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你们或多或少都有零用钱，但是你们思考过应该怎样理智地花零用钱吗？请根据提示，以“How to spend your pocket money wisely”为
题，给出你的合理建议，词数80左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:第二人称。
③ 根据图示信息依次给出你的具体建议。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
你们或多或少都有零用钱，但是你们思考过应该怎样理智地花零用钱吗？请根据提示，以“How to spend your pocket money wisely”为
题，给出你的合理建议，词数80左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:第二人称。
③ 根据图示信息依次给出你的具体建议。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version：
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
解析
【分析】这是一篇建议类英语写作，要求围绕“如何理智使用零用钱”展开。解题思路：首先确定时态为一般现在时，人称用第二人称；接着承接题干给出的开头，分三点给出具体可行的建议，分别是列购物清单（明确真实需求，避免冲动消费）、用零用钱帮助有需要的人、合理储蓄（如使用存钱罐）；最后呼应储蓄的意义，确保内容贴合主题，词数符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接题干开头，引出建议；2. 分三点阐述：①列清单：拿到零用钱后，先写下真正需要的物品及价格再购买，避免浪费；②帮助他人：用零用钱帮助有需要的人，传递善意；③合理储蓄：不要花光零用钱，用存钱罐储蓄，获得成就感；3. 确保时态正确，语句通顺，词数约80，符合要求。
【答案】How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
【知识点】英语写作、建议类作文
【点评】本题结合学生生活实际，考查实用英语写作能力，要求学生围绕主题给出合理建议，锻炼逻辑表达与语言运用能力，贴合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接题干开头，引出建议；2. 分三点阐述：①列清单：拿到零用钱后，先写下真正需要的物品及价格再购买，避免浪费；②帮助他人：用零用钱帮助有需要的人，传递善意；③合理储蓄：不要花光零用钱，用存钱罐储蓄，获得成就感；3. 确保时态正确，语句通顺，词数约80，符合要求。
【答案】How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
【知识点】英语写作、建议类作文
【点评】本题结合学生生活实际，考查实用英语写作能力，要求学生围绕主题给出合理建议，锻炼逻辑表达与语言运用能力，贴合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】0.6
