主题写作专项 练写作 答案D9
主题词网
介绍爱好
爱好类型
表达喜好
收获感受
优选词汇
• jogging • painting • reading • dancing • paper-cutting • camping
• collecting • singing • swimming • hiking • fishing • travelling
• like • love doing • favourite • a fan of • be interested in
• keep fit • make friends • relax • learn skills • be great fun
写作实例
自从国家实行“双减”政策之后，学生可以有更多的空闲时间来发展自己的兴趣爱好。请以“My hobbies”为题，根据以下提示，介绍你自己的兴趣爱好。
提示：
审人称：以第一人称为主 审主题
1.你的兴趣爱好有哪些？
2.你为什么会有这些兴趣爱好？
3.你如何利用业余时间来发展你的兴趣爱好？
4.你的未来理想是什么？
审时态：一般现在时；
审要点
写作要求：1.包含列出的所有要点，层次清晰，意思连贯；
2.80词左右。
审词数
My hobbies

My hobbies
I have a lot of hobbies. Let me introduce them to you.
My favourite hobby is swimming. I think it is good for my health and it can make me feel happy. I practice swimming on Saturday afternoon. I am also interested in travelling. It is great fun for me. I travel to different cities with my friends during the summer holiday. What’s more, I enjoy reading all kinds of books too. I read books before going to bed every day. Good books are like good friends. I learn a lot from them.
I want to become a great swimmer in the future. I hope my dream can come true.

【分析】
首先明确写作要求：以第一人称、一般现在时完成“My hobbies”写作，需涵盖4个核心要点（爱好及原因、业余时间安排、未来理想），使用给定优选词汇，词数控制在80左右。解题思路：1. 开篇引出自身有多项爱好；2. 列举给定词汇中的爱好（如swimming、travelling、reading），分别说明原因、业余时间的具体安排；3. 表达未来理想；4. 确保层次清晰，连贯运用给定词汇（如favourite、be great fun、learn a lot等）。
【解析】
按照要求，用第一人称、一般现在时写作：
1. 开篇点题：I have a lot of hobbies. Let me introduce them to you.
2. 分述爱好：My favourite hobby is swimming, which keeps me fit and makes me happy. I practice it on Saturday afternoon. I’m also interested in travelling—it’s great fun, and I go with friends in summer holidays. Besides, I love reading, which helps me learn a lot; I read before bed daily.
3. 未来理想：I want to be a good swimmer in the future and hope my dream comes true.
（调整为流畅连贯的表达，符合参考答案要求）
【答案】
My hobbies
I have a lot of hobbies. Let me introduce them to you.
My favourite hobby is swimming. I think it is good for my health and it can make me feel happy. I practice swimming on Saturday afternoon. I am also interested in travelling. It is great fun for me. I travel to different cities with my friends during the summer holiday. What’s more, I enjoy reading all kinds of books too. I read books before going to bed every day. Good books are like good friends. I learn a lot from them.
I want to become a great swimmer in the future. I hope my dream can come true.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、一般现在时运用、词汇运用
【点评】
本题结合“双减”背景，考查学生围绕给定主题、要点及词汇进行英语写作的能力，要求层次清晰、意思连贯，符合初中英语写作的基础要求，能有效检验学生的语言组织和表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7

写作支架
开头 — 点明主题，引出下文 — I have . Let me .
中间 — 具体情况，展开介绍 — My favourite hobby is . I think it is and .（高分句式1）
I practice .
I am also interested in . It is . I travel to .
What’s more, I enjoy . I read . Good books .
I learn .
结尾 — 说明理想，总结全文 — I want to . I hope .（高分句式2）

1. a lot of hobbies
2. introduce them to you
3. swimming
4. good for my health
5. it can make me feel happy
6. swimming on Saturday afternoon
7. great fun for me
8. different cities with my friends during the summer holiday
9. reading all kinds of books too
10. books before going to bed every day
11. are like good friends
12. a lot from them
13. become a great swimmer in the future
14. my dream can come true

【分析】这是一道英语写作支架填空题，需依据写作结构（开头点明主题、中间展开介绍爱好、结尾总结理想），结合语境与语法规则填写内容。开头要引出“有爱好并介绍”，中间围绕爱好展开具体说明，结尾表达理想，需保证填写内容符合语义和句式要求。
【解析】1. 开头点明主题，“a lot of hobbies”对应“很多爱好”，符合语境；2. “introduce them to you”对应“让我介绍给你”，引出下文；3. 中间最喜欢的爱好填“swimming”，是常见爱好；4. “good for my health”说明游泳的好处；5. “it can make me feel happy”补充另一个优点；6. “swimming on Saturday afternoon”说明练习时间；7. “great fun for me”体现旅行的乐趣；8. “different cities with my friends during the summer holiday”说明旅行的具体情况；9. “reading all kinds of books too”引出读书爱好；10. “books before going to bed every day”说明读书时间；11. “are like good friends”表达好书的意义；12. “a lot from them”说明从书中的收获；13. “become a great swimmer in the future”是理想；14. “my dream can come true”表达希望。
【答案】1. a lot of hobbies；2. introduce them to you；3. swimming；4. good for my health；5. it can make me feel happy；6. swimming on Saturday afternoon；7. great fun for me；8. different cities with my friends during the summer holiday；9. reading all kinds of books too；10. books before going to bed every day；11. are like good friends；12. a lot from them；13. become a great swimmer in the future；14. my dream can come true
【知识点】英语写作、常用表达搭配、句式运用
【点评】本题通过写作支架梳理介绍爱好类作文的结构，帮助学生掌握相关常用句式与表达，是基础写作练习，能提升写作逻辑和语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5