51. 上文介绍了家庭日的由来、习俗与各类家庭庆祝活动,让我们懂得陪伴家人意义重大。请你以“The Happy Time with My Family”为题写一篇英语短文,分享平日里你和家人共度的快乐时光。要点如下:
(1)什么时候是你和家人共度的快乐时光;
(2)一次与家人共度快乐时光的经历;
(3)总结和感悟。
注意:
(1)不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名;
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。
The Happy Time with My Family
(1)什么时候是你和家人共度的快乐时光;
(2)一次与家人共度快乐时光的经历;
(3)总结和感悟。
注意:
(1)不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名;
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。
The Happy Time with My Family
答案
51. 参考范文:
The Happy Time with My Family
I always feel happy and relaxed when I am with my family.
Last Sunday, I went to fly kites with my family in the park. It was sunny and windy. While flying kites, we ran and ran until our kites flew higher and higher. There were many kites in the sky. They were colourful and in different shapes. We ran freely with the kites. Then we had a great picnic. We talked and laughed happily. What an amazing day!
We spent an enjoyable and unforgettable day. It helped me understand my parents better and show my true love to them.
The Happy Time with My Family
I always feel happy and relaxed when I am with my family.
Last Sunday, I went to fly kites with my family in the park. It was sunny and windy. While flying kites, we ran and ran until our kites flew higher and higher. There were many kites in the sky. They were colourful and in different shapes. We ran freely with the kites. Then we had a great picnic. We talked and laughed happily. What an amazing day!
We spent an enjoyable and unforgettable day. It helped me understand my parents better and show my true love to them.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“The Happy Time with My Family”为题写英语短文,需涵盖三个核心要点:一是点明与家人共度快乐时光的相关时间,二是分享一次具体的快乐经历,三是总结感悟。写作时需先开篇点题,引出和家人相处的快乐氛围,再选取典型事例(如周末户外出行)详细描述过程,最后升华主题表达陪伴的意义,同时要注意词数控制、语句连贯,避免出现真实个人信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开篇:直接点明和家人在一起时的快乐感受,引出短文主题;
2. 中间:选取一次具体经历(如上周日和家人去公园放风筝、野餐),描述时间、天气及活动细节,体现相处的快乐;
3. 结尾:总结此次经历的意义,表达对家人的爱与对陪伴价值的理解,确保语句连贯,词数符合要求。
【答案】
The Happy Time with My Family
I always feel happy and relaxed when I am with my family.
Last Sunday, I went to fly kites with my family in the park. It was sunny and windy. While flying kites, we ran and ran until our kites flew higher and higher. There were many kites in the sky. They were colourful and in different shapes. We ran freely with the kites. Then we had a great picnic. We talked and laughed happily. What an amazing day!
We spent an enjoyable and unforgettable day. It helped me understand my parents better and show my true love to them.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、要点式书面表达、英语语句连贯
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目所有要点,结构清晰,事例具体生动,语言简洁流畅,情感真挚,符合词数要求,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文,适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“The Happy Time with My Family”为题写英语短文,需涵盖三个核心要点:一是点明与家人共度快乐时光的相关时间,二是分享一次具体的快乐经历,三是总结感悟。写作时需先开篇点题,引出和家人相处的快乐氛围,再选取典型事例(如周末户外出行)详细描述过程,最后升华主题表达陪伴的意义,同时要注意词数控制、语句连贯,避免出现真实个人信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开篇:直接点明和家人在一起时的快乐感受,引出短文主题;
2. 中间:选取一次具体经历(如上周日和家人去公园放风筝、野餐),描述时间、天气及活动细节,体现相处的快乐;
3. 结尾:总结此次经历的意义,表达对家人的爱与对陪伴价值的理解,确保语句连贯,词数符合要求。
【答案】
The Happy Time with My Family
I always feel happy and relaxed when I am with my family.
Last Sunday, I went to fly kites with my family in the park. It was sunny and windy. While flying kites, we ran and ran until our kites flew higher and higher. There were many kites in the sky. They were colourful and in different shapes. We ran freely with the kites. Then we had a great picnic. We talked and laughed happily. What an amazing day!
We spent an enjoyable and unforgettable day. It helped me understand my parents better and show my true love to them.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、要点式书面表达、英语语句连贯
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目所有要点,结构清晰,事例具体生动,语言简洁流畅,情感真挚,符合词数要求,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文,适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.6
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