C
同学们,暑假就要来了。怎样过一个充实又有意义的暑假呢?请根据下图提示,写一篇80词左右的短文。

要求:1. 文中应包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Summer vacation is coming! Have you made your plans already? Now let me tell you something about mine.
同学们,暑假就要来了。怎样过一个充实又有意义的暑假呢?请根据下图提示,写一篇80词左右的短文。
要求:1. 文中应包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Summer vacation is coming! Have you made your plans already? Now let me tell you something about mine.
First, I need 15 minutes' morning reading to improve my reading skills every day. I am going to take swimming classes.
Second, I want to help my mum with the chores, such as doing the laundry, sweeping the floor or taking out the trash.
Third, I want to be a volunteer to help the people who need help.
Last, I will visit my hometown with my parents. We will stay there for a week. Then we are going to visit Sanya.
We want to go to the beach and have fun together.
I think I will have a happy and relaxing summer holiday.
答案
C One possible version:
Summer vacation is coming! Have you made your plans already? Now let me tell you something about mine.
First, I need 15 minutes' morning reading to improve my reading skills every day. I am going to take swimming classes. Second, I want to help my mum with the chores, such as doing the laundry, sweeping the floor or taking out the trash. Third, I want to be a volunteer to help the people who need help. Last, I will visit my hometown with my parents. We will stay there for a week. Then we are going to visit Sanya. We want to go to the beach and have fun together.
I think I will have a happy and relaxing summer holiday.
Summer vacation is coming! Have you made your plans already? Now let me tell you something about mine.
First, I need 15 minutes' morning reading to improve my reading skills every day. I am going to take swimming classes. Second, I want to help my mum with the chores, such as doing the laundry, sweeping the floor or taking out the trash. Third, I want to be a volunteer to help the people who need help. Last, I will visit my hometown with my parents. We will stay there for a week. Then we are going to visit Sanya. We want to go to the beach and have fun together.
I think I will have a happy and relaxing summer holiday.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作要求:需根据思维导图的6个提示(help parents、volunteer、visit my hometown、travel、read、take swimming classes)完成短文,开头已给出,使用一般将来时,结构清晰,适当发挥,80词左右,不得出现真实信息。解题步骤:1. 梳理思维导图所有要点,确保不遗漏;2. 用连接词串联要点,使文章连贯;3. 添加合理细节丰富内容;4. 检查是否符合要求。
【解析】
承接开头,依次描述暑假计划:首先,每天安排阅读提升技能,还会上游泳课;其次,帮父母做家务;第三,做志愿者帮助他人;最后,和父母回老家,之后去三亚旅行。使用一般将来时表达计划,添加细节使内容充实,涵盖所有提示,符合词数要求,语言通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
Summer vacation is coming! Have you made your plans already? Now let me tell you something about mine.
First, I need 15 minutes' morning reading to improve my reading skills every day. I am going to take swimming classes. Second, I want to help my mum with the chores, such as doing the laundry, sweeping the floor or taking out the trash. Third, I want to be a volunteer to help the people who need help. Last, I will visit my hometown with my parents. We will stay there for a week. Then we are going to visit Sanya. We want to go to the beach and have fun together.
I think I will have a happy and relaxing summer holiday.
【知识点】
英语写作、一般将来时、要点整合
【点评】
本题考查学生根据思维导图提示进行英语写作的能力,要求涵盖所有提示内容,适当发挥,语言通顺,是初中英语基础写作题型,注重信息整合与语言表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作要求:需根据思维导图的6个提示(help parents、volunteer、visit my hometown、travel、read、take swimming classes)完成短文,开头已给出,使用一般将来时,结构清晰,适当发挥,80词左右,不得出现真实信息。解题步骤:1. 梳理思维导图所有要点,确保不遗漏;2. 用连接词串联要点,使文章连贯;3. 添加合理细节丰富内容;4. 检查是否符合要求。
【解析】
承接开头,依次描述暑假计划:首先,每天安排阅读提升技能,还会上游泳课;其次,帮父母做家务;第三,做志愿者帮助他人;最后,和父母回老家,之后去三亚旅行。使用一般将来时表达计划,添加细节使内容充实,涵盖所有提示,符合词数要求,语言通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
Summer vacation is coming! Have you made your plans already? Now let me tell you something about mine.
First, I need 15 minutes' morning reading to improve my reading skills every day. I am going to take swimming classes. Second, I want to help my mum with the chores, such as doing the laundry, sweeping the floor or taking out the trash. Third, I want to be a volunteer to help the people who need help. Last, I will visit my hometown with my parents. We will stay there for a week. Then we are going to visit Sanya. We want to go to the beach and have fun together.
I think I will have a happy and relaxing summer holiday.
【知识点】
英语写作、一般将来时、要点整合
【点评】
本题考查学生根据思维导图提示进行英语写作的能力,要求涵盖所有提示内容,适当发挥,语言通顺,是初中英语基础写作题型,注重信息整合与语言表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
D
时光荏苒,初中生活还剩一年。回想过去的两年初中生活,你是否觉得自己改变了许多?
请你根据以下提示,以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈上初中后,你在哪些方面发生了变化。
提示:1.生活和学习方面的变化;
2.对这些变化的看法。
要求:1.包括以上提示要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
2.80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school.
时光荏苒,初中生活还剩一年。回想过去的两年初中生活,你是否觉得自己改变了许多?
请你根据以下提示,以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈上初中后,你在哪些方面发生了变化。
提示:1.生活和学习方面的变化;
2.对这些变化的看法。
要求:1.包括以上提示要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
2.80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school.
My life has changed a lot. I used to have a lot of time to play, but now I have to study for my future. I used to spend a lot of time playing sports, but now I stay at home and do some housework. I used to listen to some music programs, but now I am often busy preparing for interesting tests. I used to read a lot of cartoon books, but now I always read books on science. These changes make me a better person and I am glad about them.
答案
D One possible version:
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school. My life has changed a lot. I used to have a lot of time to play, but now I have to study for my future. I used to spend a lot of time playing sports, but now I stay at home and do some housework. I used to listen to some music programs, but now I am often busy preparing for interesting tests. I used to read a lot of cartoon books, but now I always read books on science. These changes make me a better person and I am glad about them.
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school. My life has changed a lot. I used to have a lot of time to play, but now I have to study for my future. I used to spend a lot of time playing sports, but now I stay at home and do some housework. I used to listen to some music programs, but now I am often busy preparing for interesting tests. I used to read a lot of cartoon books, but now I always read books on science. These changes make me a better person and I am glad about them.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题写作题,要求以“Some Changes in My Life”为题,结合初中两年的经历,从生活和学习两方面阐述自身变化,并表达对变化的看法。写作时需利用“过去与现在对比”的手法,承接已给出的开头,补充内容,控制词数在80词左右,适当发挥使短文连贯通顺。
【解析】首先承接开头点明“我的生活变化很大”;接着用“used to+动词原形”与“now”对比,分别从学习(过去常玩耍、看漫画,现在为未来学习、读科学书籍)、生活(过去花时间运动、听音乐,现在做家务、备考)两方面具体描述变化;最后表达积极看法,说明这些变化让自己成为更好的人,对此感到开心。
【答案】One possible version:
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school. My life has changed a lot. I used to have a lot of time to play, but now I have to study for my future. I used to spend a lot of time playing sports, but now I stay at home and do some housework. I used to listen to some music programs, but now I am often busy preparing for interesting tests. I used to read a lot of cartoon books, but now I always read books on science. These changes make me a better person and I am glad about them.
【知识点】英语话题作文写作;时态运用;used to的用法
【点评】本文紧扣主题,采用对比手法清晰呈现初中两年的生活与学习变化,要点齐全,表达自然流畅,符合字数要求,传递了积极的情感态度,是一篇符合要求的短文。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】首先承接开头点明“我的生活变化很大”;接着用“used to+动词原形”与“now”对比,分别从学习(过去常玩耍、看漫画,现在为未来学习、读科学书籍)、生活(过去花时间运动、听音乐,现在做家务、备考)两方面具体描述变化;最后表达积极看法,说明这些变化让自己成为更好的人,对此感到开心。
【答案】One possible version:
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school. My life has changed a lot. I used to have a lot of time to play, but now I have to study for my future. I used to spend a lot of time playing sports, but now I stay at home and do some housework. I used to listen to some music programs, but now I am often busy preparing for interesting tests. I used to read a lot of cartoon books, but now I always read books on science. These changes make me a better person and I am glad about them.
【知识点】英语话题作文写作;时态运用;used to的用法
【点评】本文紧扣主题,采用对比手法清晰呈现初中两年的生活与学习变化,要点齐全,表达自然流畅,符合字数要求,传递了积极的情感态度,是一篇符合要求的短文。
【难度系数】0.7
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