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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D9
「2026 江苏无锡江阴期中」
爱好是校园生活里的“小乐趣”，它能让我们的课余时光更精彩。作为初中生，你的爱好是什么？请以“My Hobby and My School Life”为题，根据下面所给信息，写一篇短文。
注意事项：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，适当拓展，全文连贯通顺。
2.文中不得提及个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
3.词数80左右。
My Hobby and My School Life
「2026 江苏无锡江阴期中」
爱好是校园生活里的“小乐趣”，它能让我们的课余时光更精彩。作为初中生，你的爱好是什么？请以“My Hobby and My School Life”为题，根据下面所给信息，写一篇短文。
注意事项：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，适当拓展，全文连贯通顺。
2.文中不得提及个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
3.词数80左右。
My Hobby and My School Life
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
My Hobby and My School Life
My hobby is drawing. It's really fun to create colourful pictures in my free time.
I join the Art Club at school. Every week, we practice drawing different things like flowers and animals there. Sometimes, we also learn to use new painting tools together.
This hobby makes my school life better. It helps me relax after class. Also, I make friends with other members of the club. We often share our ideas and enjoy our time in the club. Drawing makes my school life full of fun!
进阶版范文
My Hobby and My School Life
My hobby is drawing. It's great fun to create colourful pictures when I am free.
I join the Art Club of our school. Every week, we practice drawing different things like flowers and animals there. Sometimes, we also learn to use new painting tools together.
This hobby makes my school life better. It helps me relax when I feel stressed. Also, I make friends with other members of the club. We often share our ideas with each other and we enjoy our time in the club. I'm so glad that drawing makes my school life full of fun!
基础版范文
My Hobby and My School Life
My hobby is drawing. It's really fun to create colourful pictures in my free time.
I join the Art Club at school. Every week, we practice drawing different things like flowers and animals there. Sometimes, we also learn to use new painting tools together.
This hobby makes my school life better. It helps me relax after class. Also, I make friends with other members of the club. We often share our ideas and enjoy our time in the club. Drawing makes my school life full of fun!
进阶版范文
My Hobby and My School Life
My hobby is drawing. It's great fun to create colourful pictures when I am free.
I join the Art Club of our school. Every week, we practice drawing different things like flowers and animals there. Sometimes, we also learn to use new painting tools together.
This hobby makes my school life better. It helps me relax when I feel stressed. Also, I make friends with other members of the club. We often share our ideas with each other and we enjoy our time in the club. I'm so glad that drawing makes my school life full of fun!
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My Hobby and My School Life”为题写作，需覆盖三个核心要点：1. 你的爱好是什么；2. 加入的俱乐部及俱乐部内的活动；3. 爱好如何让校园生活更好。写作时要注意：不能提及个人身份信息，词数控制在80左右，内容需连贯通顺。解题思路：先确定具体爱好（如绘画），对应加入的俱乐部，再阐述俱乐部活动，最后说明爱好对校园生活的积极影响，确保所有要点都涵盖，语言符合初中生水平。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明爱好：直接说明自己的爱好是绘画，简单描述爱好的乐趣；
2. 说明俱乐部相关内容：明确加入的是学校美术俱乐部，列举俱乐部的日常活动；
3. 阐述爱好对校园生活的好处：从放松身心、结交朋友两方面说明，呼应主题；
4. 检查是否符合要求：确认无个人信息、要点齐全、词数达标、语句通顺。
【答案】
My Hobby and My School Life
My hobby is drawing. It's really fun to create colourful pictures in my free time.
I join the Art Club at school. Every week, we practice drawing different things like flowers and animals there. Sometimes, we also learn to use new painting tools together.
This hobby makes my school life better. It helps me relax after class. Also, I make friends with other members of the club. We often share our ideas and enjoy our time in the club. Drawing makes my school life full of fun!
【知识点】
英语话题写作、校园生活话题
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，语言简洁通顺，结构清晰，符合初中生写作水平，很好地体现了爱好对校园生活的积极作用。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以“My Hobby and My School Life”为题写作，需覆盖三个核心要点：1. 你的爱好是什么；2. 加入的俱乐部及俱乐部内的活动；3. 爱好如何让校园生活更好。写作时要注意：不能提及个人身份信息，词数控制在80左右，内容需连贯通顺。解题思路：先确定具体爱好（如绘画），对应加入的俱乐部，再阐述俱乐部活动，最后说明爱好对校园生活的积极影响，确保所有要点都涵盖，语言符合初中生水平。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明爱好：直接说明自己的爱好是绘画，简单描述爱好的乐趣；
2. 说明俱乐部相关内容：明确加入的是学校美术俱乐部，列举俱乐部的日常活动；
3. 阐述爱好对校园生活的好处：从放松身心、结交朋友两方面说明，呼应主题；
4. 检查是否符合要求：确认无个人信息、要点齐全、词数达标、语句通顺。
【答案】
My Hobby and My School Life
My hobby is drawing. It's really fun to create colourful pictures in my free time.
I join the Art Club at school. Every week, we practice drawing different things like flowers and animals there. Sometimes, we also learn to use new painting tools together.
This hobby makes my school life better. It helps me relax after class. Also, I make friends with other members of the club. We often share our ideas and enjoy our time in the club. Drawing makes my school life full of fun!
【知识点】
英语话题写作、校园生活话题
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，语言简洁通顺，结构清晰，符合初中生写作水平，很好地体现了爱好对校园生活的积极作用。
【难度系数】
0.7
