【写作导引】
本单元以“相处”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“良好的人际关系与人际交往”这一主题群,围绕《自私的巨人》及《六尺巷》的故事来展开阐述。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①要与他人相处和谐;②做人要包容、平等待人。
【写作任务】
学校将举办英语写作比赛,请根据所给提示,以“Getting along well with others”为题,写一篇参赛短文。

注意:词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Getting along well with others
No one can live without connecting with others.
Therefore, it’s important for us to learn how to
本单元以“相处”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“良好的人际关系与人际交往”这一主题群,围绕《自私的巨人》及《六尺巷》的故事来展开阐述。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①要与他人相处和谐;②做人要包容、平等待人。
【写作任务】
学校将举办英语写作比赛,请根据所给提示,以“Getting along well with others”为题,写一篇参赛短文。
注意:词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Getting along well with others
No one can live without connecting with others.
Therefore, it’s important for us to learn how to
答案
Getting along well with others
No one can live without connecting with others.
Therefore, it’s important for us to learn how to get along well with different people.
When we are with friends, we should share joy and sadness with each other. For our neighbours, we can do volunteer work and give them a hand when they meet trouble. For our parents, we need to communicate more to understand their deep love for us. Besides, we should be polite to our teachers and learn from them patiently. Good relationships will make our life much warmer and happier.
No one can live without connecting with others.
Therefore, it’s important for us to learn how to get along well with different people.
When we are with friends, we should share joy and sadness with each other. For our neighbours, we can do volunteer work and give them a hand when they meet trouble. For our parents, we need to communicate more to understand their deep love for us. Besides, we should be polite to our teachers and learn from them patiently. Good relationships will make our life much warmer and happier.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语话题短文写作,题目为“Getting along well with others”。解题思路:先承接已给开头,点明核心是与不同人友好相处;再结合插图提示的朋友、邻居、父母的相处方法,补充合理的其他相处对象(如老师)的做法;最后升华主题,点明良好人际关系的意义,控制词数80左右,符合参赛短文要求。
【解析】
首先,承接已给开头,引出“与不同人友好相处”的核心;接着分述不同对象的相处方式:和朋友分享喜怒哀乐,为邻居做志愿、提供帮助,与父母多沟通;再补充对老师应有的礼貌与学习态度;最后总结良好人际关系让生活更温暖快乐,确保内容紧扣主题,结构清晰,符合词数要求。
【答案】
Getting along well with others
No one can live without connecting with others.
Therefore, it’s important for us to learn how to get along well with different people.
When we are with friends, we should share joy and sadness with each other. For our neighbours, we can do volunteer work and give them a hand when they meet trouble. For our parents, we need to communicate more to understand their deep love for us. Besides, we should be polite to our teachers and learn from them patiently. Good relationships will make our life much warmer and happier.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、人际关系表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,结合提示内容补充合理建议,语言简洁,符合参赛短文的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语话题短文写作,题目为“Getting along well with others”。解题思路:先承接已给开头,点明核心是与不同人友好相处;再结合插图提示的朋友、邻居、父母的相处方法,补充合理的其他相处对象(如老师)的做法;最后升华主题,点明良好人际关系的意义,控制词数80左右,符合参赛短文要求。
【解析】
首先,承接已给开头,引出“与不同人友好相处”的核心;接着分述不同对象的相处方式:和朋友分享喜怒哀乐,为邻居做志愿、提供帮助,与父母多沟通;再补充对老师应有的礼貌与学习态度;最后总结良好人际关系让生活更温暖快乐,确保内容紧扣主题,结构清晰,符合词数要求。
【答案】
Getting along well with others
No one can live without connecting with others.
Therefore, it’s important for us to learn how to get along well with different people.
When we are with friends, we should share joy and sadness with each other. For our neighbours, we can do volunteer work and give them a hand when they meet trouble. For our parents, we need to communicate more to understand their deep love for us. Besides, we should be polite to our teachers and learn from them patiently. Good relationships will make our life much warmer and happier.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、人际关系表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,结合提示内容补充合理建议,语言简洁,符合参赛短文的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
跟踪演练
你校英文周刊以“Learning to build good relationships with parents”为题,向同学们征稿。请你根据下面表格,用英语写一篇短文投稿。

要求:词数80左右。参考词汇:score 分数 allow 允许
Learning to build good relationships with parents
你校英文周刊以“Learning to build good relationships with parents”为题,向同学们征稿。请你根据下面表格,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要求:词数80左右。参考词汇:score 分数 allow 允许
Learning to build good relationships with parents
It’s important for children to learn how to build good relationships with their parents. In my family, I used to argue with my parents and find it hard to get along with them.
We had problems because they only paid attention to my scores. Besides, I was not allowed to hang out with friends. I felt like they didn’t care about my feelings. I argued with them and even refused to talk to them for a few days. To solve this, I asked my teacher for help. She advised me to make some changes. So I tried to communicate with my parents about my feelings. To my surprise, they fully understood me and respected my ideas.
Now, our relationship is much better. We spend more time talking and I feel happier.
We had problems because they only paid attention to my scores. Besides, I was not allowed to hang out with friends. I felt like they didn’t care about my feelings. I argued with them and even refused to talk to them for a few days. To solve this, I asked my teacher for help. She advised me to make some changes. So I tried to communicate with my parents about my feelings. To my surprise, they fully understood me and respected my ideas.
Now, our relationship is much better. We spend more time talking and I feel happier.
答案
Learning to build good relationships with parents
It’s important for children to learn how to build good relationships with their parents. In my family, I used to argue with my parents and find it hard to get along with them.
We had problems because they only paid attention to my scores. Besides, I was not allowed to hang out with friends. I felt like they didn’t care about my feelings. I argued with them and even refused to talk to them for a few days. To solve this, I asked my teacher for help. She advised me to make some changes. So I tried to communicate with my parents about my feelings. To my surprise, they fully understood me and respected my ideas.
Now, our relationship is much better. We spend more time talking and I feel happier.
It’s important for children to learn how to build good relationships with their parents. In my family, I used to argue with my parents and find it hard to get along with them.
We had problems because they only paid attention to my scores. Besides, I was not allowed to hang out with friends. I felt like they didn’t care about my feelings. I argued with them and even refused to talk to them for a few days. To solve this, I asked my teacher for help. She advised me to make some changes. So I tried to communicate with my parents about my feelings. To my surprise, they fully understood me and respected my ideas.
Now, our relationship is much better. We spend more time talking and I feel happier.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题短文写作,主题是“学会与父母建立良好关系”。解题思路:首先明确写作结构,先引出主题(和父母建立好关系的重要性);接着结合表格内容,描述与父母相处的现象(争吵)、背后的原因(父母关注分数、不允许和朋友外出);然后说明解决办法(沟通);最后写改善后的现状。需注意词数80左右,正确运用参考词汇score、allow,语言符合初中英语表达习惯。
【解析】1. 开头:点明主题,说明和父母建立良好关系的重要性,引出自身经历;2. 中间部分:结合表格,描述现象(过去常和父母争吵),分析原因(父母只关注分数,不允许和朋友外出,不理解自己的感受);3. 解决办法:尝试和父母沟通,也可提及寻求老师帮助;4. 结尾:说明沟通后父母理解自己,现在关系变好,自己更开心。注意时态(过去时描述过去经历,现在时描述现状),控制词数,语句通顺。
【答案】Learning to build good relationships with parents
It’s important for children to learn how to build good relationships with their parents. In my family, I used to argue with my parents and find it hard to get along with them.
We had problems because they only paid attention to my scores. Besides, I was not allowed to hang out with friends. I felt like they didn’t care about my feelings. I argued with them and even refused to talk to them for a few days. To solve this, I asked my teacher for help. She advised me to make some changes. So I tried to communicate with my parents about my feelings. To my surprise, they fully understood me and respected my ideas.
Now, our relationship is much better. We spend more time talking and I feel happier.
【知识点】英语话题写作、人际关系英语表达、时态运用
【点评】本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,完整覆盖了表格中的现象、原因、办法和现状,合理运用参考词汇,语言流畅自然,符合词数要求,是一篇符合题目要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开头:点明主题,说明和父母建立良好关系的重要性,引出自身经历;2. 中间部分:结合表格,描述现象(过去常和父母争吵),分析原因(父母只关注分数,不允许和朋友外出,不理解自己的感受);3. 解决办法:尝试和父母沟通,也可提及寻求老师帮助;4. 结尾:说明沟通后父母理解自己,现在关系变好,自己更开心。注意时态(过去时描述过去经历,现在时描述现状),控制词数,语句通顺。
【答案】Learning to build good relationships with parents
It’s important for children to learn how to build good relationships with their parents. In my family, I used to argue with my parents and find it hard to get along with them.
We had problems because they only paid attention to my scores. Besides, I was not allowed to hang out with friends. I felt like they didn’t care about my feelings. I argued with them and even refused to talk to them for a few days. To solve this, I asked my teacher for help. She advised me to make some changes. So I tried to communicate with my parents about my feelings. To my surprise, they fully understood me and respected my ideas.
Now, our relationship is much better. We spend more time talking and I feel happier.
【知识点】英语话题写作、人际关系英语表达、时态运用
【点评】本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,完整覆盖了表格中的现象、原因、办法和现状,合理运用参考词汇,语言流畅自然,符合词数要求,是一篇符合题目要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.5
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