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请根据以下信息，以“The seasons of the year”为题，写一篇英语短文。
【要求】1. 不要写成诗歌，词数90左右。
2. 不要遗漏任何要点，句子表达正确，行文连贯。
请根据以下信息，以“The seasons of the year”为题，写一篇英语短文。
【要求】1. 不要写成诗歌，词数90左右。
2. 不要遗漏任何要点，句子表达正确，行文连贯。
答案
The seasons of the year
There are four different seasons in a year, and each of them brings us special pleasure.
Spring is usually windy with bright sunshine. It is a good time for children to fly kites in the open air.
Summer is very hot. People love to swim to feel cool, and eating sweet ice cream is always a great joy in this season.
In autumn, leaves turn yellow and farmers are busy harvesting crops. It is a busy but wonderful season.
Winter is cold. We all need to wear thick clothes to keep warm. When it snows, we can make a snowman with our good friends.
There are four different seasons in a year, and each of them brings us special pleasure.
Spring is usually windy with bright sunshine. It is a good time for children to fly kites in the open air.
Summer is very hot. People love to swim to feel cool, and eating sweet ice cream is always a great joy in this season.
In autumn, leaves turn yellow and farmers are busy harvesting crops. It is a busy but wonderful season.
Winter is cold. We all need to wear thick clothes to keep warm. When it snows, we can make a snowman with our good friends.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“The seasons of the year”，需围绕表格中四季的天气、特征及对应活动展开。第一步，开篇总述一年有四个季节，引出主题；第二步，分别描述每个季节：春季的天气（多风、晴朗）和活动（放风筝），夏季的天气（炎热）和活动（游泳、吃冰淇淋），秋季的特征（树叶变黄、收割庄稼），冬季的天气（寒冷）和活动（穿厚衣服、堆雪人）。需确保句子表达正确，行文连贯，词数控制在90左右，不遗漏任何要点。
【解析】
按照写作思路，先总起，再分述四季：
1. 开篇：There are four different seasons in a year, and each of them brings us special pleasure.
2. 春季：Spring is usually windy with bright sunshine. It is a good time for children to fly kites in the open air.
3. 夏季：Summer is very hot. People love to swim to feel cool, and eating sweet ice cream is always a great joy in this season.
4. 秋季：In autumn, leaves turn yellow and farmers are busy harvesting crops. It is a busy but wonderful season.
5. 冬季：Winter is cold. We all need to wear thick clothes to keep warm. When it snows, we can make a snowman with our good friends.
整体衔接自然，涵盖所有要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】
The seasons of the year
There are four different seasons in a year, and each of them brings us special pleasure.
Spring is usually windy with bright sunshine. It is a good time for children to fly kites in the open air.
Summer is very hot. People love to swim to feel cool, and eating sweet ice cream is always a great joy in this season.
In autumn, leaves turn yellow and farmers are busy harvesting crops. It is a busy but wonderful season.
Winter is cold. We all need to wear thick clothes to keep warm. When it snows, we can make a snowman with our good friends.
【知识点】
英语写作、季节话题词汇、句子连贯表达
【点评】
本题考查季节话题的英语短文写作，要求结合给定信息，语言准确连贯，难度适中，适合基础阶段学生练习，能有效考查学生的词汇运用和篇章组织能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作主题为“The seasons of the year”，需围绕表格中四季的天气、特征及对应活动展开。第一步，开篇总述一年有四个季节，引出主题；第二步，分别描述每个季节：春季的天气（多风、晴朗）和活动（放风筝），夏季的天气（炎热）和活动（游泳、吃冰淇淋），秋季的特征（树叶变黄、收割庄稼），冬季的天气（寒冷）和活动（穿厚衣服、堆雪人）。需确保句子表达正确，行文连贯，词数控制在90左右，不遗漏任何要点。
【解析】
按照写作思路，先总起，再分述四季：
1. 开篇：There are four different seasons in a year, and each of them brings us special pleasure.
2. 春季：Spring is usually windy with bright sunshine. It is a good time for children to fly kites in the open air.
3. 夏季：Summer is very hot. People love to swim to feel cool, and eating sweet ice cream is always a great joy in this season.
4. 秋季：In autumn, leaves turn yellow and farmers are busy harvesting crops. It is a busy but wonderful season.
5. 冬季：Winter is cold. We all need to wear thick clothes to keep warm. When it snows, we can make a snowman with our good friends.
整体衔接自然，涵盖所有要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】
The seasons of the year
There are four different seasons in a year, and each of them brings us special pleasure.
Spring is usually windy with bright sunshine. It is a good time for children to fly kites in the open air.
Summer is very hot. People love to swim to feel cool, and eating sweet ice cream is always a great joy in this season.
In autumn, leaves turn yellow and farmers are busy harvesting crops. It is a busy but wonderful season.
Winter is cold. We all need to wear thick clothes to keep warm. When it snows, we can make a snowman with our good friends.
【知识点】
英语写作、季节话题词汇、句子连贯表达
【点评】
本题考查季节话题的英语短文写作，要求结合给定信息，语言准确连贯，难度适中，适合基础阶段学生练习，能有效考查学生的词汇运用和篇章组织能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
