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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D21
近年来,许多国产动画电影获得了口碑与票房的双丰收,《浪浪山小妖怪》(Nobody)就备受好评。请你根据以下提示,写一篇关于《浪浪山小妖怪》的影评。
提示:1.It is a Chinese animated movie.
2.Main characters are little monsters living in Langlang Mountain.
3.The little monsters dream of seeing the outside world and finding their own value. During the journey, they face difficulties but keep moving forward.
4.What do you think of the movie? What can you learn from it?
注意:1.短文须包含提示中的所有内容,并可适当发挥;
2.写作词数80左右;
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
近年来,许多国产动画电影获得了口碑与票房的双丰收,《浪浪山小妖怪》(Nobody)就备受好评。请你根据以下提示,写一篇关于《浪浪山小妖怪》的影评。
提示:1.It is a Chinese animated movie.
2.Main characters are little monsters living in Langlang Mountain.
3.The little monsters dream of seeing the outside world and finding their own value. During the journey, they face difficulties but keep moving forward.
4.What do you think of the movie? What can you learn from it?
注意:1.短文须包含提示中的所有内容,并可适当发挥;
2.写作词数80左右;
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
Today I'd like to talk about Nobody. It is a Chinese animated movie about several little monsters living in Langlang Mountain. They dream of seeing the outside world and finding their own value.
During their journey, the little monsters meet many difficulties.
However, they never give up and keep moving forward bravely.
I like the characters very much because they are kind and hard-working.
I think this movie is interesting and meaningful.
It teaches us to follow our dreams and face difficulties with courage.
I really recommend this movie to everyone.
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
Today I'd like to talk about Nobody. It is a Chinese animated movie about several little monsters living in Langlang Mountain. They dream of seeing the outside world and finding their own value.
During their journey, the little monsters meet many difficulties. However, they never give up and keep moving forward bravely. I like the characters very much because they are kind and hard-working.
I think this movie is interesting and meaningful. It teaches us to follow our dreams and face difficulties with courage. I really recommend this movie to everyone.
进阶版范文
Recently, many Chinese animated movies have become very popular, and Nobody is one of them. The movie tells the story of several little monsters living in Langlang Mountain. Although they are ordinary and sometimes laughed at by others, they still dream of exploring the outside world and finding their true value.
On their journey, the little monsters face many challenges and failures. However, instead of giving up, they continue to move forward with courage and hope. Their spirit deeply touched me.
In my opinion, this movie is not only funny but also inspiring. It reminds us that everyone can shine in their own way as long as they keep trying. That is why I think it is well worth watching.
基础版范文
Today I'd like to talk about Nobody. It is a Chinese animated movie about several little monsters living in Langlang Mountain. They dream of seeing the outside world and finding their own value.
During their journey, the little monsters meet many difficulties. However, they never give up and keep moving forward bravely. I like the characters very much because they are kind and hard-working.
I think this movie is interesting and meaningful. It teaches us to follow our dreams and face difficulties with courage. I really recommend this movie to everyone.
进阶版范文
Recently, many Chinese animated movies have become very popular, and Nobody is one of them. The movie tells the story of several little monsters living in Langlang Mountain. Although they are ordinary and sometimes laughed at by others, they still dream of exploring the outside world and finding their true value.
On their journey, the little monsters face many challenges and failures. However, instead of giving up, they continue to move forward with courage and hope. Their spirit deeply touched me.
In my opinion, this movie is not only funny but also inspiring. It reminds us that everyone can shine in their own way as long as they keep trying. That is why I think it is well worth watching.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语影评写作题，解题思路如下：
1. 明确文体要求：需围绕国产动画《浪浪山小妖怪》（Nobody）写一篇80词左右的影评，不得透露个人信息，需涵盖所有提示要点。
2. 梳理提示核心信息：①电影属性（中国动画）；②主角（浪浪山的小妖怪）；③情节（梦想看外界、找自身价值，遇困难仍前行）；④个人评价与感悟。
3. 搭建写作结构：开头引出电影→介绍电影基本内容与情节→表达个人看法及学到的道理→收尾（可选推荐），确保逻辑清晰，要点齐全。
【解析】
按照写作结构，结合提示要点组织语言，需覆盖所有要求内容，词数控制在80左右：
开头引出电影：Today I'd like to talk about Nobody. It is a Chinese animated movie about several little monsters living in Langlang Mountain.
中间讲情节：They dream of seeing the outside world and finding their own value. During their journey, the little monsters meet many difficulties. However, they never give up and keep moving forward bravely.
结尾谈看法与感悟：I think this movie is interesting and meaningful. It teaches us to follow our dreams and face difficulties with courage. I really recommend this movie to everyone.
【答案】
Today I'd like to talk about Nobody. It is a Chinese animated movie about several little monsters living in Langlang Mountain. They dream of seeing the outside world and finding their own value. During their journey, the little monsters meet many difficulties. However, they never give up and keep moving forward bravely. I think this movie is interesting and meaningful. It teaches us to follow our dreams and face difficulties with courage. I really recommend this movie to everyone.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语提示作文、英语观点表达
【点评】
本题以热门国产动画为写作素材，既考查学生对给定信息的整合能力，又考查英语语言的综合运用能力，要求学生兼顾内容完整性与语言流畅性，是典型的英语写作实战题。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语影评写作题，解题思路如下：
1. 明确文体要求：需围绕国产动画《浪浪山小妖怪》（Nobody）写一篇80词左右的影评，不得透露个人信息，需涵盖所有提示要点。
2. 梳理提示核心信息：①电影属性（中国动画）；②主角（浪浪山的小妖怪）；③情节（梦想看外界、找自身价值，遇困难仍前行）；④个人评价与感悟。
3. 搭建写作结构：开头引出电影→介绍电影基本内容与情节→表达个人看法及学到的道理→收尾（可选推荐），确保逻辑清晰，要点齐全。
【解析】
按照写作结构，结合提示要点组织语言，需覆盖所有要求内容，词数控制在80左右：
开头引出电影：Today I'd like to talk about Nobody. It is a Chinese animated movie about several little monsters living in Langlang Mountain.
中间讲情节：They dream of seeing the outside world and finding their own value. During their journey, the little monsters meet many difficulties. However, they never give up and keep moving forward bravely.
结尾谈看法与感悟：I think this movie is interesting and meaningful. It teaches us to follow our dreams and face difficulties with courage. I really recommend this movie to everyone.
【答案】
Today I'd like to talk about Nobody. It is a Chinese animated movie about several little monsters living in Langlang Mountain. They dream of seeing the outside world and finding their own value. During their journey, the little monsters meet many difficulties. However, they never give up and keep moving forward bravely. I think this movie is interesting and meaningful. It teaches us to follow our dreams and face difficulties with courage. I really recommend this movie to everyone.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语提示作文、英语观点表达
【点评】
本题以热门国产动画为写作素材，既考查学生对给定信息的整合能力，又考查英语语言的综合运用能力，要求学生兼顾内容完整性与语言流畅性，是典型的英语写作实战题。
【难度系数】
0.5
