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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D8
「2026 广东广州白云期中」
假设你是李华，刚升入初中一个月。初中生活丰富多彩，请你根据表格中所给的要点提示，给你的美国笔友 Jack 写一封邮件，分享你的校园与课余生活。
写作要求:1.必须包含给出的所有要点,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息;3.80 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
How is everything going with you? I am so happy that I became a seventh-grader this September.
What about you? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
「2026 广东广州白云期中」
假设你是李华，刚升入初中一个月。初中生活丰富多彩，请你根据表格中所给的要点提示，给你的美国笔友 Jack 写一封邮件，分享你的校园与课余生活。
写作要求:1.必须包含给出的所有要点,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息;3.80 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
How is everything going with you? I am so happy that I became a seventh-grader this September.
My school life is busy but interesting. I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day and walk to school. Classes start at 8:00 a.m. and finish at 5:30 p.m. I study seven subjects, and I am very interested in English because it helps me talk with friends like you!
After school, I often play sports with my friends. I realize that friendship is very important because we help each other and share happy moments. On weekends, I enjoy colourful activities. For example, in spring, I go to the park to enjoy the flowers. I also like flying kites with my family.
I think my new school life is wonderful. I hope to learn more and make more friends in the near future.
What about you? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Jack,
How is everything going with you? I am so happy that I became a seventh-grader this September.
My school life is busy but interesting. I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day and walk to school. Classes start at 8:00 a.m. and finish at 5:30 p.m. I study seven subjects, and I am very interested in English because it helps me talk with friends like you!
After school, I often play sports with my friends. I realize that friendship is very important because we help each other and share happy moments. On weekends, I enjoy colourful activities. For example, in spring, I go to the park to enjoy the flowers. I also like flying kites with my family.
I think my new school life is wonderful. I hope to learn more and make more friends in the near future.
What about you? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Jack,
How is everything going with you? I am so happy that I became a seventh-grader this September.
My school life is hectic yet fascinating. I wake up at 6:30 a.m. daily and make my way to school on foot. Classes begin at 8:00 a.m. and end at 5:30 p.m. I study seven subjects, and I develop a great interest in English since it allows me to communicate with friends like you!
After school, I often engage in sports with my friends. I realize that friendship plays a vital role because we support each other and share joyful moments. On weekends, I enjoy a diverse range of activities. For instance, in spring, I visit the park to admire the blooming flowers. I also love flying kites with my family.
I find my new school life absolutely wonderful. I hope to gain more knowledge and make more friends in the near future.
What about you? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Jack,
How is everything going with you? I am so happy that I became a seventh-grader this September.
My school life is busy but interesting. I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day and walk to school. Classes start at 8:00 a.m. and finish at 5:30 p.m. I study seven subjects, and I am very interested in English because it helps me talk with friends like you!
After school, I often play sports with my friends. I realize that friendship is very important because we help each other and share happy moments. On weekends, I enjoy colourful activities. For example, in spring, I go to the park to enjoy the flowers. I also like flying kites with my family.
I think my new school life is wonderful. I hope to learn more and make more friends in the near future.
What about you? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Jack,
How is everything going with you? I am so happy that I became a seventh-grader this September.
My school life is hectic yet fascinating. I wake up at 6:30 a.m. daily and make my way to school on foot. Classes begin at 8:00 a.m. and end at 5:30 p.m. I study seven subjects, and I develop a great interest in English since it allows me to communicate with friends like you!
After school, I often engage in sports with my friends. I realize that friendship plays a vital role because we support each other and share joyful moments. On weekends, I enjoy a diverse range of activities. For instance, in spring, I visit the park to admire the blooming flowers. I also love flying kites with my family.
I find my new school life absolutely wonderful. I hope to gain more knowledge and make more friends in the near future.
What about you? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题要求以刚升入初中的李华身份，给美国笔友Jack写一封邮件分享校园与课余生活，需覆盖表格中所有要点：作息（6:30起床步行上学、8点上课、5:30放学）、学习与课余活动（7门学科及感兴趣的科目和原因、和朋友运动体会友谊、周末补充一个活动），同时要符合邮件格式，语气亲切，行文连贯，不得出现真实信息，字数约80词。解题思路为：先梳理所有必写要点，按“作息介绍-学习课余情况-周末活动-生活感受”的逻辑串联内容，用简单连贯的英语表达，确保要点不遗漏，符合初中生英语水平。
【解析】1. 衔接已给开头，先介绍作息：I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day and walk to school. Classes start at 8:00 a.m. and finish at 5:30 p.m.；2. 说明学习情况：I study seven subjects, and I am very interested in English because it helps me talk with friends like you!；3. 讲述课余活动与感悟：After school, I often play sports with my friends. I realize that friendship is very important because we help each other and share happy moments.；4. 补充周末活动：On weekends, I enjoy colourful activities. For example, in spring, I go to the park to enjoy the flowers. I also like flying kites with my family.；5. 表达对初中生活的感受，衔接已给结尾：I think my new school life is wonderful. I hope to learn more and make more friends in the near future.
【答案】Dear Jack,
How is everything going with you? I am so happy that I became a seventh-grader this September.
My school life is busy but interesting. I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day and walk to school. Classes start at 8:00 a.m. and finish at 5:30 p.m. I study seven subjects, and I am very interested in English because it helps me talk with friends like you!
After school, I often play sports with my friends. I realize that friendship is very important because we help each other and share happy moments. On weekends, I enjoy colourful activities. For example, in spring, I go to the park to enjoy the flowers. I also like flying kites with my family.
I think my new school life is wonderful. I hope to learn more and make more friends in the near future.
What about you? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语邮件写作、初中生活话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】本题为初中英语写作题，考查学生对给定要点的整合能力、邮件格式的掌握及英语语言应用能力，要求学生结合初中新生身份，用连贯自然的英语分享生活，符合初中阶段写作训练目标，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1. 衔接已给开头，先介绍作息：I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day and walk to school. Classes start at 8:00 a.m. and finish at 5:30 p.m.；2. 说明学习情况：I study seven subjects, and I am very interested in English because it helps me talk with friends like you!；3. 讲述课余活动与感悟：After school, I often play sports with my friends. I realize that friendship is very important because we help each other and share happy moments.；4. 补充周末活动：On weekends, I enjoy colourful activities. For example, in spring, I go to the park to enjoy the flowers. I also like flying kites with my family.；5. 表达对初中生活的感受，衔接已给结尾：I think my new school life is wonderful. I hope to learn more and make more friends in the near future.
【答案】Dear Jack,
How is everything going with you? I am so happy that I became a seventh-grader this September.
My school life is busy but interesting. I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day and walk to school. Classes start at 8:00 a.m. and finish at 5:30 p.m. I study seven subjects, and I am very interested in English because it helps me talk with friends like you!
After school, I often play sports with my friends. I realize that friendship is very important because we help each other and share happy moments. On weekends, I enjoy colourful activities. For example, in spring, I go to the park to enjoy the flowers. I also like flying kites with my family.
I think my new school life is wonderful. I hope to learn more and make more friends in the near future.
What about you? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语邮件写作、初中生活话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】本题为初中英语写作题，考查学生对给定要点的整合能力、邮件格式的掌握及英语语言应用能力，要求学生结合初中新生身份，用连贯自然的英语分享生活，符合初中阶段写作训练目标，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.3
