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请根据下表提示，以“My dream community”为题用英语写一篇短文。
【要求】1. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名。
2. 段落清楚，中心突出，意思连贯，书写规范。
3. 内容必须包括以上信息，可适当发挥。
4. 不少于 100 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My dream community
Hello, I’m happy to tell you something about my dream community.
【要求】1. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名。
2. 段落清楚，中心突出，意思连贯，书写规范。
3. 内容必须包括以上信息，可适当发挥。
4. 不少于 100 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My dream community
Hello, I’m happy to tell you something about my dream community.
My dream community is very big. But there aren't many people living there. There are lots of trees in the neighbourhood, so the air there is fresh. We have a big
garden, a swimming pool and a playground. We can have a good time playing in those places. All my neighbours are nice and helpful. Some of them are volunteers with different skills. If we have any problems, they can help us. They also help old people do some shopping and clean their houses. If children have problems with their lessons, they will give them a helping hand. I will do some things for my community. I am going to pick up the rubbish in the community centre. If my neighbour is not good at English, I will help her/him with her/his English after school. My community will be a good place to live in.
答案
One possible version:
My dream community
Hello, I'm happy to tell you something about my dream community. My dream community is very big. But there aren't many people living there. There are lots of trees in the neighbourhood, so the air there is fresh. We have a big
garden, a swimming pool and a playground. We can have a good time playing in those places. All my neighbours are nice and helpful. Some of them are volunteers with different skills. If we have any problems, they can help us. They also help old people do some shopping and clean their houses. If children have problems with their lessons, they will give them a helping hand. I will do some things for my community. I am going to pick up the rubbish in the community centre. If my neighbour is not good at English, I will help her/him with her/his English after school. My community will be a good place to live in.
My dream community
Hello, I'm happy to tell you something about my dream community. My dream community is very big. But there aren't many people living there. There are lots of trees in the neighbourhood, so the air there is fresh. We have a big
garden, a swimming pool and a playground. We can have a good time playing in those places. All my neighbours are nice and helpful. Some of them are volunteers with different skills. If we have any problems, they can help us. They also help old people do some shopping and clean their houses. If children have problems with their lessons, they will give them a helping hand. I will do some things for my community. I am going to pick up the rubbish in the community centre. If my neighbour is not good at English, I will help her/him with her/his English after school. My community will be a good place to live in.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作主题是“My dream community”，第一步先梳理所有给定的提示要点，避免遗漏：首先按照逻辑顺序排布内容，先承接给定的开头，先介绍社区的基本概况：面积大、居民数量不多；接下来顺承介绍社区的配套设施和整体环境，把花园、操场、游泳池这些设施，以及树木繁茂、空气清新的环境特点自然串联，还可以补充一点大家可以在这些设施里休闲玩耍的细节，让内容更生动；之后介绍邻里的特点，把邻居友善热心、有不同技能的志愿者帮大家解决各类问题、帮扶老人、辅导孩子学习的内容完整表述；最后介绍自己打算为社区做的两件事，比如主动捡拾社区垃圾、帮邻居辅导英语这类符合学生身份的内容，最后收尾点出这是非常宜居的理想社区。写作时注意描述客观情况用一般现在时，描述自己的计划用be going to/一般将来时，保证词数达标，逻辑连贯，不要出现真实校名姓名即可。
【解析】
本篇写作可以按照总分总的结构展开：
1. 承接给定开头，首先点明理想社区的基础属性：面积很大，居住的居民不多。
2. 接下来介绍社区环境与配套：先写社区里遍布树木，空气十分清新，再依次介绍社区配备的大花园、游泳池、操场，说明居民可以在这些场所休闲娱乐，丰富内容。
3. 之后介绍邻里氛围：点明所有邻居都友善乐于助人，部分邻居是拥有不同技能的志愿者，不管居民遇到什么问题都可以求助他们，他们会帮老人采购物资、打扫房屋，也会给学习有困难的孩子提供帮助。
4. 最后介绍自己为社区的规划：说明自己打算为社区做贡献，比如主动捡拾社区公共区域的垃圾，课后帮英语不好的邻居辅导功课，最后收尾点出这个社区会是非常适合居住的好地方。
全程注意语句通顺，所有提示要点全部覆盖，词数超过100词，符合题目全部要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My dream community
Hello, I'm happy to tell you something about my dream community. My dream community is very big. But there aren't many people living there. There are lots of trees in the neighbourhood, so the air there is fresh. We have a big garden, a swimming pool and a playground. We can have a good time playing in those places. All my neighbours are nice and helpful. Some of them are volunteers with different skills. If we have any problems, they can help us. They also help old people do some shopping and clean their houses. If children have problems with their lessons, they will give them a helping hand. I will do some things for my community. I am going to pick up the rubbish in the community centre. If my neighbour is not good at English, I will help her/him with her/his English after school. My community will be a good place to live in.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
一般将来时应用
情景作文表达
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部提示要点，结构清晰层次分明，从社区基础概况、配套设施、居住环境、邻里氛围到个人服务社区的规划层层递进，行文流畅自然，还适当补充了符合逻辑的细节内容，用到了with different skills、give a helping hand等亮点短语，词数符合要求，完全满足题目的各项写作规则。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题先明确写作主题是“My dream community”，第一步先梳理所有给定的提示要点，避免遗漏：首先按照逻辑顺序排布内容，先承接给定的开头，先介绍社区的基本概况：面积大、居民数量不多；接下来顺承介绍社区的配套设施和整体环境，把花园、操场、游泳池这些设施，以及树木繁茂、空气清新的环境特点自然串联，还可以补充一点大家可以在这些设施里休闲玩耍的细节，让内容更生动；之后介绍邻里的特点，把邻居友善热心、有不同技能的志愿者帮大家解决各类问题、帮扶老人、辅导孩子学习的内容完整表述；最后介绍自己打算为社区做的两件事，比如主动捡拾社区垃圾、帮邻居辅导英语这类符合学生身份的内容，最后收尾点出这是非常宜居的理想社区。写作时注意描述客观情况用一般现在时，描述自己的计划用be going to/一般将来时，保证词数达标，逻辑连贯，不要出现真实校名姓名即可。
【解析】
本篇写作可以按照总分总的结构展开：
1. 承接给定开头，首先点明理想社区的基础属性：面积很大，居住的居民不多。
2. 接下来介绍社区环境与配套：先写社区里遍布树木，空气十分清新，再依次介绍社区配备的大花园、游泳池、操场，说明居民可以在这些场所休闲娱乐，丰富内容。
3. 之后介绍邻里氛围：点明所有邻居都友善乐于助人，部分邻居是拥有不同技能的志愿者，不管居民遇到什么问题都可以求助他们，他们会帮老人采购物资、打扫房屋，也会给学习有困难的孩子提供帮助。
4. 最后介绍自己为社区的规划：说明自己打算为社区做贡献，比如主动捡拾社区公共区域的垃圾，课后帮英语不好的邻居辅导功课，最后收尾点出这个社区会是非常适合居住的好地方。
全程注意语句通顺，所有提示要点全部覆盖，词数超过100词，符合题目全部要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My dream community
Hello, I'm happy to tell you something about my dream community. My dream community is very big. But there aren't many people living there. There are lots of trees in the neighbourhood, so the air there is fresh. We have a big garden, a swimming pool and a playground. We can have a good time playing in those places. All my neighbours are nice and helpful. Some of them are volunteers with different skills. If we have any problems, they can help us. They also help old people do some shopping and clean their houses. If children have problems with their lessons, they will give them a helping hand. I will do some things for my community. I am going to pick up the rubbish in the community centre. If my neighbour is not good at English, I will help her/him with her/his English after school. My community will be a good place to live in.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
一般将来时应用
情景作文表达
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部提示要点，结构清晰层次分明，从社区基础概况、配套设施、居住环境、邻里氛围到个人服务社区的规划层层递进，行文流畅自然，还适当补充了符合逻辑的细节内容，用到了with different skills、give a helping hand等亮点短语，词数符合要求，完全满足题目的各项写作规则。
【难度系数】
0.7
