六、书面表达。
假如你是Jenny,你的好朋友David因病没来上学。请你给他发一封邮件表示关心,并告诉他如何保持身体健康。内容包括:
1.多休息,按时吃药;
2.多吃水果和蔬菜,不吃快餐;
3.多运动,如跑步、游泳等。
注意:1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you're not feeling well. I'd like to give you some advice.
Follow the ways, and you will be healthy.
Yours,
Jenny
假如你是Jenny,你的好朋友David因病没来上学。请你给他发一封邮件表示关心,并告诉他如何保持身体健康。内容包括:
1.多休息,按时吃药;
2.多吃水果和蔬菜,不吃快餐;
3.多运动,如跑步、游泳等。
注意:1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you're not feeling well. I'd like to give you some advice.
Follow the ways, and you will be healthy.
Yours,
Jenny
答案
You should have a good rest and take medicine on time. Don't worry about your lessons, I can help you with them later. Eat more fruit and vegetables instead of fast food—it's not good for your health. You can also do some sports like running or swimming to keep strong. I hope you will get well soon.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以Jenny的身份给生病的好友David写一封邮件,需包含关心、健康建议的内容。解题思路:1. 明确邮件结构,开头结尾已给出,只需补充中间段落;2. 紧扣题目指定的三个核心要点(多休息按时吃药、多吃果蔬不吃快餐、多运动),适当添加合理细节(如主动提出帮补落下的功课)让行文更连贯;3. 控制词数在80左右,语言要贴合关心的语气,确保语法正确、表达自然。
【解析】首先承接开头的关心,先给出休息和按时吃药的建议,补充“不用担心功课,我之后可以帮你”的细节;接着说明饮食建议,多吃水果和蔬菜代替快餐,点明快餐对健康不利;然后补充运动建议,列举跑步、游泳等运动;最后表达早日康复的祝愿,衔接结尾。按照该逻辑组织语言,确保覆盖所有要点,语言通顺符合邮件交际语境。
【答案】You should have a good rest and take medicine on time. Don't worry about your lessons, I can help you with them later. Eat more fruit and vegetables instead of fast food—it's not good for your health. You can also do some sports like running or swimming to keep strong. I hope you will get well soon.
【知识点】英语书面表达、邮件写作、健康建议表达
【点评】本题考查学生运用英语进行应用文写作的能力,要求紧扣给定要点,语言连贯自然,符合日常交际场景,适合初中阶段学生练习,能有效考查学生的语言组织与运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先承接开头的关心,先给出休息和按时吃药的建议,补充“不用担心功课,我之后可以帮你”的细节;接着说明饮食建议,多吃水果和蔬菜代替快餐,点明快餐对健康不利;然后补充运动建议,列举跑步、游泳等运动;最后表达早日康复的祝愿,衔接结尾。按照该逻辑组织语言,确保覆盖所有要点,语言通顺符合邮件交际语境。
【答案】You should have a good rest and take medicine on time. Don't worry about your lessons, I can help you with them later. Eat more fruit and vegetables instead of fast food—it's not good for your health. You can also do some sports like running or swimming to keep strong. I hope you will get well soon.
【知识点】英语书面表达、邮件写作、健康建议表达
【点评】本题考查学生运用英语进行应用文写作的能力,要求紧扣给定要点,语言连贯自然,符合日常交际场景,适合初中阶段学生练习,能有效考查学生的语言组织与运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
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