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六、书面表达。满分20分
近年来,各种各样的灾害时常发生。假如你正参加一场英语写作大赛,请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文,介绍在不同灾害中保护自己的方法,同时提出预防措施。
要求：
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意；
2. 词数80左右；
3. 不得使用真实的姓名或校名。
近年来,各种各样的灾害时常发生。假如你正参加一场英语写作大赛,请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文,介绍在不同灾害中保护自己的方法,同时提出预防措施。
要求：
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意；
2. 词数80左右；
3. 不得使用真实的姓名或校名。
答案
One possible version:
In recent years, there have been
many disasters, such as floods, earthquakes,
fires, sandstorms and so on.
When there is a flood, we should
get to high ground and make sure not to
walk through the flood water. If an
earthquake happens, we can hide under a
strong desk and stay away from
windows. If a fire breaks out, we can use
a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose
and stay low to the ground.
Of course, we should take actions
to prevent future disasters. For
example, we can plant more trees and
protect wild animals. We can also share
some related information with others.
We hope we can have better
preparations in the future.
In recent years, there have been
many disasters, such as floods, earthquakes,
fires, sandstorms and so on.
When there is a flood, we should
get to high ground and make sure not to
walk through the flood water. If an
earthquake happens, we can hide under a
strong desk and stay away from
windows. If a fire breaks out, we can use
a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose
and stay low to the ground.
Of course, we should take actions
to prevent future disasters. For
example, we can plant more trees and
protect wild animals. We can also share
some related information with others.
We hope we can have better
preparations in the future.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：需围绕常见灾害（洪水、地震、火灾等），介绍不同灾害中的自我保护方法，同时提出预防措施，词数80左右，要点齐全、语句通顺。写作思路：1. 开头引入近年来各类灾害频发的现状；2. 分别说明洪水、地震、火灾发生时的自救方法；3. 提出预防未来灾害的措施；4. 收尾表达期望，确保内容连贯、要点完整。
【解析】写作时，先以“In recent years, there have been many disasters, such as floods, earthquakes, fires...”开头引入话题；接着分述不同灾害的自救方法：洪水时“get to high ground”，地震时“hide under a strong desk”，火灾时“use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose”；然后提出预防措施：“plant more trees and protect wild animals”等；最后用“We hope we can have better preparations in the future.”收尾，使用恰当的连接词（如when、if）让语句连贯，控制词数在80左右。
【答案】One possible version:
In recent years, there have been many disasters, such as floods, earthquakes, fires, sandstorms and so on.
When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and make sure not to walk through the flood water. If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from windows. If a fire breaks out, we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground.
Of course, we should take actions to prevent future disasters. For example, we can plant more trees and protect wild animals. We can also share some related information with others.
We hope we can have better preparations in the future.
【知识点】英语书面表达；灾害话题词汇；应用文写作结构
【点评】范文覆盖题目所有要求的要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，语句通顺且符合词数要求，准确运用相关话题的词汇和句型，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时，先以“In recent years, there have been many disasters, such as floods, earthquakes, fires...”开头引入话题；接着分述不同灾害的自救方法：洪水时“get to high ground”，地震时“hide under a strong desk”，火灾时“use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose”；然后提出预防措施：“plant more trees and protect wild animals”等；最后用“We hope we can have better preparations in the future.”收尾，使用恰当的连接词（如when、if）让语句连贯，控制词数在80左右。
【答案】One possible version:
In recent years, there have been many disasters, such as floods, earthquakes, fires, sandstorms and so on.
When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and make sure not to walk through the flood water. If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from windows. If a fire breaks out, we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground.
Of course, we should take actions to prevent future disasters. For example, we can plant more trees and protect wild animals. We can also share some related information with others.
We hope we can have better preparations in the future.
【知识点】英语书面表达；灾害话题词汇；应用文写作结构
【点评】范文覆盖题目所有要求的要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，语句通顺且符合词数要求，准确运用相关话题的词汇和句型，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
