2026年新课堂同步学习与探究六年级英语上册人教版第16页答案
十、书面表达。
学校正在组织以“我精彩的假期生活”为题的英语征文比赛。去年你在国内参观了许多著名景点,请写一篇文章参加比赛。要求:说明参观了哪里,在那里做了什么。不少于5句话。




答案

My wonderful holiday life
Last summer vacation, I had a very happy trip with my family. We went to lots of famous places in China. First, we visited Beijing. We climbed the Great Wall and took many nice photos there. Then we went to Chengdu. We saw cute pandas and ate tasty local food. We also travelled to Guilin, the hills and rivers there are so beautiful. I really enjoyed my wonderful holiday last year.

解析

【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,主题是“我精彩的假期生活”,要求围绕去年国内参观著名景点展开,需说明参观地点及对应活动,且不少于5句话。解题思路:1. 确定时态:描述过去的假期活动,需用一般过去时;2. 构思内容:开头点题说明假期情况,中间分述不同景点的具体活动,结尾表达对假期的感受;3. 组织语句:确保内容紧扣要求,语句连贯,满足句数要求。
【解析】1. 时态选择:全文采用一般过去时,体现过去发生的假期活动;2. 结构搭建:开头点明主题“My wonderful holiday life”,说明去年和家人去国内景点;中间依次介绍北京(爬长城、拍照)、成都(看熊猫、吃美食)、桂林(赏山水)的活动;结尾表达对假期的喜爱;3. 内容完善:确保句子数量不少于5句,语言准确流畅,符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】My wonderful holiday life
Last summer vacation, I had a very happy trip with my family. We went to lots of famous places in China. First, we visited Beijing. We climbed the Great Wall and took many nice photos there. Then we went to Chengdu. We saw cute pandas and ate tasty local food. We also travelled to Guilin, the hills and rivers there are so beautiful. I really enjoyed my wonderful holiday last year.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时运用、话题作文
【点评】该范文紧扣征文主题,时态正确,内容具体详实,清晰呈现了去年国内假期参观的景点及相关活动,结构清晰,语句通顺,符合题目要求,是一篇优秀的参赛作文。
【难度系数】0.4