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假如你是李华,你们学校上周四举办了
一次社团展示会。在这次展示会中,你和同
学们参加了各个社团活动,请根据以下提示
写一篇英语短文,介绍不同俱乐部,并谈谈你
的感受。
要求:1. 80词左右,开头不计入总词数;
2. 不要出现真实姓名;3.可根据要点适当发挥。
【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁: 时态:
人称:
二、写作步骤
第一步:开篇点题,介绍学校举办社团展
示会；
第二步:具体介绍每个社团的活动；
第三步:谈谈你的感受。
三、写作要点及词汇联想
1. 想要做某事
2. 烹饪美食
3. 对阅读感兴趣
4. 开阔视野
5. 学习更多的知识
6. 欣赏美照
7. 不仅……而且……
8. 拍照
四、句型提示
1. 我想给你介绍一些我们的社团。
I would like to
to you.
2. 我们烹饪一些我们喜欢的美食。
We cooked
that we liked.
3. 老师教我们如何制作蛋糕。
The teacher taught us how to .
4. 如果你对书籍感兴趣,请加入英语阅读
社团。
If you books,
please the
English Reading Club.
5. 我不仅欣赏了美丽的照片,而且学会了如
何拍照。
I enjoyed some beautiful
pictures, learned how to take
photos.
6. 超级运动俱乐部适合喜欢运动的人们。
is suitable
for people who like sports.
Our School Clubs
Last Thursday, there was a Clubs Fair
in our school. I would like to introduce some
of our clubs to you.
.
一次社团展示会。在这次展示会中,你和同
学们参加了各个社团活动,请根据以下提示
写一篇英语短文,介绍不同俱乐部,并谈谈你
的感受。
要求:1. 80词左右,开头不计入总词数;
2. 不要出现真实姓名;3.可根据要点适当发挥。
【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁: 时态:
人称:
二、写作步骤
第一步:开篇点题,介绍学校举办社团展
示会；
第二步:具体介绍每个社团的活动；
第三步:谈谈你的感受。
三、写作要点及词汇联想
1. 想要做某事
2. 烹饪美食
3. 对阅读感兴趣
4. 开阔视野
5. 学习更多的知识
6. 欣赏美照
7. 不仅……而且……
8. 拍照
四、句型提示
1. 我想给你介绍一些我们的社团。
I would like to
to you.
2. 我们烹饪一些我们喜欢的美食。
We cooked
that we liked.
3. 老师教我们如何制作蛋糕。
The teacher taught us how to .
4. 如果你对书籍感兴趣,请加入英语阅读
社团。
If you books,
please the
English Reading Club.
5. 我不仅欣赏了美丽的照片,而且学会了如
何拍照。
I enjoyed some beautiful
pictures, learned how to take
photos.
6. 超级运动俱乐部适合喜欢运动的人们。
is suitable
for people who like sports.
Our School Clubs
Last Thursday, there was a Clubs Fair
in our school. I would like to introduce some
of our clubs to you.
.
答案
【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁:记叙文; 时态:以"一般过去时"和"一
般现在时"为主;
人称:以第一人称为主
三、写作要点及词汇联想
1. would like to do sth/want to do sth.
2. cook some delicious food
3. be interested in reading
4. open up your eyes
5. learn more knowledge
6. enjoy beautiful photos
7. not only...but also
8. take pictures / take photos
四、句型提示
1. introduce some of our clubs
2. some delicious food
3. make cakes
4. are interested in; join
5. not only; but also
6. Super Sports Club
【参考范文】
Our School Clubs
Last Thursday, there was a Clubs Fair
in our school. I would like to introduce some
of our clubs to you.
Cooking Club is very cool. We cooked
some delicious food that we liked. The
teacher taught us how to make cakes. If you
are interested in books, please join the
English Reading Club. You can read good
books and write reading notes to improve
your knowledge and open up your eyes.
Photography Club is also interesting. I not
only saw many beautiful pictures, but also
learned how to take pictures. Super Sports
Club is suitable for people who like sports.
You can play basketball and table tennis
here.
I think they are all very great.
一、审题
体裁:记叙文; 时态:以"一般过去时"和"一
般现在时"为主;
人称:以第一人称为主
三、写作要点及词汇联想
1. would like to do sth/want to do sth.
2. cook some delicious food
3. be interested in reading
4. open up your eyes
5. learn more knowledge
6. enjoy beautiful photos
7. not only...but also
8. take pictures / take photos
四、句型提示
1. introduce some of our clubs
2. some delicious food
3. make cakes
4. are interested in; join
5. not only; but also
6. Super Sports Club
【参考范文】
Our School Clubs
Last Thursday, there was a Clubs Fair
in our school. I would like to introduce some
of our clubs to you.
Cooking Club is very cool. We cooked
some delicious food that we liked. The
teacher taught us how to make cakes. If you
are interested in books, please join the
English Reading Club. You can read good
books and write reading notes to improve
your knowledge and open up your eyes.
Photography Club is also interesting. I not
only saw many beautiful pictures, but also
learned how to take pictures. Super Sports
Club is suitable for people who like sports.
You can play basketball and table tennis
here.
I think they are all very great.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步先完成审题：明确体裁是介绍校园社团展示会的记叙文，描述上周四的过往活动用一般过去时，介绍社团常规功能用一般现在时，全程以第一人称来叙述。接下来第二步先完成给出的词汇和句型填空，先掌握所有核心表达，之后按照三步写作逻辑推进：1. 题目已经给出开篇的开头句，不需要额外撰写开头；2. 按照思维导图的顺序，依次介绍烹饪社、英语阅读社、摄影社、超级运动社各自的活动内容，覆盖所有提示要点；3. 最后收尾写出自己对这次社团展的感受，注意控制词数，不要出现真实个人信息，适当添加衔接词让行文流畅自然。
【解析】
1. 审题部分填空：
体裁为记叙文，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。
2. 写作要点及词汇联想填空：
①想要做某事：would like to do sth/want to do sth
②烹饪美食：cook some delicious food
③对阅读感兴趣：be interested in reading
④开阔视野：open up your eyes
⑤学习更多的知识：learn more knowledge
⑥欣赏美照：enjoy beautiful photos
⑦不仅……而且……：not only...but also
⑧拍照：take pictures / take photos
3. 句型提示填空：
①I would like to introduce some of our clubs to you.
②We cooked some delicious food that we liked.
③The teacher taught us how to make cakes.
④If you are interested in books, please join the English Reading Club.
⑤I not only enjoyed some beautiful pictures, but also learned how to take photos.
⑥Super Sports Club is suitable for people who like sports.
4. 正文部分按照要点依次介绍四个社团的特色活动，最后补充个人感受，保证内容连贯符合要求。
【答案】
【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁:记叙文; 时态:以"一般过去时"和"一般现在时"为主;
人称:以第一人称为主
三、写作要点及词汇联想
1. would like to do sth/want to do sth.
2. cook some delicious food
3. be interested in reading
4. open up your eyes
5. learn more knowledge
6. enjoy beautiful photos
7. not only...but also
8. take pictures / take photos
四、句型提示
1. introduce some of our clubs
2. some delicious food
3. make cakes
4. are interested in; join
5. not only; but also
6. Super Sports Club
【参考范文】
Our School Clubs
Last Thursday, there was a Clubs Fair in our school. I would like to introduce some of our clubs to you.
Cooking Club is very cool. We cooked some delicious food that we liked. The teacher taught us how to make cakes. If you are interested in books, please join the English Reading Club. You can read good books and write reading notes to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes.
Photography Club is also interesting. I not only saw many beautiful pictures, but also learned how to take pictures. Super Sports Club is suitable for people who like sports. You can play basketball and table tennis here.
I think they are all very great.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，固定短语搭配，并列连词用法
【点评】
本题是贴近校园生活的话题写作，给出了明确的要点提示、词汇和句型支撑，难度较低，学生只需要按照给定的社团信息逐一展开，注意区分描述过往活动的一般过去时和介绍社团常规活动的一般现在时，覆盖所有提示要点即可完成合格的短文，还可以适当添加简单的衔接词让行文更流畅。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步先完成审题：明确体裁是介绍校园社团展示会的记叙文，描述上周四的过往活动用一般过去时，介绍社团常规功能用一般现在时，全程以第一人称来叙述。接下来第二步先完成给出的词汇和句型填空，先掌握所有核心表达，之后按照三步写作逻辑推进：1. 题目已经给出开篇的开头句，不需要额外撰写开头；2. 按照思维导图的顺序，依次介绍烹饪社、英语阅读社、摄影社、超级运动社各自的活动内容，覆盖所有提示要点；3. 最后收尾写出自己对这次社团展的感受，注意控制词数，不要出现真实个人信息，适当添加衔接词让行文流畅自然。
【解析】
1. 审题部分填空：
体裁为记叙文，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。
2. 写作要点及词汇联想填空：
①想要做某事：would like to do sth/want to do sth
②烹饪美食：cook some delicious food
③对阅读感兴趣：be interested in reading
④开阔视野：open up your eyes
⑤学习更多的知识：learn more knowledge
⑥欣赏美照：enjoy beautiful photos
⑦不仅……而且……：not only...but also
⑧拍照：take pictures / take photos
3. 句型提示填空：
①I would like to introduce some of our clubs to you.
②We cooked some delicious food that we liked.
③The teacher taught us how to make cakes.
④If you are interested in books, please join the English Reading Club.
⑤I not only enjoyed some beautiful pictures, but also learned how to take photos.
⑥Super Sports Club is suitable for people who like sports.
4. 正文部分按照要点依次介绍四个社团的特色活动，最后补充个人感受，保证内容连贯符合要求。
【答案】
【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁:记叙文; 时态:以"一般过去时"和"一般现在时"为主;
人称:以第一人称为主
三、写作要点及词汇联想
1. would like to do sth/want to do sth.
2. cook some delicious food
3. be interested in reading
4. open up your eyes
5. learn more knowledge
6. enjoy beautiful photos
7. not only...but also
8. take pictures / take photos
四、句型提示
1. introduce some of our clubs
2. some delicious food
3. make cakes
4. are interested in; join
5. not only; but also
6. Super Sports Club
【参考范文】
Our School Clubs
Last Thursday, there was a Clubs Fair in our school. I would like to introduce some of our clubs to you.
Cooking Club is very cool. We cooked some delicious food that we liked. The teacher taught us how to make cakes. If you are interested in books, please join the English Reading Club. You can read good books and write reading notes to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes.
Photography Club is also interesting. I not only saw many beautiful pictures, but also learned how to take pictures. Super Sports Club is suitable for people who like sports. You can play basketball and table tennis here.
I think they are all very great.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，固定短语搭配，并列连词用法
【点评】
本题是贴近校园生活的话题写作，给出了明确的要点提示、词汇和句型支撑，难度较低，学生只需要按照给定的社团信息逐一展开，注意区分描述过往活动的一般过去时和介绍社团常规活动的一般现在时，覆盖所有提示要点即可完成合格的短文，还可以适当添加简单的衔接词让行文更流畅。
【难度系数】
0.7
