七、书面表达。(23 分)
中山公园最近有很多问题。假设你是Tom,请你写一封80词左右的英文信呼吁人们保护环境,遵守规则。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容提示:1. 首先,不要乱扔垃圾,要保持公园的整洁,不要摘公园里的花;
2. 其次,在公园里大声谈笑是粗鲁无礼的,请把声音放低;
3. 第三,如果有人挡住你的路,可以说“劳驾”,并等待他/她让路;
4. 向人们解释保护公园的重要性,强调做这些对我们的环境以及健康都有好处。
Dear all,
The environment in Zhongshan Park has become worse recently. We must do something to stop it.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
中山公园最近有很多问题。假设你是Tom,请你写一封80词左右的英文信呼吁人们保护环境,遵守规则。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容提示:1. 首先,不要乱扔垃圾,要保持公园的整洁,不要摘公园里的花;
2. 其次,在公园里大声谈笑是粗鲁无礼的,请把声音放低;
3. 第三,如果有人挡住你的路,可以说“劳驾”,并等待他/她让路;
4. 向人们解释保护公园的重要性,强调做这些对我们的环境以及健康都有好处。
Dear all,
The environment in Zhongshan Park has become worse recently. We must do something to stop it.
First, we shouldn't drop litter everywhere and we should always keep the park clean. We should never pick flowers in the park. Second, it's rude to talk or laugh loudly in the park. Please keep the voice down. Third, if someone is in our way, please say "excuse me" and wait till he or she moves. We should also explain to others the importance of protecting the park. It's good for our environment as well as our health by doing those things.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
答案
One possible version:
First, we shouldn't drop litter everywhere and we should always keep the park clean. We should never pick flowers in the park. Second, it's rude to talk or laugh loudly in the park. Please keep the voice down. Third, if someone is in our way, please say "excuse me" and wait till he or she moves. We should also explain to others the importance of protecting the park. It's good for our environment as well as our health by doing those things.
First, we shouldn't drop litter everywhere and we should always keep the park clean. We should never pick flowers in the park. Second, it's rude to talk or laugh loudly in the park. Please keep the voice down. Third, if someone is in our way, please say "excuse me" and wait till he or she moves. We should also explain to others the importance of protecting the park. It's good for our environment as well as our health by doing those things.
解析
【分析】本题为英文书面表达题,要求以Tom的身份写一封呼吁保护中山公园的信,需涵盖提示的四个要点:不乱扔垃圾、不摘花;不大声说笑;挡路时礼貌请求让路;解释保护公园的重要性。解题时需遵循书信格式,按提示要点组织内容,注意语言简洁、符合英文表达习惯,控制词数在80左右。
【解析】首先围绕“不乱扔垃圾、保持公园整洁、不摘花”表述;其次说明公园内大声说笑不礼貌,需压低声音;接着提及挡路时的礼貌应对方式;最后点明保护公园对环境和健康的重要性,完成呼吁。
【答案】First, we shouldn't drop litter everywhere and we should always keep the park clean. We should never pick flowers in the park. Second, it's rude to talk or laugh loudly in the park. Please keep the voice down. Third, if someone is in our way, please say "excuse me" and wait till he or she moves. We should also explain to others the importance of protecting the park. It's good for our environment as well as our health by doing those things.
【知识点】英文书信写作、环境保护英语表达
【点评】该范文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有提示要点,语言简洁流畅,符合书信格式要求,有效传达了保护环境的呼吁,是符合题目要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先围绕“不乱扔垃圾、保持公园整洁、不摘花”表述;其次说明公园内大声说笑不礼貌,需压低声音;接着提及挡路时的礼貌应对方式;最后点明保护公园对环境和健康的重要性,完成呼吁。
【答案】First, we shouldn't drop litter everywhere and we should always keep the park clean. We should never pick flowers in the park. Second, it's rude to talk or laugh loudly in the park. Please keep the voice down. Third, if someone is in our way, please say "excuse me" and wait till he or she moves. We should also explain to others the importance of protecting the park. It's good for our environment as well as our health by doing those things.
【知识点】英文书信写作、环境保护英语表达
【点评】该范文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有提示要点,语言简洁流畅,符合书信格式要求,有效传达了保护环境的呼吁,是符合题目要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
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