五、书面表达。
工作不分贵贱,平凡的岗位也能为社会做出贡献。请你根据表格中的信息,以“A Good Cleaner”为题,用英语写一篇短文,并在英语口语课上和你的同学分享。

写作要求:
1. 文中须包含表格中所给的全部内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右。
A Good Cleaner
工作不分贵贱,平凡的岗位也能为社会做出贡献。请你根据表格中的信息,以“A Good Cleaner”为题,用英语写一篇短文,并在英语口语课上和你的同学分享。
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含表格中所给的全部内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右。
A Good Cleaner
答案
A Good Cleaner
Zhang Fan is a cleaner in our city park. Every day, he gets up very early and goes to work. He begins to work at 5:30 in the morning. He sweeps the roads and picks up rubbish in the park. He must finish his work before 8:30 a.m. because the park is always open at that time.
Zhang Fan loves his job and enjoys working in the park. Seeing a clean and beautiful park in front of him, he feels very proud.
Zhang Fan is a cleaner in our city park. Every day, he gets up very early and goes to work. He begins to work at 5:30 in the morning. He sweeps the roads and picks up rubbish in the park. He must finish his work before 8:30 a.m. because the park is always open at that time.
Zhang Fan loves his job and enjoys working in the park. Seeing a clean and beautiful park in front of him, he feels very proud.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以“A Good Cleaner”为题,结合表格信息完成短文。解题思路:首先明确需包含表格中所有内容(姓名、职业、工作时间、日常工作、感受),其次适当补充合理细节(如早起、公园开放时间),控制词数约70,避免真实信息,确保语言通顺、主题明确,符合英语口语课分享的场景。
【解析】
写作时先介绍人物身份:Zhang Fan是城市公园的清洁工;接着说明工作时间(从早上5:30到8:30)和日常工作(扫路、捡垃圾);最后表达他的感受(因工作成果感到自豪),完整覆盖表格信息,补充细节使内容更连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】
A Good Cleaner
Zhang Fan is a cleaner in our city park. Every day, he gets up very early and goes to work. He begins to work at 5:30 in the morning. He sweeps the roads and picks up rubbish in the park. He must finish his work before 8:30 a.m. because the park is always open at that time.
Zhang Fan loves his job and enjoys working in the park. Seeing a clean and beautiful park in front of him, he feels very proud.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、信息整合、英语写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,完整涵盖表格全部信息,补充了合理细节使内容更连贯,语言流畅自然,主题突出,符合词数要求,适合英语口语课分享。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以“A Good Cleaner”为题,结合表格信息完成短文。解题思路:首先明确需包含表格中所有内容(姓名、职业、工作时间、日常工作、感受),其次适当补充合理细节(如早起、公园开放时间),控制词数约70,避免真实信息,确保语言通顺、主题明确,符合英语口语课分享的场景。
【解析】
写作时先介绍人物身份:Zhang Fan是城市公园的清洁工;接着说明工作时间(从早上5:30到8:30)和日常工作(扫路、捡垃圾);最后表达他的感受(因工作成果感到自豪),完整覆盖表格信息,补充细节使内容更连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】
A Good Cleaner
Zhang Fan is a cleaner in our city park. Every day, he gets up very early and goes to work. He begins to work at 5:30 in the morning. He sweeps the roads and picks up rubbish in the park. He must finish his work before 8:30 a.m. because the park is always open at that time.
Zhang Fan loves his job and enjoys working in the park. Seeing a clean and beautiful park in front of him, he feels very proud.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、信息整合、英语写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,完整涵盖表格全部信息,补充了合理细节使内容更连贯,语言流畅自然,主题突出,符合词数要求,适合英语口语课分享。
【难度系数】
0.6
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