Changes in My School Life
It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double reduction” has been carried out. Our school life has changed a lot.
It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double reduction” has been carried out. Our school life has changed a lot.
I used to have a lot of homework every day. Now the homework is reduced and I hardly feel stressed. I used to be tired during the daytime because I didn't have enough sleep. Now, we sleep more and exercise more. We have more time to do what we like. We can learn efficiently. More importantly, we have more time to stay with our parents and live a happier life.
.答案
I used to have a lot of homework every day. Now the homework is reduced and I hardly feel stressed. I used to be tired during the daytime because I didn't have enough sleep. Now, we sleep more and exercise more. We have more time to do what we like. We can learn efficiently. More importantly, we have more time to stay with our parents and live a happier life.
解析
【分析】
本题为话题作文,要求围绕“双减”政策实施后学校生活的变化展开写作。解题思路:首先明确写作核心是体现“双减”带来的积极改变,采用“过去与现在对比”的结构,从作业量、作息状态、课余生活、亲子关系等具体角度切入,结合自身实际情况阐述变化,确保内容贴合主题、逻辑连贯、语句通顺,符合英语书面表达的要求。
【解析】
本题需完成一篇以“Changes in My School Life”为主题的英语短文,写作步骤如下:
1. 确定时态:描述过去情况用一般过去时,描述现在变化用一般现在时,形成鲜明对比;
2. 选取具体写作角度:①作业层面:过去作业多、压力大,现在作业减少、压力减轻;②作息层面:过去睡眠不足、白天疲惫,现在睡眠充足、增加锻炼;③课余层面:有更多时间做喜欢的事,高效学习;④亲子层面:有更多时间陪伴父母,生活更幸福;
3. 组织语言:用连贯的语句连接各要点,确保表达自然、符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
I used to have a lot of homework every day. Now the homework is reduced and I hardly feel stressed. I used to be tired during the daytime because I didn't have enough sleep. Now, we sleep more and exercise more. We have more time to do what we like. We can learn efficiently. More importantly, we have more time to stay with our parents and live a happier life.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作、时态对比运用
【点评】
本题结合热点政策“双减”,要求学生结合自身实际描述学校生活的变化,既考查学生的英语语言组织与表达能力,又引导学生关注生活、抒发真情实感,写作时需注重内容的具体性与结构的逻辑性。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为话题作文,要求围绕“双减”政策实施后学校生活的变化展开写作。解题思路:首先明确写作核心是体现“双减”带来的积极改变,采用“过去与现在对比”的结构,从作业量、作息状态、课余生活、亲子关系等具体角度切入,结合自身实际情况阐述变化,确保内容贴合主题、逻辑连贯、语句通顺,符合英语书面表达的要求。
【解析】
本题需完成一篇以“Changes in My School Life”为主题的英语短文,写作步骤如下:
1. 确定时态:描述过去情况用一般过去时,描述现在变化用一般现在时,形成鲜明对比;
2. 选取具体写作角度:①作业层面:过去作业多、压力大,现在作业减少、压力减轻;②作息层面:过去睡眠不足、白天疲惫,现在睡眠充足、增加锻炼;③课余层面:有更多时间做喜欢的事,高效学习;④亲子层面:有更多时间陪伴父母,生活更幸福;
3. 组织语言:用连贯的语句连接各要点,确保表达自然、符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
I used to have a lot of homework every day. Now the homework is reduced and I hardly feel stressed. I used to be tired during the daytime because I didn't have enough sleep. Now, we sleep more and exercise more. We have more time to do what we like. We can learn efficiently. More importantly, we have more time to stay with our parents and live a happier life.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作、时态对比运用
【点评】
本题结合热点政策“双减”,要求学生结合自身实际描述学校生活的变化,既考查学生的英语语言组织与表达能力,又引导学生关注生活、抒发真情实感,写作时需注重内容的具体性与结构的逻辑性。
【难度系数】
0.5
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