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父母是我们最亲近的人,但有时我们与父母沟通会遇到阻碍。请根据下表中的提示,以“How to Communicate with Our Parents?”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和方法。
要求:
1. 文中需包含表格中的主要内容,语句及篇章结构准确、连贯、书写规范;
2. 需做适量拓展;
3. 不少于 80 词。
父母是我们最亲近的人,但有时我们与父母沟通会遇到阻碍。请根据下表中的提示,以“How to Communicate with Our Parents?”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和方法。
要求:
1. 文中需包含表格中的主要内容,语句及篇章结构准确、连贯、书写规范;
2. 需做适量拓展;
3. 不少于 80 词。
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my suggestions.
Firstly, we can make a list of things we and our parents disagree about most. Try to find out the reasons why we disagree with each other. Accept each other's ideas little by little. If we still have disagreements, we'd better not get too angry. Secondly, we should talk with them more! Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides, we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a skill that must be learned and practised. Finally, be sure to be polite. We are a family in which everyone is loved and cared for.
All in all, if you can often communicate with your parents, I believe that your relationship will become better and better.
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my suggestions.
Firstly, we can make a list of things we and our parents disagree about most. Try to find out the reasons why we disagree with each other. Accept each other's ideas little by little. If we still have disagreements, we'd better not get too angry. Secondly, we should talk with them more! Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides, we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a skill that must be learned and practised. Finally, be sure to be polite. We are a family in which everyone is loved and cared for.
All in all, if you can often communicate with your parents, I believe that your relationship will become better and better.
答案
One possible version:
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my suggestions.
Firstly, we can make a list of things we and our parents disagree about most. Try to find out the reasons why we disagree with each other. Accept each other's ideas little by little. If we still have disagreements, we'd better not get too angry. Secondly, we should talk with them more! Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides, we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a skill that must be learned and practised. Finally, be sure to be polite. We are a family in which everyone is loved and cared for.
All in all, if you can often communicate with your parents, I believe that your relationship will become better and better.
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my suggestions.
Firstly, we can make a list of things we and our parents disagree about most. Try to find out the reasons why we disagree with each other. Accept each other's ideas little by little. If we still have disagreements, we'd better not get too angry. Secondly, we should talk with them more! Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides, we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a skill that must be learned and practised. Finally, be sure to be polite. We are a family in which everyone is loved and cared for.
All in all, if you can often communicate with your parents, I believe that your relationship will become better and better.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要先完成审题：第一明确写作主题是《How to Communicate with Our Parents》，核心是介绍和父母沟通的实用技巧，文体为建议类说明文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称使用第一人称更贴合主题。第二步要先把表格给出的所有要点全部梳理出来，确保不遗漏：① 列出你和父母存在分歧的事项 ② 出现分歧时不要过于生气 ③ 多和父母交谈 ④ 学会真正倾听。第三步搭建行文框架：开头先引入背景，点出成长过程中和父母容易出现沟通障碍，自然引出下文的建议；中间部分分点阐述所有要点，每个要点补充合理的拓展内容，比如梳理分歧后可以找双方意见不同的原因、多交流可以分享想法拉近距离等，避免生硬翻译要点；最后结尾总结沟通的意义，升华主题，同时保证总词数超过80词，逻辑连贯语句通顺。
【解析】
这道书面表达可以按照以下步骤完成写作：
1. 开篇引入：先点明亲子沟通的重要性，说明随着年龄增长，我们很容易和父母出现沟通不畅的问题，顺势引出下文要介绍的沟通方法。
2. 主体段落分点给出建议：
① 首先我们可以先整理列出所有和父母意见不一致的事情，找出双方产生分歧的原因，慢慢尝试接纳彼此的想法，如果最终还是存在不同意见，也尽量不要动怒。
② 其次我们要主动多和父母交谈，互相分享自己的想法，能让亲子之间的距离变得更近。
③ 除此之外我们还要学会真正地倾听，倾听是需要学习和练习的重要技能，站在对方的角度理解想法。
④ 可以适当补充符合主题的拓展内容，比如沟通时保持礼貌，家人之间的相处需要互相尊重和关爱。
3. 结尾总结：点明经常和父母良性沟通，亲子关系会变得越来越融洽，收束全文。
写作过程中可以使用firstly、secondly、besides、all in all这类逻辑连接词，让文章结构更清晰，同时检查语法错误，保证词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my suggestions.
Firstly, we can make a list of things we and our parents disagree about most. Try to find out the reasons why we disagree with each other. Accept each other's ideas little by little. If we still have disagreements, we'd better not get too angry. Secondly, we should talk with them more! Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides, we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a skill that must be learned and practised. Finally, be sure to be polite. We are a family in which everyone is loved and cared for.
All in all, if you can often communicate with your parents, I believe that your relationship will become better and better.
【知识点】
建议类英语作文写作
亲子主题词汇运用
语篇逻辑衔接
【点评】
本题贴近学生的日常生活场景，既考查学生整合提示要点、组织英语语言的写作能力，也引导学生思考实际的亲子相处方法。写作时要注意避免生硬逐句翻译表格内容，通过合理补充细节让文章内容更充实，多用连接词梳理行文逻辑，避开中式英语表达，就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.65
拿到这道写作题首先要先完成审题：第一明确写作主题是《How to Communicate with Our Parents》，核心是介绍和父母沟通的实用技巧，文体为建议类说明文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称使用第一人称更贴合主题。第二步要先把表格给出的所有要点全部梳理出来，确保不遗漏：① 列出你和父母存在分歧的事项 ② 出现分歧时不要过于生气 ③ 多和父母交谈 ④ 学会真正倾听。第三步搭建行文框架：开头先引入背景，点出成长过程中和父母容易出现沟通障碍，自然引出下文的建议；中间部分分点阐述所有要点，每个要点补充合理的拓展内容，比如梳理分歧后可以找双方意见不同的原因、多交流可以分享想法拉近距离等，避免生硬翻译要点；最后结尾总结沟通的意义，升华主题，同时保证总词数超过80词，逻辑连贯语句通顺。
【解析】
这道书面表达可以按照以下步骤完成写作：
1. 开篇引入：先点明亲子沟通的重要性，说明随着年龄增长，我们很容易和父母出现沟通不畅的问题，顺势引出下文要介绍的沟通方法。
2. 主体段落分点给出建议：
① 首先我们可以先整理列出所有和父母意见不一致的事情，找出双方产生分歧的原因，慢慢尝试接纳彼此的想法，如果最终还是存在不同意见，也尽量不要动怒。
② 其次我们要主动多和父母交谈，互相分享自己的想法，能让亲子之间的距离变得更近。
③ 除此之外我们还要学会真正地倾听，倾听是需要学习和练习的重要技能，站在对方的角度理解想法。
④ 可以适当补充符合主题的拓展内容，比如沟通时保持礼貌，家人之间的相处需要互相尊重和关爱。
3. 结尾总结：点明经常和父母良性沟通，亲子关系会变得越来越融洽，收束全文。
写作过程中可以使用firstly、secondly、besides、all in all这类逻辑连接词，让文章结构更清晰，同时检查语法错误，保证词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my suggestions.
Firstly, we can make a list of things we and our parents disagree about most. Try to find out the reasons why we disagree with each other. Accept each other's ideas little by little. If we still have disagreements, we'd better not get too angry. Secondly, we should talk with them more! Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides, we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a skill that must be learned and practised. Finally, be sure to be polite. We are a family in which everyone is loved and cared for.
All in all, if you can often communicate with your parents, I believe that your relationship will become better and better.
【知识点】
建议类英语作文写作
亲子主题词汇运用
语篇逻辑衔接
【点评】
本题贴近学生的日常生活场景，既考查学生整合提示要点、组织英语语言的写作能力，也引导学生思考实际的亲子相处方法。写作时要注意避免生硬逐句翻译表格内容，通过合理补充细节让文章内容更充实，多用连接词梳理行文逻辑，避开中式英语表达，就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.65
