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在你的成长历程中,一定收到过各种各样的礼物。有些礼物看似普通,却对你意义非凡。请你根据以下提示,以“The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received”为题写一篇英语短文,描述你收到过的最特别的礼物,以及它背后的故事。
提示:1. What is the most special gift you have ever received?
2. How did you get it?
3. Why is it special to you?
要求:1. 短文必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 词数80左右。
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
在你的成长历程中,一定收到过各种各样的礼物。有些礼物看似普通,却对你意义非凡。请你根据以下提示,以“The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received”为题写一篇英语短文,描述你收到过的最特别的礼物,以及它背后的故事。
提示:1. What is the most special gift you have ever received?
2. How did you get it?
3. Why is it special to you?
要求:1. 短文必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 词数80左右。
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is a toy car made of wood.
I got it at the age of five and I have had it for about 10 years. It was a handmade birthday gift from my grandfather. When I was young, I would take it with me wherever I went.
When I felt sad, it would always bring me comfort. My grandpa died last year.
Whenever I see the toy car, it reminds me of the happy times we spent together and inspires me to work much harder.
Time flies, but memories stay. The toy car will forever hold a special place in my heart.
答案
A One possible version:
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is a toy car made of wood.
I got it at the age of five and I have had it for about 10 years. It was a handmade birthday gift from my grandfather. When I was young, I would take it with me wherever I went. When I felt sad, it would always bring me comfort. My grandpa died last year. Whenever I see the toy car, it reminds me of the happy times we spent together and inspires me to work much harder.
Time flies, but memories stay. The toy car will forever hold a special place in my heart.
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is a toy car made of wood.
I got it at the age of five and I have had it for about 10 years. It was a handmade birthday gift from my grandfather. When I was young, I would take it with me wherever I went. When I felt sad, it would always bring me comfort. My grandpa died last year. Whenever I see the toy car, it reminds me of the happy times we spent together and inspires me to work much harder.
Time flies, but memories stay. The toy car will forever hold a special place in my heart.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“我收到的最特别的礼物”，需紧扣三个提示完成写作：确定具体礼物、说明礼物的获得方式、阐述礼物的特别意义。写作思路为：1. 开篇直接点明最特别的礼物是木制玩具车；2. 中间依次回应提示：交代获得背景（五岁时爷爷手工制作的生日礼物）、说明特别原因（承载与爷爷的回忆，给予成长动力）；3. 结尾升华情感，呼应主题，确保符合词数要求，语句通顺。
【解析】按照英语短文写作的“总-分-总”结构展开：① 开头点题，明确最特别的礼物是木制玩具车；② 中间部分依次回答提示问题：说明获得方式（爷爷手工制作的五岁生日礼物，已拥有10年）、阐述特别之处（陪伴成长，爷爷去世后成为回忆载体，激励自己努力）；③ 结尾升华情感，呼应主题，确保包含所有提示信息，语法正确，词数符合要求。
【答案】The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is a toy car made of wood.
I got it at the age of five and I have had it for about 10 years. It was a handmade birthday gift from my grandfather. When I was young, I would take it with me wherever I went. When I felt sad, it would always bring me comfort. My grandpa died last year. Whenever I see the toy car, it reminds me of the happy times we spent together and inspires me to work much harder.
Time flies, but memories stay. The toy car will forever hold a special place in my heart.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；英语短文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示信息，情感真挚，条理清晰，语言通顺，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照英语短文写作的“总-分-总”结构展开：① 开头点题，明确最特别的礼物是木制玩具车；② 中间部分依次回答提示问题：说明获得方式（爷爷手工制作的五岁生日礼物，已拥有10年）、阐述特别之处（陪伴成长，爷爷去世后成为回忆载体，激励自己努力）；③ 结尾升华情感，呼应主题，确保包含所有提示信息，语法正确，词数符合要求。
【答案】The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is a toy car made of wood.
I got it at the age of five and I have had it for about 10 years. It was a handmade birthday gift from my grandfather. When I was young, I would take it with me wherever I went. When I felt sad, it would always bring me comfort. My grandpa died last year. Whenever I see the toy car, it reminds me of the happy times we spent together and inspires me to work much harder.
Time flies, but memories stay. The toy car will forever hold a special place in my heart.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；英语短文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示信息，情感真挚，条理清晰，语言通顺，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
B
作为一名中学生,我们既为悠久的历史和灿烂的文化感到骄傲,又为生活的改变和环境的污染感到担心。假如你是李明,为配合“创建文明城市”活动,请以“What Can We Do to Protect Our Environment?”为题,写一篇面向全校师生的倡议书,内容提示如下:
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2.必须包含所给提示,并做适当发挥;
3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名;
4.词数80左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
What Can We Do to Protect Our Environment?
Hello, everyone!
Nowadays, our hometown is trying to build a civilized city. However, the environmental prob-
好学生暑假生活 八年级英语 JJ
lems are becoming more and more serious.
作为一名中学生,我们既为悠久的历史和灿烂的文化感到骄傲,又为生活的改变和环境的污染感到担心。假如你是李明,为配合“创建文明城市”活动,请以“What Can We Do to Protect Our Environment?”为题,写一篇面向全校师生的倡议书,内容提示如下:
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2.必须包含所给提示,并做适当发挥;
3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名;
4.词数80左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
What Can We Do to Protect Our Environment?
Hello, everyone!
Nowadays, our hometown is trying to build a civilized city. However, the environmental prob-
好学生暑假生活 八年级英语 JJ
lems are becoming more and more serious.
Air pollution and water pollution have caused many problems for all the living things. Noise pollution makes it difficult for people to rest.
There are a lot of things we can do to protect the environment. Firstly, we can save things in order to save energy.
We can also reduce pollution by travelling by bike or public transportation.
Last but not least, we should learn to recycle things. We must get into the habit of sorting rubbish.
If everyone does his part, all of us will live in a better environment.
答案
B One possible version:
What Can We Do to Protect Our Environment?
Hello, everyone!
Nowadays, our hometown is trying to build a civilized city. However, the environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. Air pollution and water pollution have caused many problems for all the living things. Noise pollution makes it difficult for people to rest.
There are a lot of things we can do to protect the environment. Firstly, we can save things in order to save energy. We can also reduce pollution by travelling by bike or public transportation. Last but not least, we should learn to recycle things. We must get into the habit of sorting rubbish.
If everyone does his part, all of us will live in a better environment.
What Can We Do to Protect Our Environment?
Hello, everyone!
Nowadays, our hometown is trying to build a civilized city. However, the environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. Air pollution and water pollution have caused many problems for all the living things. Noise pollution makes it difficult for people to rest.
There are a lot of things we can do to protect the environment. Firstly, we can save things in order to save energy. We can also reduce pollution by travelling by bike or public transportation. Last but not least, we should learn to recycle things. We must get into the habit of sorting rubbish.
If everyone does his part, all of us will live in a better environment.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以中学生身份写一篇面向全校师生的环保倡议书，配合“创建文明城市”活动。解题思路：1. 承接已给开头，列举具体环境问题（对应表格“Problems”部分，如空气污染、水污染等）；2. 围绕表格“Suggestions”部分，给出具体可行的环保建议（如节约资源、绿色出行、垃圾分类等）；3. 结尾表达对美好环境的期望，呼吁师生共同行动，注意词数80左右，语句通顺，无真实信息。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头点明环境问题的严重性，列举空气污染、水污染、噪音污染等具体问题；再分点给出环保建议，对应表格中“save things”“reduce pollution”等内容，如节约物品、选择公共交通出行、垃圾分类回收；最后发出呼吁，表达对更好环境的期望，确保符合倡议书格式，语法正确，词数达标。
【答案】One possible version:
What Can We Do to Protect Our Environment?
Hello, everyone!
Nowadays, our hometown is trying to build a civilized city. However, the environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. Air pollution and water pollution have caused many problems for all the living things. Noise pollution makes it difficult for people to rest.
There are a lot of things we can do to protect the environment. Firstly, we can save things in order to save energy. We can also reduce pollution by travelling by bike or public transportation. Last but not least, we should learn to recycle things. We must get into the habit of sorting rubbish.
If everyone does his part, all of us will live in a better environment.
【知识点】英语倡议书写作、环境话题表达、建议类句型
【点评】本题结合图表提示，紧扣“保护环境”主题，结构清晰，符合倡议书格式，内容具体可行，语言简洁连贯，符合八年级英语写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
本题要求以中学生身份写一篇面向全校师生的环保倡议书，配合“创建文明城市”活动。解题思路：1. 承接已给开头，列举具体环境问题（对应表格“Problems”部分，如空气污染、水污染等）；2. 围绕表格“Suggestions”部分，给出具体可行的环保建议（如节约资源、绿色出行、垃圾分类等）；3. 结尾表达对美好环境的期望，呼吁师生共同行动，注意词数80左右，语句通顺，无真实信息。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头点明环境问题的严重性，列举空气污染、水污染、噪音污染等具体问题；再分点给出环保建议，对应表格中“save things”“reduce pollution”等内容，如节约物品、选择公共交通出行、垃圾分类回收；最后发出呼吁，表达对更好环境的期望，确保符合倡议书格式，语法正确，词数达标。
【答案】One possible version:
What Can We Do to Protect Our Environment?
Hello, everyone!
Nowadays, our hometown is trying to build a civilized city. However, the environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. Air pollution and water pollution have caused many problems for all the living things. Noise pollution makes it difficult for people to rest.
There are a lot of things we can do to protect the environment. Firstly, we can save things in order to save energy. We can also reduce pollution by travelling by bike or public transportation. Last but not least, we should learn to recycle things. We must get into the habit of sorting rubbish.
If everyone does his part, all of us will live in a better environment.
【知识点】英语倡议书写作、环境话题表达、建议类句型
【点评】本题结合图表提示，紧扣“保护环境”主题，结构清晰，符合倡议书格式，内容具体可行，语言简洁连贯，符合八年级英语写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
