任务情境
学校即将举办以"志愿服务分享"为主题的英语演讲活动,号召同学们积极参与志愿服务。请你以"My Volunteer Experience"为题,写一篇英语演讲稿,内容需要包含:
1. 介绍自己参与过的志愿服务活动;
2. 描述在活动中完成的具体任务;
3. 分享此次志愿服务给自己带来的收获与感悟。
要求:
1. 词数80-120,标题已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 语言流畅,语法正确;
3. 符合演讲稿的格式与语气。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时和现在完成时
3. 结构:

素材积累
1. 主题词块
①有作用;有影响
②老人;上了年纪的人
③赶快;跟着来
④分发
⑤通晓;熟悉
⑥打扫干净
⑦指引方向
⑧给垃圾分类
⑨收集捐赠物
⑩敬老院
2. 句型仿写
①It's important to care for the elderly.
(教材p.74 3a)
句型:It's+adj.+to do sth.
仿写:我认为对他们来说自信很重要。

②Ladies and gentlemen, thank you for inviting me to speak to you about Blue Sky Rescue today.(教材p.76 1b)
句型:thank you for doing sth
仿写:亲爱的老师和同学们,感谢你们聆听我的演讲。

③Since then, I've wanted to help others too.(教材p.76 1b)
句型:现在完成时+since then
仿写:从那以后,我已经花了很多天的时间帮助他们。

④Working as a volunteer has taught me many practical life-saving skills.(教材p.77 1b)
句型:动词-ing形式作主语+现在完成时
仿写:做志愿者对我产生了很大的影响。

连句成篇
My Volunteer Experience

【主题写作·迁移】
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①make a difference ②the elderly
③come along ④hand out
⑤familiar with ⑥clean up
⑦give directions ⑧sort waste
⑨collect donations ⑩a nursing home
2. 句型仿写
①I think it's important for them to be confident.
② Dear teachers and classmates, thank you for listening to my speech.
③I have spent many days helping them since then.
④Working as a volunteer has made a big difference to me.
【连句成篇】
My Volunteer Experience
Dear teachers and classmates, thank you for listening to my speech. I'm excited to share my volunteer experience with you.
Last winter vacation, I joined a community service project to help kids with their studies. I have spent many days helping them since then. I have taught them how to work out maths problems, helped them improve their reading skills, and even organized fun English games. I have also shared my study methods and encouraged them to believe in themselves. I think it's important for them to be confident.
Working as a volunteer has made a big difference to me. Helping others makes me feel proud and happy. When I saw the kids' progress, I knew all my efforts were worth it. I will take part in more volunteer activities in the future.
Let's work together to make the world a better place! Thank you!

【分析】
本题为英语演讲稿写作任务，主题为“My Volunteer Experience”，需围绕志愿服务经历完成写作。解题思路：1. 明确要求：涵盖介绍志愿活动、具体任务、感悟，符合演讲稿格式，词数80-120，人称第一人称，时态用一般现在时和现在完成时；2. 利用给定的素材积累（主题词块、句型仿写）搭建内容框架；3. 按照思维导图结构：开头问候+点题，主体详述活动、任务、感悟，结尾号召；4. 检查语言流畅度、语法正确性，确保符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：以演讲稿常用问候语“Dear teachers and classmates”开篇，运用句型“thank you for doing sth”引出主题，点题分享志愿经历；2. 主体：①介绍参与的志愿服务活动（如社区帮助孩子学习）；②列举具体任务：用“现在完成时+since then”的句型，结合主题词块，写教数学、提升阅读、组织游戏等；③分享感悟：用“It's+adj+to do sth”和动名词作主语的句型，表达帮助他人的收获；3. 结尾：总结感悟，发出“参与志愿服务”的号召，符合演讲稿收尾要求；4. 调整词数至80-120，确保语言流畅、语法正确。
【答案】
My Volunteer Experience
Dear teachers and classmates, thank you for listening to my speech. I'm excited to share my volunteer experience with you.
Last winter vacation, I joined a community service project to help kids with their studies. I have spent many days helping them since then. I have taught them how to work out maths problems, helped them improve their reading skills, and even organized fun English games. I have also shared my study methods and encouraged them to believe in themselves. I think it's important for them to be confident.
Working as a volunteer has made a big difference to me. Helping others makes me feel proud and happy. When I saw the kids' progress, I knew all my efforts were worth it. I will take part in more volunteer activities in the future.
Let's work together to make the world a better place! Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语词汇运用、英语句型仿写
【点评】
该演讲稿结构清晰，全面覆盖题目要求的内容，灵活运用给定的素材词块与句型，时态准确，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合演讲稿的格式与语气，适合在学校志愿服务分享活动中使用。
【难度系数】
0.6