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Ⅵ. 英语课上，老师邀请你们分享自己的新年计划。请你以 “My New Year’s Resolutions” 为题，根据下面的表格写一篇不少于80词的短文，可围绕主题适当发挥。
My New Year’s Resolutions
My New Year’s Resolutions
答案
One possible version：
My New Year’s Resolutions
The New Year is coming. It's a time for me to write down my New Year's resolutions.
The first resolution is about improving my relationship with my family. I am going to spend more time with my parents and help them with housework. I am also going to remember their birthdays and listen to them more. The second one has to do with physical health. I am going to form the habit of going to bed early and getting up early to get enough sleep. I am also going to do lots of exercise to keep fit. The third one is about how to do better at school. I'm going to make a weekly plan for my schoolwork and listen to teachers carefully in class. The last one is about self-improvement. I am going to learn to play an instrument because I like music very much. I'm going to practise it every day.
I believe I will make my resolutions come true if I try my best.
My New Year’s Resolutions
The New Year is coming. It's a time for me to write down my New Year's resolutions.
The first resolution is about improving my relationship with my family. I am going to spend more time with my parents and help them with housework. I am also going to remember their birthdays and listen to them more. The second one has to do with physical health. I am going to form the habit of going to bed early and getting up early to get enough sleep. I am also going to do lots of exercise to keep fit. The third one is about how to do better at school. I'm going to make a weekly plan for my schoolwork and listen to teachers carefully in class. The last one is about self-improvement. I am going to learn to play an instrument because I like music very much. I'm going to practise it every day.
I believe I will make my resolutions come true if I try my best.
解析
【分析】首先审题，明确主题是“My New Year’s Resolutions”，要求根据表格的四个维度（健康、学习、社交生活、个人成长）写不少于80词的短文，可适当发挥。解题思路：先开头引出新年制定计划的意义，再分四个部分对应表格内容，每个部分补充合理细节，最后结尾表达实现计划的决心，确保覆盖所有要点且语言通顺。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头：点明新年到来，是制定新年计划的时机；2. 健康维度：对应表格的锻炼、足够睡眠，补充早睡早起、保持锻炼等细节；3. 学习维度：对应认真听课、做周计划，补充课堂专注听讲、制定学习周计划等内容；4. 社交维度：对应多陪家人，补充帮父母做家务等细节；5. 个人成长维度：对应学新技能，比如学乐器；6. 结尾：表达会努力实现计划的信心，确保总词数达标。
【答案】One possible version：
My New Year’s Resolutions
The New Year is coming. It's a time for me to write down my New Year's resolutions.
The first resolution is about improving my relationship with my family. I am going to spend more time with my parents and help them with housework. I am also going to remember their birthdays and listen to them more. The second one has to do with physical health. I am going to form the habit of going to bed early and getting up early to get enough sleep. I am also going to do lots of exercise to keep fit. The third one is about how to do better at school. I'm going to make a weekly plan for my schoolwork and listen to teachers carefully in class. The last one is about self-improvement. I am going to learn to play an instrument because I like music very much. I'm going to practise it every day.
I believe I will make my resolutions come true if I try my best.
【知识点】英语应用文写作；要点整合写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，覆盖了表格所有要点，结构清晰，层次分明，适当补充细节丰富内容，语言通顺流畅，符合英语写作要求。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头：点明新年到来，是制定新年计划的时机；2. 健康维度：对应表格的锻炼、足够睡眠，补充早睡早起、保持锻炼等细节；3. 学习维度：对应认真听课、做周计划，补充课堂专注听讲、制定学习周计划等内容；4. 社交维度：对应多陪家人，补充帮父母做家务等细节；5. 个人成长维度：对应学新技能，比如学乐器；6. 结尾：表达会努力实现计划的信心，确保总词数达标。
【答案】One possible version：
My New Year’s Resolutions
The New Year is coming. It's a time for me to write down my New Year's resolutions.
The first resolution is about improving my relationship with my family. I am going to spend more time with my parents and help them with housework. I am also going to remember their birthdays and listen to them more. The second one has to do with physical health. I am going to form the habit of going to bed early and getting up early to get enough sleep. I am also going to do lots of exercise to keep fit. The third one is about how to do better at school. I'm going to make a weekly plan for my schoolwork and listen to teachers carefully in class. The last one is about self-improvement. I am going to learn to play an instrument because I like music very much. I'm going to practise it every day.
I believe I will make my resolutions come true if I try my best.
【知识点】英语应用文写作；要点整合写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，覆盖了表格所有要点，结构清晰，层次分明，适当补充细节丰富内容，语言通顺流畅，符合英语写作要求。
【难度系数】0.3
