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三、书面表达。
假如你是小雅，21世纪报正在进行以“My Community”为题的英语征文比赛，请你根据以下内容，用英语写一篇短文用于投稿。
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数不少于70个（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Community
Hi, my name is Xiaoya. I think my community is beautiful and convenient.
假如你是小雅，21世纪报正在进行以“My Community”为题的英语征文比赛，请你根据以下内容，用英语写一篇短文用于投稿。
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数不少于70个（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Community
Hi, my name is Xiaoya. I think my community is beautiful and convenient.
答案
My Community
Hi, my name is Xiaoya. I think my community is beautiful and convenient.
My community is on Renmin Street. It is very big. There are a lot of trees and beautiful flowers in it. And the air is so clean and fresh. There are many supermarkets and restaurants here. A big park is in my community, too. I think my community life is very easy and fun.
My neighbors are very friendly. They often help me water flowers in the garden. We often help each other.
I like living here very much. I think my community is a good place of love and care.
Hi, my name is Xiaoya. I think my community is beautiful and convenient.
My community is on Renmin Street. It is very big. There are a lot of trees and beautiful flowers in it. And the air is so clean and fresh. There are many supermarkets and restaurants here. A big park is in my community, too. I think my community life is very easy and fun.
My neighbors are very friendly. They often help me water flowers in the garden. We often help each other.
I like living here very much. I think my community is a good place of love and care.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇以“My Community”为主题的英语征文，解题时需先明确题目要求：要涵盖表格中所有要点（地理位置、社区环境、周边设施、邻里互助例子、居住感受），词数达标且不能出现真实信息。
思考步骤：
1. 承接开头句，先点明社区的地理位置，对应表格里的“人民街道”，用简单陈述句清晰表达；
2. 描述社区环境，用there be句型介绍树和花的存在，再说明空气的状态，贴合表格内容；
3. 介绍周边设施，同样用there be句型列举超市、饭店，补充大公园的信息，丰富内容；
4. 补充邻里互助的具体例子，选取贴近生活的场景，让内容更真实；
5. 最后表达居住感受，总结自己对社区的喜爱，升华情感，完成全文。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，介绍社区地理位置：My community is on Renmin Street.
2. 描述社区环境：用There are a lot of trees and beautiful flowers in it. And the air is so clean and fresh. 体现表格里的环境特点；
3. 介绍周边设施：用There are many supermarkets and restaurants here. A big park is in my community, too. 涵盖表格里的设施内容；
4. 补充邻里互助例子：My neighbors are very friendly. They often help me water flowers in the garden. We often help each other. 给出具体的互助场景；
5. 表达居住感受：I like living here very much. I think my community is a good place of love and care. 抒发对社区的喜爱，完成全文。
【答案】
My Community
Hi, my name is Xiaoya. I think my community is beautiful and convenient.
My community is on Renmin Street. It is very big. There are a lot of trees and beautiful flowers in it. And the air is so clean and fresh. There are many supermarkets and restaurants here. A big park is in my community, too. I think my community life is very easy and fun.
My neighbors are very friendly. They often help me water flowers in the garden. We often help each other.
I like living here very much. I think my community is a good place of love and care.
【知识点】
there be句型运用，一般现在时写作，英语说明文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所有要点，内容充实且贴近生活；语句通顺流畅，合理运用there be句型清晰描述社区情况，邻里互助的细节让文章更具温度；结尾的感受表达真挚，符合征文的情感表达需求，是一篇合格的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一篇以“My Community”为主题的英语征文，解题时需先明确题目要求：要涵盖表格中所有要点（地理位置、社区环境、周边设施、邻里互助例子、居住感受），词数达标且不能出现真实信息。
思考步骤：
1. 承接开头句，先点明社区的地理位置，对应表格里的“人民街道”，用简单陈述句清晰表达；
2. 描述社区环境，用there be句型介绍树和花的存在，再说明空气的状态，贴合表格内容；
3. 介绍周边设施，同样用there be句型列举超市、饭店，补充大公园的信息，丰富内容；
4. 补充邻里互助的具体例子，选取贴近生活的场景，让内容更真实；
5. 最后表达居住感受，总结自己对社区的喜爱，升华情感，完成全文。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，介绍社区地理位置：My community is on Renmin Street.
2. 描述社区环境：用There are a lot of trees and beautiful flowers in it. And the air is so clean and fresh. 体现表格里的环境特点；
3. 介绍周边设施：用There are many supermarkets and restaurants here. A big park is in my community, too. 涵盖表格里的设施内容；
4. 补充邻里互助例子：My neighbors are very friendly. They often help me water flowers in the garden. We often help each other. 给出具体的互助场景；
5. 表达居住感受：I like living here very much. I think my community is a good place of love and care. 抒发对社区的喜爱，完成全文。
【答案】
My Community
Hi, my name is Xiaoya. I think my community is beautiful and convenient.
My community is on Renmin Street. It is very big. There are a lot of trees and beautiful flowers in it. And the air is so clean and fresh. There are many supermarkets and restaurants here. A big park is in my community, too. I think my community life is very easy and fun.
My neighbors are very friendly. They often help me water flowers in the garden. We often help each other.
I like living here very much. I think my community is a good place of love and care.
【知识点】
there be句型运用，一般现在时写作，英语说明文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所有要点，内容充实且贴近生活；语句通顺流畅，合理运用there be句型清晰描述社区情况，邻里互助的细节让文章更具温度；结尾的感受表达真挚，符合征文的情感表达需求，是一篇合格的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.8
