任务情境
假如你学校英文杂志社正在举办征文活动,请你介绍你最喜欢的音乐类型。根据以下内容要点写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1. 你最喜欢的音乐类型(列举一项)。
2. 分享你和音乐之间发生的故事,如音乐曾对你有帮助和影响等。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称为主
2. 时态:一般现在时为主
3. 结构:

素材积累
1. 主题词块
①摇滚乐/流行乐/民间音乐/古典音乐
②随着唱
③优美的歌词
④电吉他
⑤随着跳舞
⑥查明;发现
⑦擅长
⑧和……分享……
⑨触动心灵
⑩通过音乐交流
⑪(向某人)表示敬佩
⑫老老少少
⑬启发想象力
⑭交流情感
⑮发掘勇气
2. 句型仿写
①Chris began to show an interest in playing the piano when he was five years old. (教材p.65 4c)
句型:主语+一般过去时的句子+when引导的时间状语从句
仿写:当我上小学的时候,我开始对古典音乐感兴趣。
②I often sat next to my father while he showed me how to play a song. (教材p.69 3a)
句型:while引导时间状语从句
仿写:当我整理房间时,轻柔的音乐常常让我的日常琐事变得更令人愉悦。
③Music makes me happy when I am feeling sad, and it relaxes me when I am stressed. (教材p.69 3a)
句型:主语+make+宾语+宾语补足语+when引导的时间状语从句
仿写:当我面临学习或日常生活的压力时,古典音乐总能让我感到平静且专注。
连句成篇
假如你学校英文杂志社正在举办征文活动,请你介绍你最喜欢的音乐类型。根据以下内容要点写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1. 你最喜欢的音乐类型(列举一项)。
2. 分享你和音乐之间发生的故事,如音乐曾对你有帮助和影响等。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称为主
2. 时态:一般现在时为主
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①摇滚乐/流行乐/民间音乐/古典音乐
rock music / pop music / folk music / classical music
②随着唱
sing along to
③优美的歌词
beautiful lyrics
④电吉他
electric guitar
⑤随着跳舞
dance to
⑥查明;发现
find out
⑦擅长
be good at
⑧和……分享……
share ... with ...
⑨触动心灵
touch one's heart
⑩通过音乐交流
communicate through music
⑪(向某人)表示敬佩
hats off (to sb)
⑫老老少少
young and old
⑬启发想象力
inspire imagination
⑭交流情感
communicate emotions
⑮发掘勇气
find courage
2. 句型仿写
①Chris began to show an interest in playing the piano when he was five years old. (教材p.65 4c)
句型:主语+一般过去时的句子+when引导的时间状语从句
仿写:当我上小学的时候,我开始对古典音乐感兴趣。
I began to show an interest in classical music when I was in primary school.
②I often sat next to my father while he showed me how to play a song. (教材p.69 3a)
句型:while引导时间状语从句
仿写:当我整理房间时,轻柔的音乐常常让我的日常琐事变得更令人愉悦。
Soft music often makes my daily routines more enjoyable while I'm tidying my room.
③Music makes me happy when I am feeling sad, and it relaxes me when I am stressed. (教材p.69 3a)
句型:主语+make+宾语+宾语补足语+when引导的时间状语从句
仿写:当我面临学习或日常生活的压力时,古典音乐总能让我感到平静且专注。
Classical music always makes me feel peaceful and focused when I face pressure from studies or daily life.
连句成篇
I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. Personally, I like many kinds of music, such as country music, pop music, classical music and so on. But my favourite music is classical music.
For some people, they find classical music boring. However, I think classical music is beautiful, and it never fails to inspire me. Classical music always makes me feel peaceful and focused when I face pressure from studies or daily life. Besides, it adds more colour to my life and brings me a lot of joy. Most importantly, it keeps me relaxed. I'd like to share this kind of music with my mother. She is a music lover, but she's busy with her work all day. I think if she listens to some classical music after getting back home, she will feel more relaxed too. In a word, music plays an important role in my life. I love music.
答案
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①rock music / pop music / folk music / classical music
②sing along to
③beautiful lyrics
④electric guitar
⑤dance to
⑥ find out
⑦be good at
⑧share ... with ...
⑨touch one's heart
⑩communicate through music
⑪hats off (to sb)
⑫young and old
⑬inspire imagination
⑭communicate emotions
⑮find courage
2. 句型仿写
①I began to show an interest in classical music when I was in primary school.
②Soft music often makes my daily routines more enjoyable while I'm tidying my room.
③Classical music always makes me feel peaceful and focused when I face pressure from studies or daily life.
【连句成篇】
I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. Personally, I like many kinds of music, such as country music, pop music, classical music and so on. But my favourite music is classical music.
For some people, they find classical music boring. However, I think classical music is beautiful, and it never fails to inspire me. Classical music always makes me feel peaceful and focused when I face pressure from studies or daily life. Besides, it adds more colour to my life and brings me a lot of joy. Most importantly, it keeps me relaxed. I'd like to share this kind of music with my mother. She is a music lover, but she's busy with her work all day. I think if she listens to some classical music after getting back home, she will feel more relaxed too.
In a word, music plays an important role in my life. I love music.
1. 主题词块
①rock music / pop music / folk music / classical music
②sing along to
③beautiful lyrics
④electric guitar
⑤dance to
⑥ find out
⑦be good at
⑧share ... with ...
⑨touch one's heart
⑩communicate through music
⑪hats off (to sb)
⑫young and old
⑬inspire imagination
⑭communicate emotions
⑮find courage
2. 句型仿写
①I began to show an interest in classical music when I was in primary school.
②Soft music often makes my daily routines more enjoyable while I'm tidying my room.
③Classical music always makes me feel peaceful and focused when I face pressure from studies or daily life.
【连句成篇】
I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. Personally, I like many kinds of music, such as country music, pop music, classical music and so on. But my favourite music is classical music.
For some people, they find classical music boring. However, I think classical music is beautiful, and it never fails to inspire me. Classical music always makes me feel peaceful and focused when I face pressure from studies or daily life. Besides, it adds more colour to my life and brings me a lot of joy. Most importantly, it keeps me relaxed. I'd like to share this kind of music with my mother. She is a music lover, but she's busy with her work all day. I think if she listens to some classical music after getting back home, she will feel more relaxed too.
In a word, music plays an important role in my life. I love music.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语征文写作题,要求介绍最喜欢的音乐类型,需结合思维导图的结构(开篇点题、主体阐述故事、结尾总结),运用给定的主题词块和仿写句型,以第一人称为主、一般现在时为主。解题思路:第一步,开篇直接点明最喜欢的音乐类型;第二步,主体部分分享与该音乐相关的故事(如音乐对自己的帮助、和他人分享的经历),运用素材和仿写句型丰富内容;第三步,结尾总结音乐在生活中的重要性,呼应主题。
【解析】
写作时按思维导图搭建框架:1. 开篇点题:明确指出最喜欢的音乐是古典音乐,符合征文开头要求;2. 主体部分:先对比他人对古典音乐的看法突出自身喜爱,再用仿写句型说明古典音乐缓解压力的作用,加入和妈妈分享音乐的故事充实内容;3. 结尾总结:强调音乐的重要性升华主题。同时正确运用素材词块(如classical music、share...with...)和仿写句型,确保语法正确、内容连贯。
【答案】
I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. Personally, I like many kinds of music, such as country music, pop music, classical music and so on. But my favourite music is classical music.
For some people, they find classical music boring. However, I think classical music is beautiful, and it never fails to inspire me. Classical music always makes me feel peaceful and focused when I face pressure from studies or daily life. Besides, it adds more colour to my life and brings me a lot of joy. Most importantly, it keeps me relaxed. I'd like to share this kind of music with my mother. She is a music lover, but she's busy with her work all day. I think if she listens to some classical music after getting back home, she will feel more relaxed too.
In a word, music plays an important role in my life. I love music.
【知识点】
英语写作、英语词汇运用、英语句型仿写
【点评】
本文严格遵循题目要求和思维导图结构,开篇点题明确,主体内容充实,通过具体事例体现音乐的影响,结尾总结升华,正确运用给定素材和句型,语言流畅,符合初中英语写作要求,是优质范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语征文写作题,要求介绍最喜欢的音乐类型,需结合思维导图的结构(开篇点题、主体阐述故事、结尾总结),运用给定的主题词块和仿写句型,以第一人称为主、一般现在时为主。解题思路:第一步,开篇直接点明最喜欢的音乐类型;第二步,主体部分分享与该音乐相关的故事(如音乐对自己的帮助、和他人分享的经历),运用素材和仿写句型丰富内容;第三步,结尾总结音乐在生活中的重要性,呼应主题。
【解析】
写作时按思维导图搭建框架:1. 开篇点题:明确指出最喜欢的音乐是古典音乐,符合征文开头要求;2. 主体部分:先对比他人对古典音乐的看法突出自身喜爱,再用仿写句型说明古典音乐缓解压力的作用,加入和妈妈分享音乐的故事充实内容;3. 结尾总结:强调音乐的重要性升华主题。同时正确运用素材词块(如classical music、share...with...)和仿写句型,确保语法正确、内容连贯。
【答案】
I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. Personally, I like many kinds of music, such as country music, pop music, classical music and so on. But my favourite music is classical music.
For some people, they find classical music boring. However, I think classical music is beautiful, and it never fails to inspire me. Classical music always makes me feel peaceful and focused when I face pressure from studies or daily life. Besides, it adds more colour to my life and brings me a lot of joy. Most importantly, it keeps me relaxed. I'd like to share this kind of music with my mother. She is a music lover, but she's busy with her work all day. I think if she listens to some classical music after getting back home, she will feel more relaxed too.
In a word, music plays an important role in my life. I love music.
【知识点】
英语写作、英语词汇运用、英语句型仿写
【点评】
本文严格遵循题目要求和思维导图结构,开篇点题明确,主体内容充实,通过具体事例体现音乐的影响,结尾总结升华,正确运用给定素材和句型,语言流畅,符合初中英语写作要求,是优质范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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