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六、书面表达。
《礼记》有云：“独学而无友，则孤陋而寡闻。”假设你是张华，你校英文报社正在举办主题为“A True Friend”的演讲活动，你想要介绍你的朋友李明，并分享他在学习上对你的帮助。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。
注意:1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确;2. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and classmates,
I am Zhang Hua. Today I am glad to tell you something about my true friend.
Thanks for listening!
《礼记》有云：“独学而无友，则孤陋而寡闻。”假设你是张华，你校英文报社正在举办主题为“A True Friend”的演讲活动，你想要介绍你的朋友李明，并分享他在学习上对你的帮助。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。
注意:1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确;2. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and classmates,
I am Zhang Hua. Today I am glad to tell you something about my true friend.
Thanks for listening!
答案
One possible version:
Dear teachers and classmates,
I am Zhang Hua. Today I am glad to tell you something about my true friend.
My best friend is Li Ming. He is tall and has short black hair. He is kind, helpful and always ready to help others. When I had trouble with English, he didn't just give me answers. Instead, he helped me understand the grammar and practice reading every day. He even stayed after school to check my homework and explain difficult words.
I felt so grateful for his help. Without him, I almost gave up. Now I'm getting better at English, and I want to keep working hard. My plan is to read more English stories and talk with my friends in English every day.
Thanks for listening!
Dear teachers and classmates,
I am Zhang Hua. Today I am glad to tell you something about my true friend.
My best friend is Li Ming. He is tall and has short black hair. He is kind, helpful and always ready to help others. When I had trouble with English, he didn't just give me answers. Instead, he helped me understand the grammar and practice reading every day. He even stayed after school to check my homework and explain difficult words.
I felt so grateful for his help. Without him, I almost gave up. Now I'm getting better at English, and I want to keep working hard. My plan is to read more English stories and talk with my friends in English every day.
Thanks for listening!
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达（演讲稿），要求以张华的身份介绍朋友李明，需涵盖李明的外貌、性格，他在英语学习上对自己的帮助，以及自身的计划。写作时需紧扣主题“A True Friend”，包含所有提示要点，符合演讲稿语气，做到语句通顺、语法正确，词数约90左右。
【解析】首先承接已给开头，介绍李明的外貌（个子高、留短发）与性格（善良、乐于助人）；接着具体叙述李明对自己英语学习的帮助：帮助理解语法、一起练习朗读、检查作业；然后说明自己的变化（英语学得比以前好多了）；最后阐述自己的计划，结尾用给定语句，确保内容连贯、要点齐全。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear teachers and classmates,
I am Zhang Hua. Today I am glad to tell you something about my true friend.
My best friend is Li Ming. He is tall and has short black hair. He is kind, helpful and always ready to help others. When I had trouble with English, he didn't just give me answers. Instead, he helped me understand the grammar and practice reading every day. He even stayed after school to check my homework and explain difficult words.
I felt so grateful for his help. Without him, I almost gave up. Now I'm getting better at English, and I want to keep working hard. My plan is to read more English stories and talk with my friends in English every day.
Thanks for listening!
【知识点】英语书面表达；演讲稿写作；人物介绍
【点评】本文紧扣主题，要点齐全，涵盖所有提示信息，语句通顺，语法正确，符合演讲稿的格式与语气，合理补充细节，出色完成写作任务。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先承接已给开头，介绍李明的外貌（个子高、留短发）与性格（善良、乐于助人）；接着具体叙述李明对自己英语学习的帮助：帮助理解语法、一起练习朗读、检查作业；然后说明自己的变化（英语学得比以前好多了）；最后阐述自己的计划，结尾用给定语句，确保内容连贯、要点齐全。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear teachers and classmates,
I am Zhang Hua. Today I am glad to tell you something about my true friend.
My best friend is Li Ming. He is tall and has short black hair. He is kind, helpful and always ready to help others. When I had trouble with English, he didn't just give me answers. Instead, he helped me understand the grammar and practice reading every day. He even stayed after school to check my homework and explain difficult words.
I felt so grateful for his help. Without him, I almost gave up. Now I'm getting better at English, and I want to keep working hard. My plan is to read more English stories and talk with my friends in English every day.
Thanks for listening!
【知识点】英语书面表达；演讲稿写作；人物介绍
【点评】本文紧扣主题，要点齐全，涵盖所有提示信息，语句通顺，语法正确，符合演讲稿的格式与语气，合理补充细节，出色完成写作任务。
【难度系数】0.6
