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五、书面表达。
芳草萋萋添雅趣，活力满园促成长。假如你是李华，请根据表格内容，给校长写一封建议信。
建 议
增加体育器材数量
延长图书馆开放时间
增加课后俱乐部
开辟校园小花园
理 由
许多学生热爱运动……
课后能借阅图书……
学生们希望加入不同的俱乐部，他们能……
使校园更加美丽……
参考词汇：体育器材 sports facilities 创建 create
注意：1. 词数90左右，已给出部分不计入总词数；2. 信中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Mr. Wang，
I am writing to make suggestions on
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
芳草萋萋添雅趣，活力满园促成长。假如你是李华，请根据表格内容，给校长写一封建议信。
建 议
增加体育器材数量
延长图书馆开放时间
增加课后俱乐部
开辟校园小花园
理 由
许多学生热爱运动……
课后能借阅图书……学生们希望加入不同的俱乐部，他们能……
使校园更加美丽……
参考词汇：体育器材 sports facilities 创建 create
注意：1. 词数90左右，已给出部分不计入总词数；2. 信中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Mr. Wang，
I am writing to make suggestions on
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to make suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
First, I would like to suggest that our school add more sports facilities. Many students love sports, and sports are good for them.
Second, I think that the library should be open until 6:00 p. m. We can borrow books after school. Reading books can open our minds.
Third, students hope to join different clubs because they can make friends with shared interests.
Finally, I think it will be a good idea to create a small garden. It can make our school look more beautiful. We can learn a lot from nature.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to make suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
First, I would like to suggest that our school add more sports facilities. Many students love sports, and sports are good for them.
Second, I think that the library should be open until 6:00 p. m. We can borrow books after school. Reading books can open our minds.
Third, students hope to join different clubs because they can make friends with shared interests.
Finally, I think it will be a good idea to create a small garden. It can make our school look more beautiful. We can learn a lot from nature.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语建议信写作题，需根据给定的建议及对应理由，以李华的身份给校长写一封90词左右的建议信。解题思路：首先明确建议信的格式（开头称呼、结尾署名）；其次围绕表格的四个建议，将每个建议与补充后的合理理由用通顺的英语表达，注意使用建议类常用句式（如suggest that...），补充细节让内容更充实，同时符合书信的正式语气，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
1. 开头：点明写信目的是对学校生活的改进提建议；
2. 分述建议：①建议增加体育器材，理由为很多学生热爱运动，运动有益健康；②建议延长图书馆开放时间，如到下午6点，课后可借阅图书，读书能开阔思维；③建议增加课后俱乐部，学生能结交有共同兴趣的朋友；④建议开辟小花园，理由为能让校园更美丽，还能从自然中学习；
3. 结尾：表达希望建议有帮助，署名。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to make suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
First, I would like to suggest that our school add more sports facilities. Many students love sports, and sports are good for them.
Second, I think that the library should be open until 6:00 p. m. We can borrow books after school. Reading books can open our minds.
Third, students hope to join different clubs because they can make friends with shared interests.
Finally, I think it will be a good idea to create a small garden. It can make our school look more beautiful. We can learn a lot from nature.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语建议信写作、英语书信格式、英语建议类句式运用
【点评】
本题为英语书面表达中的常规应用文写作，紧密结合校园生活场景，考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行正式写作的能力，要求学生准确传达观点，符合书信的语气要求，是中学阶段常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语建议信写作题，需根据给定的建议及对应理由，以李华的身份给校长写一封90词左右的建议信。解题思路：首先明确建议信的格式（开头称呼、结尾署名）；其次围绕表格的四个建议，将每个建议与补充后的合理理由用通顺的英语表达，注意使用建议类常用句式（如suggest that...），补充细节让内容更充实，同时符合书信的正式语气，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
1. 开头：点明写信目的是对学校生活的改进提建议；
2. 分述建议：①建议增加体育器材，理由为很多学生热爱运动，运动有益健康；②建议延长图书馆开放时间，如到下午6点，课后可借阅图书，读书能开阔思维；③建议增加课后俱乐部，学生能结交有共同兴趣的朋友；④建议开辟小花园，理由为能让校园更美丽，还能从自然中学习；
3. 结尾：表达希望建议有帮助，署名。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to make suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
First, I would like to suggest that our school add more sports facilities. Many students love sports, and sports are good for them.
Second, I think that the library should be open until 6:00 p. m. We can borrow books after school. Reading books can open our minds.
Third, students hope to join different clubs because they can make friends with shared interests.
Finally, I think it will be a good idea to create a small garden. It can make our school look more beautiful. We can learn a lot from nature.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语建议信写作、英语书信格式、英语建议类句式运用
【点评】
本题为英语书面表达中的常规应用文写作，紧密结合校园生活场景，考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行正式写作的能力，要求学生准确传达观点，符合书信的语气要求，是中学阶段常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
