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五、书面表达。
22. 你们学校即将举办“健康校园周”活动。你将作为健康宣传员,写一篇英文健康宣传稿。请以“Time to Protect Our
It's important to protect our
22. 你们学校即将举办“健康校园周”活动。你将作为健康宣传员,写一篇英文健康宣传稿。请以“Time to Protect Our
Eyes
”为题,向全校同学介绍一种常见的健康问题,需要阐述问题的可能成因、症状、预防方法及重要性。你也可以参考以下表格,选择对视力保护问题进行宣传。要求:1. 80 至 100 词；2. 尽量使用本单元学过的词汇和句型。It's important to protect our
eyes
As the window to the world, they allow us to enjoy the beauty of nature, read wonderful books, and communicate with others. However,many students have bad habits that harm their eyesight. For example,they use phones or iPads for too long, read in poor light or do not give their eyes enough rest. These habits often lead to uncomfortable symptoms such as dry eyes and redness in the eyes,and may even cause our vision to get worse over time.
To protect our eyes, we should take the following steps. First, we should reduce screen time and take regular breaks. Second, doing eye exercises every day is also necessary. Additionally,we can eat more healthy foods that are good for our eyes,like carrots and fish. And we need to make sure we have enough sleep. Let's take action today to keep our eyes healthy and enjoy a bright world!
答案
五、22. Time to Protect Our Eyes
It's important to protect our eyes. As the
window to the world, they allow us to enjoy the
beauty of nature, read wonderful books, and
communicate with others. However,many students
have bad habits that harm their eyesight. For
example,they use phones or iPads for too long,
read in poor light or do not give their eyes enough
rest. These habits often lead to uncomfortable
symptoms such as dry eyes and redness in the
eyes,and may even cause our vision to get worse
over time.
To protect our eyes, we should take the
following steps. First, we should reduce screen
time and take regular breaks. Second, doing eye
exercises every day is also necessary.
Additionally,we can eat more healthy foods that
are good for our eyes,like carrots and fish. And
we need to make sure we have enough sleep.
Let's take action today to keep our eyes
healthy and enjoy a bright world!
It's important to protect our eyes. As the
window to the world, they allow us to enjoy the
beauty of nature, read wonderful books, and
communicate with others. However,many students
have bad habits that harm their eyesight. For
example,they use phones or iPads for too long,
read in poor light or do not give their eyes enough
rest. These habits often lead to uncomfortable
symptoms such as dry eyes and redness in the
eyes,and may even cause our vision to get worse
over time.
To protect our eyes, we should take the
following steps. First, we should reduce screen
time and take regular breaks. Second, doing eye
exercises every day is also necessary.
Additionally,we can eat more healthy foods that
are good for our eyes,like carrots and fish. And
we need to make sure we have enough sleep.
Let's take action today to keep our eyes
healthy and enjoy a bright world!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确写作方向，结合给出的参考表格，我们选择视力保护作为宣传主题，先把半命题标题补全为Time to Protect Our Eyes。接下来按照逻辑顺序梳理内容：首先开篇点明保护眼睛的重要性，把表格里“眼睛是通往世界的窗口、帮我们欣赏自然之美”的要点先落地；之后转折引出当前很多学生存在的伤眼坏习惯，对应表格里长时间使用手机/平板、在昏暗光线下阅读的内容，顺理成章说明这些坏习惯会带来眼干、眼睛发红等不适，甚至造成视力下降；再结合表格提示给出减少屏幕时长、做眼保健操等护眼建议，适当补充合理细节让内容更充实；最后收尾发出护眼呼吁，控制词数符合要求，尽量使用本单元学过的健康类词汇和提建议的句型即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 补全标题：结合参考素材确定核心主题为视力保护，将半命题题目补充完整为Time to Protect Our Eyes。
2. 开篇引入：直接点明保护眼睛的重要性，结合提示信息说明眼睛是我们观察世界的窗口，能帮助我们欣赏自然美景、阅读好书、和他人正常交流，点明护眼的核心意义。
3. 阐述现存问题：转折引出很多学生存在损害视力的不良习惯，列举长时间使用手机、iPad，在光线差的环境阅读，不给眼睛留足够休息时间等行为，说明这些习惯会引发眼干、眼睛发红等不适症状，长期下来还会让视力持续下降。
4. 给出可行建议：分点介绍护眼方案，首先要减少屏幕使用时长、定时休息，其次每天坚持做眼保健操，还可以多吃胡萝卜、鱼类这类对眼睛有益的食物，同时保证充足睡眠。
5. 结尾呼吁：号召大家立刻行动起来，保持眼部健康，拥抱明亮的世界，完成全篇内容。
【答案】
Time to Protect Our Eyes
It's important to protect our eyes. As the window to the world, they allow us to enjoy the beauty of nature, read wonderful books, and communicate with others. However,many students have bad habits that harm their eyesight. For example,they use phones or iPads for too long, read in poor light or do not give their eyes enough rest. These habits often lead to uncomfortable symptoms such as dry eyes and redness in the eyes,and may even cause our vision to get worse over time.
To protect our eyes, we should take the following steps. First, we should reduce screen time and take regular breaks. Second, doing eye exercises every day is also necessary. Additionally,we can eat more healthy foods that are good for our eyes,like carrots and fish. And we need to make sure we have enough sleep.
Let's take action today to keep our eyes healthy and enjoy a bright world!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
健康话题表达
宣传文稿书写
【点评】
本篇宣传稿完整覆盖了题干和参考表格给出的所有核心要点，行文逻辑清晰，从护眼的重要性切入，依次介绍不良用眼习惯、对应的不适症状，再给出可落地的护眼建议，最后发出行动呼吁，完全贴合校园健康宣传员的身份场景，补充的护眼食物、充足睡眠等细节让内容更真实可信，语句通顺自然，符合初中英语的写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先要明确写作方向，结合给出的参考表格，我们选择视力保护作为宣传主题，先把半命题标题补全为Time to Protect Our Eyes。接下来按照逻辑顺序梳理内容：首先开篇点明保护眼睛的重要性，把表格里“眼睛是通往世界的窗口、帮我们欣赏自然之美”的要点先落地；之后转折引出当前很多学生存在的伤眼坏习惯，对应表格里长时间使用手机/平板、在昏暗光线下阅读的内容，顺理成章说明这些坏习惯会带来眼干、眼睛发红等不适，甚至造成视力下降；再结合表格提示给出减少屏幕时长、做眼保健操等护眼建议，适当补充合理细节让内容更充实；最后收尾发出护眼呼吁，控制词数符合要求，尽量使用本单元学过的健康类词汇和提建议的句型即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 补全标题：结合参考素材确定核心主题为视力保护，将半命题题目补充完整为Time to Protect Our Eyes。
2. 开篇引入：直接点明保护眼睛的重要性，结合提示信息说明眼睛是我们观察世界的窗口，能帮助我们欣赏自然美景、阅读好书、和他人正常交流，点明护眼的核心意义。
3. 阐述现存问题：转折引出很多学生存在损害视力的不良习惯，列举长时间使用手机、iPad，在光线差的环境阅读，不给眼睛留足够休息时间等行为，说明这些习惯会引发眼干、眼睛发红等不适症状，长期下来还会让视力持续下降。
4. 给出可行建议：分点介绍护眼方案，首先要减少屏幕使用时长、定时休息，其次每天坚持做眼保健操，还可以多吃胡萝卜、鱼类这类对眼睛有益的食物，同时保证充足睡眠。
5. 结尾呼吁：号召大家立刻行动起来，保持眼部健康，拥抱明亮的世界，完成全篇内容。
【答案】
Time to Protect Our Eyes
It's important to protect our eyes. As the window to the world, they allow us to enjoy the beauty of nature, read wonderful books, and communicate with others. However,many students have bad habits that harm their eyesight. For example,they use phones or iPads for too long, read in poor light or do not give their eyes enough rest. These habits often lead to uncomfortable symptoms such as dry eyes and redness in the eyes,and may even cause our vision to get worse over time.
To protect our eyes, we should take the following steps. First, we should reduce screen time and take regular breaks. Second, doing eye exercises every day is also necessary. Additionally,we can eat more healthy foods that are good for our eyes,like carrots and fish. And we need to make sure we have enough sleep.
Let's take action today to keep our eyes healthy and enjoy a bright world!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
健康话题表达
宣传文稿书写
【点评】
本篇宣传稿完整覆盖了题干和参考表格给出的所有核心要点，行文逻辑清晰，从护眼的重要性切入，依次介绍不良用眼习惯、对应的不适症状，再给出可落地的护眼建议，最后发出行动呼吁，完全贴合校园健康宣传员的身份场景，补充的护眼食物、充足睡眠等细节让内容更真实可信，语句通顺自然，符合初中英语的写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
