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. I study hard at all my subjects at school.
After school, I usually play basketball with my good friends on the playground for about half an hour. After getting home, I first have a short rest and enjoy the warm dinner my mother prepares for me. Then I do my homework carefully. After that I usually read my favorite English storybook for a while before going to bed.
In a word, my school life is busy but very happy, and I love my school life so much.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、英语句子衔接
【点评】该范文紧扣“My School Life”主题，结构清晰，要点齐全，语言流畅自然，符合征文的字数要求，为学生提供了规范的写作范例，适合参考学习。
【难度系数】0.6
