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Ⅵ. 书面表达。(20分)
(A)本周学校“职业生涯规划”课程将体验“天气播报员”的职业。请你用英语对今日的伦敦天气进行播报，不少于40词。(5分)
要点:今天是星期一，早上天气凉爽，正在下着雨。很多人匆忙地走在街上。同时，提醒听众带雨伞或雨衣是非常重要的。
(B)不论是细雨滴梧桐，还是骤雨打荷叶，都是大自然的馈赠。走近大自然，领略不一样的风景，就有不一样的内心体验。假如你是陈洁，今天你将跟随父母去乡下的爷爷奶奶家。请你用英语写一篇短文，记录今天的天气、在爷爷奶奶家一天的活动(如摘草莓、钓鱼、看星星)，以及收获感悟。(15分)
要求:1. 书写工整，卷面整洁；
2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3. 不少于80词。
(A)本周学校“职业生涯规划”课程将体验“天气播报员”的职业。请你用英语对今日的伦敦天气进行播报，不少于40词。(5分)
要点:今天是星期一，早上天气凉爽，正在下着雨。很多人匆忙地走在街上。同时，提醒听众带雨伞或雨衣是非常重要的。
(B)不论是细雨滴梧桐，还是骤雨打荷叶，都是大自然的馈赠。走近大自然，领略不一样的风景，就有不一样的内心体验。假如你是陈洁，今天你将跟随父母去乡下的爷爷奶奶家。请你用英语写一篇短文，记录今天的天气、在爷爷奶奶家一天的活动(如摘草莓、钓鱼、看星星)，以及收获感悟。(15分)
要求:1. 书写工整，卷面整洁；
2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3. 不少于80词。
答案
(A)One possible version:
Good morning! I'm Teng Fei with your Monday weather report in London. The morning is cool and it is raining. Many people are hurrying down the street to get to work as soon as possible. It is very important to bring an umbrella or raincoat.
(B)One possible version:
I am Chenjie. I am very excited to go to my grandparents' home. Today, the sun is shining and the wind is full of sweet taste. I pick strawberries with my grandpa in the big sun, although I am very tired, I feel the happiness of labor. My grandmother is very good at fishing and has many different fishing rods at home. Fishing takes a lot of patience. I don't catch a single fish, but I'm looking forward to the next time. At night the sky is very good, there are no clouds. We look at the stars as if they are winking at us. Rural life away from the city makes me feel the beauty of freedom.
Good morning! I'm Teng Fei with your Monday weather report in London. The morning is cool and it is raining. Many people are hurrying down the street to get to work as soon as possible. It is very important to bring an umbrella or raincoat.
(B)One possible version:
I am Chenjie. I am very excited to go to my grandparents' home. Today, the sun is shining and the wind is full of sweet taste. I pick strawberries with my grandpa in the big sun, although I am very tired, I feel the happiness of labor. My grandmother is very good at fishing and has many different fishing rods at home. Fishing takes a lot of patience. I don't catch a single fish, but I'm looking forward to the next time. At night the sky is very good, there are no clouds. We look at the stars as if they are winking at us. Rural life away from the city makes me feel the beauty of freedom.
解析
【分析】
A部分：作为天气播报员，需采用口语化的播报语气，开头问候并自我介绍，明确播报时间（周一）、地点（伦敦），依次覆盖要点：早上凉爽、下雨，人们匆忙出行，最后提醒带雨具，确保信息完整。
B部分：以陈洁的第一人称视角写作，先点明去爷爷奶奶家的兴奋心情，按时间顺序描写当天天气，再依次叙述摘草莓、钓鱼、看星星的活动（补充细节让内容连贯），最后抒发对乡村生活的感悟，满足词数要求。
【解析】
(A)Good morning! I'm Teng Fei with your Monday weather report in London. The morning is cool and it is raining. Many people are hurrying down the street to get to work as soon as possible. It is very important to bring an umbrella or raincoat.
(B)I am Chenjie. I am very excited to go to my grandparents' home. Today, the sun is shining and the wind is full of sweet taste. I pick strawberries with my grandpa in the big sun, although I am very tired, I feel the happiness of labor. My grandmother is very good at fishing and has many different fishing rods at home. Fishing takes a lot of patience. I don't catch a single fish, but I'm looking forward to the next time. At night the sky is very good, there are no clouds. We look at the stars as if they are winking at us. Rural life away from the city makes me feel the beauty of freedom.
【答案】
(A)Good morning! I'm Teng Fei with your Monday weather report in London. The morning is cool and it is raining. Many people are hurrying down the street to get to work as soon as possible. It is very important to bring an umbrella or raincoat.
(B)I am Chenjie. I am very excited to go to my grandparents' home. Today, the sun is shining and the wind is full of sweet taste. I pick strawberries with my grandpa in the big sun, although I am very tired, I feel the happiness of labor. My grandmother is very good at fishing and has many different fishing rods at home. Fishing takes a lot of patience. I don't catch a single fish, but I'm looking forward to the next time. At night the sky is very good, there are no clouds. We look at the stars as if they are winking at us. Rural life away from the city makes me feel the beauty of freedom.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语记叙文写作
【点评】
本题考查英语书面表达能力，涵盖天气播报类应用文和生活叙事类记叙文，要求学生准确运用语言，合理补充细节，体现对生活的感悟，符合中学英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
A部分：作为天气播报员，需采用口语化的播报语气，开头问候并自我介绍，明确播报时间（周一）、地点（伦敦），依次覆盖要点：早上凉爽、下雨，人们匆忙出行，最后提醒带雨具，确保信息完整。
B部分：以陈洁的第一人称视角写作，先点明去爷爷奶奶家的兴奋心情，按时间顺序描写当天天气，再依次叙述摘草莓、钓鱼、看星星的活动（补充细节让内容连贯），最后抒发对乡村生活的感悟，满足词数要求。
【解析】
(A)Good morning! I'm Teng Fei with your Monday weather report in London. The morning is cool and it is raining. Many people are hurrying down the street to get to work as soon as possible. It is very important to bring an umbrella or raincoat.
(B)I am Chenjie. I am very excited to go to my grandparents' home. Today, the sun is shining and the wind is full of sweet taste. I pick strawberries with my grandpa in the big sun, although I am very tired, I feel the happiness of labor. My grandmother is very good at fishing and has many different fishing rods at home. Fishing takes a lot of patience. I don't catch a single fish, but I'm looking forward to the next time. At night the sky is very good, there are no clouds. We look at the stars as if they are winking at us. Rural life away from the city makes me feel the beauty of freedom.
【答案】
(A)Good morning! I'm Teng Fei with your Monday weather report in London. The morning is cool and it is raining. Many people are hurrying down the street to get to work as soon as possible. It is very important to bring an umbrella or raincoat.
(B)I am Chenjie. I am very excited to go to my grandparents' home. Today, the sun is shining and the wind is full of sweet taste. I pick strawberries with my grandpa in the big sun, although I am very tired, I feel the happiness of labor. My grandmother is very good at fishing and has many different fishing rods at home. Fishing takes a lot of patience. I don't catch a single fish, but I'm looking forward to the next time. At night the sky is very good, there are no clouds. We look at the stars as if they are winking at us. Rural life away from the city makes me feel the beauty of freedom.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语记叙文写作
【点评】
本题考查英语书面表达能力，涵盖天气播报类应用文和生活叙事类记叙文，要求学生准确运用语言，合理补充细节，体现对生活的感悟，符合中学英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
