三、书面表达
中华文化博大精深,许多经典故事鼓舞并激励着人们。请你根据下面的提示问题和写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,分享一个你最喜欢的经典中国故事。
提示问题:
1. What's your favourite story?
2. What's the story about?
3. What do you learn from the story?
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息;
3. 词数70左右。
中华文化博大精深,许多经典故事鼓舞并激励着人们。请你根据下面的提示问题和写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,分享一个你最喜欢的经典中国故事。
提示问题:
1. What's your favourite story?
2. What's the story about?
3. What do you learn from the story?
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息;
3. 词数70左右。
答案
One possible version:
My favourite Chinese story is Kua Fu Chasing the Sun. It is a story about a man named Kua Fu running after the sun.
Kua Fu lived with a group of people in the mountains. One year, many people died because the weather was too hot. Kua Fu was sad and said, "The sun is really hateful. I will catch up with it and make it follow our orders." He passed through mountains and crossed rivers. Although he was thirsty, he never gave up. In the end, he died on the way.
The story tells me that I should hold on to my dream and try my best to make it come true.
My favourite Chinese story is Kua Fu Chasing the Sun. It is a story about a man named Kua Fu running after the sun.
Kua Fu lived with a group of people in the mountains. One year, many people died because the weather was too hot. Kua Fu was sad and said, "The sun is really hateful. I will catch up with it and make it follow our orders." He passed through mountains and crossed rivers. Although he was thirsty, he never gave up. In the end, he died on the way.
The story tells me that I should hold on to my dream and try my best to make it come true.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇关于最喜欢的中国经典故事的英语短文,需覆盖三个提示问题,词数约70,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:1. 选取熟悉的经典故事(如夸父追日);2. 按提示依次说明故事名称、核心内容、个人感悟;3. 用简单准确的英语表达,控制词数,确保要点齐全。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 开篇点明最喜欢的故事是《夸父追日》;2. 简述故事:夸父为拯救受酷热折磨的族人,决心追赶太阳,历经艰难仍不放弃,最终牺牲;3. 点明感悟:要坚持梦想,尽力实现目标。注意用词规范,符合初中英语水平,词数控制在要求范围内。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite Chinese story is Kua Fu Chasing the Sun. It is a story about a man named Kua Fu running after the sun.
Kua Fu lived with a group of people in the mountains. One year, many people died because the weather was too hot. Kua Fu was sad and said, "The sun is really hateful. I will catch up with it and make it follow our orders." He passed through mountains and crossed rivers. Although he was thirsty, he never gave up. In the end, he died on the way.
The story tells me that I should hold on to my dream and try my best to make it come true.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、经典故事英文写作、要点整合写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有提示内容,语言简洁流畅,符合初中英语写作规范,能清晰传递故事内涵和个人感悟,是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求写一篇关于最喜欢的中国经典故事的英语短文,需覆盖三个提示问题,词数约70,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:1. 选取熟悉的经典故事(如夸父追日);2. 按提示依次说明故事名称、核心内容、个人感悟;3. 用简单准确的英语表达,控制词数,确保要点齐全。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 开篇点明最喜欢的故事是《夸父追日》;2. 简述故事:夸父为拯救受酷热折磨的族人,决心追赶太阳,历经艰难仍不放弃,最终牺牲;3. 点明感悟:要坚持梦想,尽力实现目标。注意用词规范,符合初中英语水平,词数控制在要求范围内。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite Chinese story is Kua Fu Chasing the Sun. It is a story about a man named Kua Fu running after the sun.
Kua Fu lived with a group of people in the mountains. One year, many people died because the weather was too hot. Kua Fu was sad and said, "The sun is really hateful. I will catch up with it and make it follow our orders." He passed through mountains and crossed rivers. Although he was thirsty, he never gave up. In the end, he died on the way.
The story tells me that I should hold on to my dream and try my best to make it come true.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、经典故事英文写作、要点整合写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有提示内容,语言简洁流畅,符合初中英语写作规范,能清晰传递故事内涵和个人感悟,是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
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