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六、书面表达。(9分)
亮点小学正在开展“安全月”的活动，要求同学们用英文写一写安全方面的常识。请根据所给的思维导图，以“How to cross the road safely”为题，写一篇英语小短文。不少于6句话。
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亮点小学正在开展“安全月”的活动，要求同学们用英文写一写安全方面的常识。请根据所给的思维导图，以“How to cross the road safely”为题，写一篇英语小短文。不少于6句话。
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答案
示例： How to cross the road safely
There are many busy roads in our city. How can we cross them safely?
First, always use the zebra crossing because it is the safest place to cross the road. Second, look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man. In most cities in China, except Hong Kong and Macau, we should first look left, then right and then left again before we go. Then never run when crossing—walk carefully! If there is no zebra crossing, walk on the pavement and find a safe spot. It's also a good idea to cross with other people. Remember, don't play with our phone or wear headphones while crossing.
Everyone should follow the rules and stay safe on the road.
There are many busy roads in our city. How can we cross them safely?
First, always use the zebra crossing because it is the safest place to cross the road. Second, look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man. In most cities in China, except Hong Kong and Macau, we should first look left, then right and then left again before we go. Then never run when crossing—walk carefully! If there is no zebra crossing, walk on the pavement and find a safe spot. It's also a good idea to cross with other people. Remember, don't play with our phone or wear headphones while crossing.
Everyone should follow the rules and stay safe on the road.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这篇书面表达的主题是“How to cross the road safely”，核心是介绍安全过马路的常识，且要求不少于6句话。解题思路如下：
1. 开头引入：先点明城市中存在繁忙道路的现状，自然引出“如何安全过马路”的话题，引发读者关注；
2. 主体分述：结合安全过马路的核心要点，用first、second、then等连接词分条阐述，要涵盖斑马线使用、红绿灯观察、左右瞭望顺序、行走要求、无斑马线时的应对、结伴过马路以及禁止行为这些关键内容，让内容条理清晰；
3. 结尾总结：呼吁大家遵守交通规则，保障道路安全，升华主题。
【解析】
1. 开头段：先用“There are many busy roads in our city. How can we cross them safely?”引出主题，既贴合生活实际，又能自然过渡到下文的具体做法；
2. 主体段：
用“First”引出第一个要点：使用斑马线，说明其安全性；
用“Second”讲解观察红绿灯、等待绿灯通行，同时补充中国大部分地区过马路时左右瞭望的顺序，体现细节准确性；
用“Then”强调过马路时要慢行不奔跑，接着说明无斑马线时需走人行道找安全区域，以及结伴过马路的实用方法；
最后用“Remember”提醒禁止过马路时玩手机、戴耳机的行为，全面覆盖安全要点；
3. 结尾段：用“Everyone should follow the rules and stay safe on the road.”总结全文，强化遵守规则的重要性，呼应主题。
【答案】
How to cross the road safely
There are many busy roads in our city. How can we cross them safely?
First, always use the zebra crossing because it is the safest place to cross the road. Second, look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man. In most cities in China, except Hong Kong and Macau, we should first look left, then right and then left again before we go. Then never run when crossing—walk carefully! If there is no zebra crossing, walk on the pavement and find a safe spot. It's also a good idea to cross with other people. Remember, don't play with our phone or wear headphones while crossing.
Everyone should follow the rules and stay safe on the road.
【知识点】
1. 道路安全英语表达
2. 英语说明文写作结构
3. 顺序类连接词运用
【点评】
这篇短文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，通过first、second、then等连接词将安全过马路的要点有条理地呈现出来，内容全面且贴合题目要求，语言表达准确地道，既涵盖了基础的交通规则常识，又补充了细节性的注意事项，能有效传达安全过马路的方法，符合小学英语书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们要明确这篇书面表达的主题是“How to cross the road safely”，核心是介绍安全过马路的常识，且要求不少于6句话。解题思路如下：
1. 开头引入：先点明城市中存在繁忙道路的现状，自然引出“如何安全过马路”的话题，引发读者关注；
2. 主体分述：结合安全过马路的核心要点，用first、second、then等连接词分条阐述，要涵盖斑马线使用、红绿灯观察、左右瞭望顺序、行走要求、无斑马线时的应对、结伴过马路以及禁止行为这些关键内容，让内容条理清晰；
3. 结尾总结：呼吁大家遵守交通规则，保障道路安全，升华主题。
【解析】
1. 开头段：先用“There are many busy roads in our city. How can we cross them safely?”引出主题，既贴合生活实际，又能自然过渡到下文的具体做法；
2. 主体段：
用“First”引出第一个要点：使用斑马线，说明其安全性；
用“Second”讲解观察红绿灯、等待绿灯通行，同时补充中国大部分地区过马路时左右瞭望的顺序，体现细节准确性；
用“Then”强调过马路时要慢行不奔跑，接着说明无斑马线时需走人行道找安全区域，以及结伴过马路的实用方法；
最后用“Remember”提醒禁止过马路时玩手机、戴耳机的行为，全面覆盖安全要点；
3. 结尾段：用“Everyone should follow the rules and stay safe on the road.”总结全文，强化遵守规则的重要性，呼应主题。
【答案】
How to cross the road safely
There are many busy roads in our city. How can we cross them safely?
First, always use the zebra crossing because it is the safest place to cross the road. Second, look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man. In most cities in China, except Hong Kong and Macau, we should first look left, then right and then left again before we go. Then never run when crossing—walk carefully! If there is no zebra crossing, walk on the pavement and find a safe spot. It's also a good idea to cross with other people. Remember, don't play with our phone or wear headphones while crossing.
Everyone should follow the rules and stay safe on the road.
【知识点】
1. 道路安全英语表达
2. 英语说明文写作结构
3. 顺序类连接词运用
【点评】
这篇短文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，通过first、second、then等连接词将安全过马路的要点有条理地呈现出来，内容全面且贴合题目要求，语言表达准确地道，既涵盖了基础的交通规则常识，又补充了细节性的注意事项，能有效传达安全过马路的方法，符合小学英语书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
