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随着网络和人工智能 (AI) 的不断进步，如今旅游有了两种热门选择：“云游 (Online tours)”和“亲历 (In-person travel)”。“云游”借助网络，让我们足不出户就能饱览世界各地的美景；而“亲历”，则是亲身前往心仪之地，感受当地的风土人情。这两种方式各有魅力，那你更倾向于哪一种呢？请以“My Way of Travelling”为题，写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1. 陈述你的选择并说明原因(至少两点)；
2. 分享一次令你印象深刻的相关旅行；
3. 谈谈你的感悟。
注意事项：
1. 词数 90 左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My Way of Travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose
随着网络和人工智能 (AI) 的不断进步，如今旅游有了两种热门选择：“云游 (Online tours)”和“亲历 (In-person travel)”。“云游”借助网络，让我们足不出户就能饱览世界各地的美景；而“亲历”，则是亲身前往心仪之地，感受当地的风土人情。这两种方式各有魅力，那你更倾向于哪一种呢？请以“My Way of Travelling”为题，写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1. 陈述你的选择并说明原因(至少两点)；
2. 分享一次令你印象深刻的相关旅行；
3. 谈谈你的感悟。
注意事项：
1. 词数 90 左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My Way of Travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose
答案
One possible version:
My Way of Travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose “in-person travel” because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.
First, travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with locals made me understand Chinese traditions better. Second, it's a chance to escape daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views.
Although “online tours” are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it's about living the moment.
My Way of Travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose “in-person travel” because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.
First, travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with locals made me understand Chinese traditions better. Second, it's a chance to escape daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views.
Although “online tours” are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it's about living the moment.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题类书面表达，要求围绕“云游”与“亲历”两种旅行方式选择其一写作。解题思路：1. 先明确选择（如选亲历旅行），并说明至少两点原因（如体验当地文化、创造难忘回忆）；2. 结合自身经历分享一次印象深刻的相关旅行（需具体事例，如北京之行）；3. 最后表达个人感悟，对比两种旅行方式，突出选择的意义。写作时需覆盖所有要点，符合词数要求，避免真实信息，保证语言通顺。
【解析】
1. 承接开头明确选择及原因：I choose “in-person travel” because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.
2. 阐述第一点原因并举例：First, travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with locals made me understand Chinese traditions better.
3. 阐述第二点原因并举例：Second, it's a chance to escape daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views.
4. 结尾表达感悟：Although “online tours” are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it's about living the moment.
【答案】
One possible version:
My Way of Travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose “in-person travel” because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.
First, travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with locals made me understand Chinese traditions better. Second, it's a chance to escape daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views.
Although “online tours” are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it's about living the moment.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、英语书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点：明确选择“亲历旅行”，给出两点具体合理的原因，分享了北京旅行的真实感事例，最后升华了对旅行意义的感悟；语言流畅自然，逻辑清晰，符合词数要求，未出现真实人名、校名等信息，是一篇符合标准的优秀书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语话题类书面表达，要求围绕“云游”与“亲历”两种旅行方式选择其一写作。解题思路：1. 先明确选择（如选亲历旅行），并说明至少两点原因（如体验当地文化、创造难忘回忆）；2. 结合自身经历分享一次印象深刻的相关旅行（需具体事例，如北京之行）；3. 最后表达个人感悟，对比两种旅行方式，突出选择的意义。写作时需覆盖所有要点，符合词数要求，避免真实信息，保证语言通顺。
【解析】
1. 承接开头明确选择及原因：I choose “in-person travel” because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.
2. 阐述第一点原因并举例：First, travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with locals made me understand Chinese traditions better.
3. 阐述第二点原因并举例：Second, it's a chance to escape daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views.
4. 结尾表达感悟：Although “online tours” are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it's about living the moment.
【答案】
One possible version:
My Way of Travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose “in-person travel” because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.
First, travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with locals made me understand Chinese traditions better. Second, it's a chance to escape daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views.
Although “online tours” are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it's about living the moment.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、英语书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点：明确选择“亲历旅行”，给出两点具体合理的原因，分享了北京旅行的真实感事例，最后升华了对旅行意义的感悟；语言流畅自然，逻辑清晰，符合词数要求，未出现真实人名、校名等信息，是一篇符合标准的优秀书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
