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六、书面表达
（2025 苏州期末）新年在即，很多家庭都在计划春节活动和制订春节消费预算，或返回家乡，或朋友聚会，或全家出游。假设你是李华，你校英语社团将举办以“My family’s Spring Festival budget”为题的英文征文活动，请写一篇文章投稿。
内容应包括：
1. 你的春节消费预算；
2. 你对提前做好预算的看法。
注意：
1. 词数 90 左右；
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等信息。
My family’s Spring Festival budget
（2025 苏州期末）新年在即，很多家庭都在计划春节活动和制订春节消费预算，或返回家乡，或朋友聚会，或全家出游。假设你是李华，你校英语社团将举办以“My family’s Spring Festival budget”为题的英文征文活动，请写一篇文章投稿。
内容应包括：
1. 你的春节消费预算；
2. 你对提前做好预算的看法。
注意：
1. 词数 90 左右；
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等信息。
My family’s Spring Festival budget
The Spring Festival is around the corner. My family has made a budget for this special festival.
In our budget, 30% is used for gifts. We need to buy presents for our relatives and friends to express our love. About 25% is for dinners. During the Spring Festival, we will prepare some money for delicious meals because family reunions are essential.
Decorations take up 20%. We want to make our home full of festive atmosphere with beautiful lanterns, couplets and other decorations.
Travel accounts for 15%. We plan to take a short trip nearby to enjoy the holiday. The remaining 10% is for other things.
I think making a budget in advance is very important. It helps us manage our money reasonably and avoid overspending.
It allows us to have a clear plan and makes the Spring Festival more enjoyable and relaxing.
答案
六、One possible version:
My family's Spring Festival budget
The Spring Festival is around the corner. My family has made a budget for this special festival.
In our budget, 30% is used for gifts. We need to buy presents for our relatives and friends to express our love. About 25% is for dinners. During the Spring Festival, we will prepare some money for delicious meals because family reunions are essential. Decorations take up 20%. We want to make our home full of festive atmosphere with beautiful lanterns, couplets and other decorations. Travel accounts for 15%. We plan to take a short trip nearby to enjoy the holiday. The remaining 10% is for other things.
I think making a budget in advance is very important. It helps us manage our money reasonably and avoid overspending. It allows us to have a clear plan and makes the Spring Festival more enjoyable and relaxing.
My family's Spring Festival budget
The Spring Festival is around the corner. My family has made a budget for this special festival.
In our budget, 30% is used for gifts. We need to buy presents for our relatives and friends to express our love. About 25% is for dinners. During the Spring Festival, we will prepare some money for delicious meals because family reunions are essential. Decorations take up 20%. We want to make our home full of festive atmosphere with beautiful lanterns, couplets and other decorations. Travel accounts for 15%. We plan to take a short trip nearby to enjoy the holiday. The remaining 10% is for other things.
I think making a budget in advance is very important. It helps us manage our money reasonably and avoid overspending. It allows us to have a clear plan and makes the Spring Festival more enjoyable and relaxing.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“My family’s Spring Festival budget”。解题思路：首先明确写作要求，需包含春节消费预算的具体分配及对提前做预算的看法；其次结合思维导图的提示（礼物、晚餐、装饰、旅行、其他）规划预算比例，为每个部分补充合理原因；最后阐述提前做预算的好处，使文章结构完整、内容贴合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明春节将至，家庭已制定春节预算；2. 分述预算的各项分配：礼物占30%（用于给亲友买礼物表达心意）、晚餐占25%（用于准备团聚的美食）、装饰占20%（用于营造节日氛围）、旅行占15%（用于短途出游）、剩余10%用于其他事项；3. 结尾说明提前做预算的重要性，即合理管理资金、避免超支，让节日更轻松愉快。
【答案】
My family's Spring Festival budget
The Spring Festival is around the corner. My family has made a budget for this special festival.
In our budget, 30% is used for gifts. We need to buy presents for our relatives and friends to express our love. About 25% is for dinners. During the Spring Festival, we will prepare some money for delicious meals because family reunions are essential. Decorations take up 20%. We want to make our home full of festive atmosphere with beautiful lanterns, couplets and other decorations. Travel accounts for 15%. We plan to take a short trip nearby to enjoy the holiday. The remaining 10% is for other things.
I think making a budget in advance is very important. It helps us manage our money reasonably and avoid overspending. It allows us to have a clear plan and makes the Spring Festival more enjoyable and relaxing.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、节日话题表达、预算相关词汇
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的两个内容要点，预算分配结合思维导图提示且理由合理，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“My family’s Spring Festival budget”。解题思路：首先明确写作要求，需包含春节消费预算的具体分配及对提前做预算的看法；其次结合思维导图的提示（礼物、晚餐、装饰、旅行、其他）规划预算比例，为每个部分补充合理原因；最后阐述提前做预算的好处，使文章结构完整、内容贴合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明春节将至，家庭已制定春节预算；2. 分述预算的各项分配：礼物占30%（用于给亲友买礼物表达心意）、晚餐占25%（用于准备团聚的美食）、装饰占20%（用于营造节日氛围）、旅行占15%（用于短途出游）、剩余10%用于其他事项；3. 结尾说明提前做预算的重要性，即合理管理资金、避免超支，让节日更轻松愉快。
【答案】
My family's Spring Festival budget
The Spring Festival is around the corner. My family has made a budget for this special festival.
In our budget, 30% is used for gifts. We need to buy presents for our relatives and friends to express our love. About 25% is for dinners. During the Spring Festival, we will prepare some money for delicious meals because family reunions are essential. Decorations take up 20%. We want to make our home full of festive atmosphere with beautiful lanterns, couplets and other decorations. Travel accounts for 15%. We plan to take a short trip nearby to enjoy the holiday. The remaining 10% is for other things.
I think making a budget in advance is very important. It helps us manage our money reasonably and avoid overspending. It allows us to have a clear plan and makes the Spring Festival more enjoyable and relaxing.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、节日话题表达、预算相关词汇
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的两个内容要点，预算分配结合思维导图提示且理由合理，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
