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三、书面表达。
你们学校的英文报社正在就“网络安全”这一话题征稿，请你根据以下提示，以“Stay Safe Online”为题投稿，呼吁同学们安全使用网络。
写作提示：
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70个左右。
Stay Safe Online
你们学校的英文报社正在就“网络安全”这一话题征稿，请你根据以下提示，以“Stay Safe Online”为题投稿，呼吁同学们安全使用网络。
写作提示：
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70个左右。
Stay Safe Online
The internet brings us knowledge and
fun, but it also can put us in danger.
Staying safe online is very important for
everyone, especially for us students. Here
are some useful suggestions for your safety
online.
fun, but it also can put us in danger.
Staying safe online is very important for
everyone, especially for us students. Here
are some useful suggestions for your safety
online.
First, be careful with personal
information. Never give out your real
name, address, phone number to strangers
online. Second, always use strong
passwords. Your passwords should mix
letters, numbers and symbols. Never share
them with others. Third, don't click on
strange links. If someone you don't know
sends you an email or a link, never
click it.
information. Never give out your real
name, address, phone number to strangers
online. Second, always use strong
passwords. Your passwords should mix
letters, numbers and symbols. Never share
them with others. Third, don't click on
strange links. If someone you don't know
sends you an email or a link, never
click it.
Follow these simple rules, and we
can all enjoy the internet safely.
can all enjoy the internet safely.
答案
Stay Safe Online
The internet brings us knowledge and
fun, but it also can put us in danger.
Staying safe online is very important for
everyone, especially for us students. Here
are some useful suggestions for your safety
online.
First, be careful with personal
information. Never give out your real
name, address, phone number to strangers
online. Second, always use strong
passwords. Your passwords should mix
letters, numbers and symbols. Never share
them with others. Third, don't click on
strange links. If someone you don't know
sends you an email or a link, never
click it.
Follow these simple rules, and we
can all enjoy the internet safely.
The internet brings us knowledge and
fun, but it also can put us in danger.
Staying safe online is very important for
everyone, especially for us students. Here
are some useful suggestions for your safety
online.
First, be careful with personal
information. Never give out your real
name, address, phone number to strangers
online. Second, always use strong
passwords. Your passwords should mix
letters, numbers and symbols. Never share
them with others. Third, don't click on
strange links. If someone you don't know
sends you an email or a link, never
click it.
Follow these simple rules, and we
can all enjoy the internet safely.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题后，首先对照给出的思维导图梳理清晰写作逻辑：第一步先完成Reason部分，客观说明网络的利弊，点明重视网络安全的必要性，完成开篇点题；第二步完成Advice部分，要覆盖三个子要点：个人信息、密码、链接，每个要点补充简单的实操提示，让建议具体可行；第三步完成Conclusion部分，总结全文发出安全上网的呼吁。全程注意不要出现真实姓名和校名，控制词数符合要求，保证所有提示信息都用到，不要遗漏要点。
【解析】
本篇写作按照总分总结构展开，严格对应思维导图的所有模块：
1. 开篇（Reason部分）：先点明网络既能给我们带来知识和乐趣，也存在安全风险，强调网络安全对学生的重要性，自然引出下文的安全建议。
2. 主体（Advice部分）：分三点依次展开：
① 针对个人信息：提醒大家谨慎对待隐私信息，不要向线上陌生人泄露真实姓名、住址、手机号等内容；
② 针对密码：建议大家设置由字母、数字、符号组成的高安全性密码，不要将密码分享给他人；
③ 针对链接：提醒大家不要点击陌生人发来的不明链接，避免遭遇安全问题。
3. 结尾（Conclusion部分）：呼吁大家遵守上述规则，就可以安全地享受网络带来的便利，完成全文收尾。
全文所有提示要点全部覆盖，符合写作的各项要求。
【答案】
Stay Safe Online
The internet brings us knowledge and fun, but it also can put us in danger. Staying safe online is very important for everyone, especially for us students. Here are some useful suggestions for your safety online.
First, be careful with personal information. Never give out your real name, address, phone number to strangers online. Second, always use strong passwords. Your passwords should mix letters, numbers and symbols. Never share them with others. Third, don't click on strange links. If someone you don't know sends you an email or a link, never click it.
Follow these simple rules, and we can all enjoy the internet safely.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，网络安全话题，写作结构搭建
【点评】
本文结构清晰完整，完全覆盖题干给出的所有写作要点，按照“说明重要性-给出具体建议-总结呼吁”的逻辑行文，内容贴合学生的实际网络使用场景，语言流畅自然，很好地达成了向同学们宣传网络安全、呼吁安全上网的写作目的，符合题目的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题后，首先对照给出的思维导图梳理清晰写作逻辑：第一步先完成Reason部分，客观说明网络的利弊，点明重视网络安全的必要性，完成开篇点题；第二步完成Advice部分，要覆盖三个子要点：个人信息、密码、链接，每个要点补充简单的实操提示，让建议具体可行；第三步完成Conclusion部分，总结全文发出安全上网的呼吁。全程注意不要出现真实姓名和校名，控制词数符合要求，保证所有提示信息都用到，不要遗漏要点。
【解析】
本篇写作按照总分总结构展开，严格对应思维导图的所有模块：
1. 开篇（Reason部分）：先点明网络既能给我们带来知识和乐趣，也存在安全风险，强调网络安全对学生的重要性，自然引出下文的安全建议。
2. 主体（Advice部分）：分三点依次展开：
① 针对个人信息：提醒大家谨慎对待隐私信息，不要向线上陌生人泄露真实姓名、住址、手机号等内容；
② 针对密码：建议大家设置由字母、数字、符号组成的高安全性密码，不要将密码分享给他人；
③ 针对链接：提醒大家不要点击陌生人发来的不明链接，避免遭遇安全问题。
3. 结尾（Conclusion部分）：呼吁大家遵守上述规则，就可以安全地享受网络带来的便利，完成全文收尾。
全文所有提示要点全部覆盖，符合写作的各项要求。
【答案】
Stay Safe Online
The internet brings us knowledge and fun, but it also can put us in danger. Staying safe online is very important for everyone, especially for us students. Here are some useful suggestions for your safety online.
First, be careful with personal information. Never give out your real name, address, phone number to strangers online. Second, always use strong passwords. Your passwords should mix letters, numbers and symbols. Never share them with others. Third, don't click on strange links. If someone you don't know sends you an email or a link, never click it.
Follow these simple rules, and we can all enjoy the internet safely.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，网络安全话题，写作结构搭建
【点评】
本文结构清晰完整，完全覆盖题干给出的所有写作要点，按照“说明重要性-给出具体建议-总结呼吁”的逻辑行文，内容贴合学生的实际网络使用场景，语言流畅自然，很好地达成了向同学们宣传网络安全、呼吁安全上网的写作目的，符合题目的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
