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Ⅶ. Writing. (写作)
亲爱的同学，你的小学生活即将结束。在小学阶段，你一定有许多美好的记忆吧！请谈一谈你的小学校园生活，不少于60词。
亲爱的同学，你的小学生活即将结束。在小学阶段，你一定有许多美好的记忆吧！请谈一谈你的小学校园生活，不少于60词。
My primary school life is over. It's time
to say goodbye to my old school. I had a lot
of fun at school. We studied from Monday
to Friday. Our teachers were very kind.
The school was clean and beautiful. There
was a big playground. We often played foot-
ball on the playground. We could also play the
guitar and dance in the music room. I love
my old school.
答案
My primary school life is over. It's time
to say goodbye to my old school. I had a lot
of fun at school. We studied from Monday
to Friday. Our teachers were very kind.
The school was clean and beautiful. There
was a big playground. We often played foot-
ball on the playground. We could also play the
guitar and dance in the music room. I love
my old school.
to say goodbye to my old school. I had a lot
of fun at school. We studied from Monday
to Friday. Our teachers were very kind.
The school was clean and beautiful. There
was a big playground. We often played foot-
ball on the playground. We could also play the
guitar and dance in the music room. I love
my old school.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要紧扣“小学校园生活”这一主题构思内容：第一步开篇直接点明小学生活即将结束，引出对校园的回忆；第二步从日常学习、老师、校园环境这些贴近生活的角度展开，让内容更真实；第三步加入具体的校园活动，体现校园生活的丰富多彩；最后结尾抒发对母校的喜爱之情。写作时要注意回忆部分用一般过去时，同时保证字数不少于60词。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题："My primary school life is over. It's time to say goodbye to my old school." 直接点明核心背景，引出后续回忆。
2. 总述感受："I had a lot of fun at school." 概括校园生活的整体感受，为下文具体描述做铺垫。
3. 日常与师长："We studied from Monday to Friday. Our teachers were very kind." 介绍在校学习规律和老师的态度，贴近真实校园场景。
4. 校园环境："The school was clean and beautiful. There was a big playground." 描绘校园的外在风貌，突出标志性场地。
5. 校园活动："We often played football on the playground. We could also play the guitar and dance in the music room." 通过具体活动展现校园生活的丰富性，让内容更生动。
6. 结尾抒情："I love my old school." 直接表达对母校的喜爱，升华情感，完成收尾。
【答案】
My primary school life is over. It's time
to say goodbye to my old school. I had a lot
of fun at school. We studied from Monday
to Friday. Our teachers were very kind.
The school was clean and beautiful. There
was a big playground. We often played foot-
ball on the playground. We could also play the
guitar and dance in the music room. I love
my old school.
【知识点】
1. 小学英语记叙文写作
2. 一般过去时运用
3. 校园生活相关词汇
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，从开篇点题到具体回忆校园的各个维度，最后抒情收尾，完整贴合题目要求。内容充实全面，涵盖学习、师长、环境、活动等多个方面，语言简洁流畅，时态运用准确，是一篇符合小学毕业水平的优秀写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们要紧扣“小学校园生活”这一主题构思内容：第一步开篇直接点明小学生活即将结束，引出对校园的回忆；第二步从日常学习、老师、校园环境这些贴近生活的角度展开，让内容更真实；第三步加入具体的校园活动，体现校园生活的丰富多彩；最后结尾抒发对母校的喜爱之情。写作时要注意回忆部分用一般过去时，同时保证字数不少于60词。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题："My primary school life is over. It's time to say goodbye to my old school." 直接点明核心背景，引出后续回忆。
2. 总述感受："I had a lot of fun at school." 概括校园生活的整体感受，为下文具体描述做铺垫。
3. 日常与师长："We studied from Monday to Friday. Our teachers were very kind." 介绍在校学习规律和老师的态度，贴近真实校园场景。
4. 校园环境："The school was clean and beautiful. There was a big playground." 描绘校园的外在风貌，突出标志性场地。
5. 校园活动："We often played football on the playground. We could also play the guitar and dance in the music room." 通过具体活动展现校园生活的丰富性，让内容更生动。
6. 结尾抒情："I love my old school." 直接表达对母校的喜爱，升华情感，完成收尾。
【答案】
My primary school life is over. It's time
to say goodbye to my old school. I had a lot
of fun at school. We studied from Monday
to Friday. Our teachers were very kind.
The school was clean and beautiful. There
was a big playground. We often played foot-
ball on the playground. We could also play the
guitar and dance in the music room. I love
my old school.
【知识点】
1. 小学英语记叙文写作
2. 一般过去时运用
3. 校园生活相关词汇
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，从开篇点题到具体回忆校园的各个维度，最后抒情收尾，完整贴合题目要求。内容充实全面，涵盖学习、师长、环境、活动等多个方面，语言简洁流畅，时态运用准确，是一篇符合小学毕业水平的优秀写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
