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七、书面表达。
你校将开展“优秀志愿者”事迹分享会。假定你是李华，作为优秀志愿者，要为该活动准备一篇发言稿。请以“Work as a Volunteer”为主题，用英文写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1. the importance of volunteering
2. your experience as a volunteer
3. what you have learned from it
要求：
1. 词数不少于90，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等个人信息。
Hello, everyone!
I am Li Hua. Today my topic is "Work as a Volunteer". I am glad to share my volunteer story with you.
Thank you!
你校将开展“优秀志愿者”事迹分享会。假定你是李华，作为优秀志愿者，要为该活动准备一篇发言稿。请以“Work as a Volunteer”为主题，用英文写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1. the importance of volunteering
2. your experience as a volunteer
3. what you have learned from it
要求：
1. 词数不少于90，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等个人信息。
Hello, everyone!
I am Li Hua. Today my topic is "Work as a Volunteer". I am glad to share my volunteer story with you.
Volunteering is really meaningful. It not only gives me a chance to do something helpful but also makes me understand the importance of love and responsibility. Last month, my friends and I volunteered at a nursing home. The moment we arrived, we noticed that many elderly people suffered from loneliness. So, we actively chatted with them, always keeping warm eye contact and wearing friendly smiles. Besides chatting, we taught them to do simple exercises and make beautiful paper-cuttings. We brought joy and peace to their days and truly raised their spirits. From this experience, I have realized a kind word and a bright smile can easily pass on love and warmth. We can do some voluntary work to help people in need and live a more meaningful life!
Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
Hello, everyone!
I am Li Hua. Today my topic is "Work as a Volunteer". I am glad to share my volunteer story with you. Volunteering is really meaningful. It not only gives me a chance to do something helpful but also makes me understand the importance of love and responsibility.
Last month, my friends and I volunteered at a nursing home. The moment we arrived, we noticed that many elderly people suffered from loneliness. So, we actively chatted with them, always keeping warm eye contact and wearing friendly smiles. Besides chatting, we taught them to do simple exercises and make beautiful paper-cuttings. We brought joy and peace to their days and truly raised their spirits.
From this experience, I have realized a kind word and a bright smile can easily pass on love and warmth. We can do some voluntary work to help people in need and live a more meaningful life!
Thank you!
Hello, everyone!
I am Li Hua. Today my topic is "Work as a Volunteer". I am glad to share my volunteer story with you. Volunteering is really meaningful. It not only gives me a chance to do something helpful but also makes me understand the importance of love and responsibility.
Last month, my friends and I volunteered at a nursing home. The moment we arrived, we noticed that many elderly people suffered from loneliness. So, we actively chatted with them, always keeping warm eye contact and wearing friendly smiles. Besides chatting, we taught them to do simple exercises and make beautiful paper-cuttings. We brought joy and peace to their days and truly raised their spirits.
From this experience, I have realized a kind word and a bright smile can easily pass on love and warmth. We can do some voluntary work to help people in need and live a more meaningful life!
Thank you!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确文体是校内事迹分享会的主题发言稿，整体语气要亲切真诚，符合面向师生分享的场景。接下来对应题干给出的三个必写要点搭建写作框架：第一部分承接题干给出的开头，从对他人的价值、对自身成长的作用两个角度切入，阐述志愿服务的重要性，开门见山点出志愿活动的意义。第二部分选取一件贴近中学生日常、真实感强的志愿经历，补充具体行动细节，避免内容空洞。第三部分从志愿经历中提炼出对善意、责任的个人感悟，适当发出小号召完成主题升华。写作过程中要注意避开真实人名校名，保证总词数超过90，时态搭配合理：讲重要性用一般现在时，讲过往经历用一般过去时，讲收获感悟用现在完成时或一般现在时即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：明确写作主题为"Work as a Volunteer"，三个核心要点缺一不可，人称以第一人称I为主，行文要符合发言稿自然流畅的口语表达习惯。
2. 搭建结构：
① 第一模块（对应要点1）：承接开头，直接点明志愿服务的意义，用not only...but also的结构点明志愿既能为他人提供帮助，也能让自身理解爱与责任的重要性。
② 第二模块（对应要点2）：选取去养老院做志愿的生活化经历，交代时间、同行人员、具体行动：陪老人聊天、教老人做简单运动、制作剪纸，写出活动为老人带去欢乐的实际效果，细节饱满有代入感。
③ 第三模块（对应要点3）：从这段经历提炼感悟，说明小小的善意和微笑就能传递温暖，呼吁大家参与志愿，收获更有意义的生活，完成主题升华。
3. 检查调整：核对所有要点全部覆盖，没有出现真实个人信息，词数符合要求，衔接词使用恰当，逻辑通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone!
I am Li Hua. Today my topic is "Work as a Volunteer". I am glad to share my volunteer story with you. Volunteering is really meaningful. It not only gives me a chance to do something helpful but also makes me understand the importance of love and responsibility.
Last month, my friends and I volunteered at a nursing home. The moment we arrived, we noticed that many elderly people suffered from loneliness. So, we actively chatted with them, always keeping warm eye contact and wearing friendly smiles. Besides chatting, we taught them to do simple exercises and make beautiful paper-cuttings. We brought joy and peace to their days and truly raised their spirits.
From this experience, I have realized a kind word and a bright smile can easily pass on love and warmth. We can do some voluntary work to help people in need and live a more meaningful life!
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语发言稿写作，主题书面表达，时态综合运用
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖题干要求的全部三个要点，选取的养老院志愿经历细节充实、情感真挚，没有空泛套话，行文使用the moment、besides等衔接词让逻辑流畅自然，时态使用准确，完全符合发言稿亲切正式的分享语境，词数达标，结尾的主题升华也让文章立意更突出，非常适合学生参考模仿，写作时要注意避免遗漏要点，尽量补充具体细节来提升文章质感。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确文体是校内事迹分享会的主题发言稿，整体语气要亲切真诚，符合面向师生分享的场景。接下来对应题干给出的三个必写要点搭建写作框架：第一部分承接题干给出的开头，从对他人的价值、对自身成长的作用两个角度切入，阐述志愿服务的重要性，开门见山点出志愿活动的意义。第二部分选取一件贴近中学生日常、真实感强的志愿经历，补充具体行动细节，避免内容空洞。第三部分从志愿经历中提炼出对善意、责任的个人感悟，适当发出小号召完成主题升华。写作过程中要注意避开真实人名校名，保证总词数超过90，时态搭配合理：讲重要性用一般现在时，讲过往经历用一般过去时，讲收获感悟用现在完成时或一般现在时即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：明确写作主题为"Work as a Volunteer"，三个核心要点缺一不可，人称以第一人称I为主，行文要符合发言稿自然流畅的口语表达习惯。
2. 搭建结构：
① 第一模块（对应要点1）：承接开头，直接点明志愿服务的意义，用not only...but also的结构点明志愿既能为他人提供帮助，也能让自身理解爱与责任的重要性。
② 第二模块（对应要点2）：选取去养老院做志愿的生活化经历，交代时间、同行人员、具体行动：陪老人聊天、教老人做简单运动、制作剪纸，写出活动为老人带去欢乐的实际效果，细节饱满有代入感。
③ 第三模块（对应要点3）：从这段经历提炼感悟，说明小小的善意和微笑就能传递温暖，呼吁大家参与志愿，收获更有意义的生活，完成主题升华。
3. 检查调整：核对所有要点全部覆盖，没有出现真实个人信息，词数符合要求，衔接词使用恰当，逻辑通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone!
I am Li Hua. Today my topic is "Work as a Volunteer". I am glad to share my volunteer story with you. Volunteering is really meaningful. It not only gives me a chance to do something helpful but also makes me understand the importance of love and responsibility.
Last month, my friends and I volunteered at a nursing home. The moment we arrived, we noticed that many elderly people suffered from loneliness. So, we actively chatted with them, always keeping warm eye contact and wearing friendly smiles. Besides chatting, we taught them to do simple exercises and make beautiful paper-cuttings. We brought joy and peace to their days and truly raised their spirits.
From this experience, I have realized a kind word and a bright smile can easily pass on love and warmth. We can do some voluntary work to help people in need and live a more meaningful life!
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语发言稿写作，主题书面表达，时态综合运用
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖题干要求的全部三个要点，选取的养老院志愿经历细节充实、情感真挚，没有空泛套话，行文使用the moment、besides等衔接词让逻辑流畅自然，时态使用准确，完全符合发言稿亲切正式的分享语境，词数达标，结尾的主题升华也让文章立意更突出，非常适合学生参考模仿，写作时要注意避免遗漏要点，尽量补充具体细节来提升文章质感。
【难度系数】
0.6
