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你校英文社团即将举办名为“Movies We Love”的活动,邀请同学们介绍自己最喜欢的电影,请根据以下提示和注意事项写一篇影评投稿。
提示:1.What movie do you love most? Tell us some basic information of it.
2.Summarize the plot and tell us something about the characters.
3.How do you like it?
注意:1.短文须包含征稿要求的三点内容,并可适当拓展信息;
2.写作词数80左右；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
Movies We Love
优秀范文
Movies We Love
My favorite movie is The Lion King. It was directed① by Roger Allers and Rob Minkoff, and it was released① in 1994. The movie is famous around the world and loved by① both children and① adults.
The movie tells the story of Simba, a young lion prince. After his father died, Simba left home because he felt afraid and guilty.② However, with the help of① his friends, he finally became brave enough① to return and protect his kingdom. I like Simba very much because he never gave up① when facing difficulties.②
I think this movie is not only interesting but also③ meaningful. The music is wonderful and the pictures are beautiful. More importantly①, it teaches us to be brave and responsible. That’s why I highly recommend this movie to everyone.②
亮点评析
①运用被动语态、both...and...、with the help of...、形容词+enough、never give up、more importantly,语言生动简洁。
②运用时间状语从句、原因状语从句、表语从句,句式结构丰富。
③运用not only...but also...结构,总体概括了对这部电影的印象。
提示:1.What movie do you love most? Tell us some basic information of it.
2.Summarize the plot and tell us something about the characters.
3.How do you like it?
注意:1.短文须包含征稿要求的三点内容,并可适当拓展信息;
2.写作词数80左右；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
Movies We Love
优秀范文
Movies We Love
My favorite movie is The Lion King. It was directed① by Roger Allers and Rob Minkoff, and it was released① in 1994. The movie is famous around the world and loved by① both children and① adults.
The movie tells the story of Simba, a young lion prince. After his father died, Simba left home because he felt afraid and guilty.② However, with the help of① his friends, he finally became brave enough① to return and protect his kingdom. I like Simba very much because he never gave up① when facing difficulties.②
I think this movie is not only interesting but also③ meaningful. The music is wonderful and the pictures are beautiful. More importantly①, it teaches us to be brave and responsible. That’s why I highly recommend this movie to everyone.②
亮点评析
①运用被动语态、both...and...、with the help of...、形容词+enough、never give up、more importantly,语言生动简洁。
②运用时间状语从句、原因状语从句、表语从句,句式结构丰富。
③运用not only...but also...结构,总体概括了对这部电影的印象。
答案
# Movies We Love
My favorite movie is *The Lion King*. It was directed by Roger Allers and Rob Minkoff, and it was released in 1994. The movie is famous around the world and loved by both children and adults.
The movie tells the story of Simba, a young lion prince. After his father died, Simba left home because he felt afraid and guilty. However, with the help of his friends, he finally became brave enough to return and protect his kingdom. I like Simba very much because he never gave up when facing difficulties.
I think this movie is not only interesting but also meaningful. The music is wonderful and the pictures are beautiful. More importantly, it teaches us to be brave and responsible. That's why I highly recommend this movie to everyone.
My favorite movie is *The Lion King*. It was directed by Roger Allers and Rob Minkoff, and it was released in 1994. The movie is famous around the world and loved by both children and adults.
The movie tells the story of Simba, a young lion prince. After his father died, Simba left home because he felt afraid and guilty. However, with the help of his friends, he finally became brave enough to return and protect his kingdom. I like Simba very much because he never gave up when facing difficulties.
I think this movie is not only interesting but also meaningful. The music is wonderful and the pictures are beautiful. More importantly, it teaches us to be brave and responsible. That's why I highly recommend this movie to everyone.
解析
【分析】
首先确定最喜欢的电影为《狮子王》，按照题目要求分三部分写作：开头介绍电影基本信息（导演、发行时间、受众）；中间梳理情节与角色，结合高分短语填充内容；结尾表达对电影的看法，运用指定句式，确保涵盖所有要求且符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头部分：选择《狮子王》，补充导演、发行时间、受众信息，使用被动语态等结构；
2. 中间部分：围绕主角辛巴的故事，填写情节细节，运用原因状语从句、with the help of等高分句式；
3. 结尾部分：用not only...but also...结构评价电影，点明教育意义，最后推荐电影，符合要求。
【答案】
# Movies We Love
My favorite movie is *The Lion King*. It was directed by Roger Allers and Rob Minkoff, and it was released in 1994. The movie is famous around the world and loved by both children and adults.
The movie tells the story of Simba, a young lion prince. After his father died, Simba left home because he felt afraid and guilty. However, with the help of his friends, he finally became brave enough to return and protect his kingdom. I like Simba very much because he never gave up when facing difficulties.
I think this movie is not only interesting but also meaningful. The music is wonderful and the pictures are beautiful. More importantly, it teaches us to be brave and responsible. That's why I highly recommend this movie to everyone.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、电影介绍类作文、常用句式运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，涵盖电影基本信息、情节、个人评价三方面内容，运用被动语态、not only...but also...等高分句式，语言流畅，符合词数要求，是优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
首先确定最喜欢的电影为《狮子王》，按照题目要求分三部分写作：开头介绍电影基本信息（导演、发行时间、受众）；中间梳理情节与角色，结合高分短语填充内容；结尾表达对电影的看法，运用指定句式，确保涵盖所有要求且符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头部分：选择《狮子王》，补充导演、发行时间、受众信息，使用被动语态等结构；
2. 中间部分：围绕主角辛巴的故事，填写情节细节，运用原因状语从句、with the help of等高分句式；
3. 结尾部分：用not only...but also...结构评价电影，点明教育意义，最后推荐电影，符合要求。
【答案】
# Movies We Love
My favorite movie is *The Lion King*. It was directed by Roger Allers and Rob Minkoff, and it was released in 1994. The movie is famous around the world and loved by both children and adults.
The movie tells the story of Simba, a young lion prince. After his father died, Simba left home because he felt afraid and guilty. However, with the help of his friends, he finally became brave enough to return and protect his kingdom. I like Simba very much because he never gave up when facing difficulties.
I think this movie is not only interesting but also meaningful. The music is wonderful and the pictures are beautiful. More importantly, it teaches us to be brave and responsible. That's why I highly recommend this movie to everyone.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、电影介绍类作文、常用句式运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，涵盖电影基本信息、情节、个人评价三方面内容，运用被动语态、not only...but also...等高分句式，语言流畅，符合词数要求，是优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
