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今年4月7日，你校组织了一次短途旅行，部分学生选择去红星农场，见导图一，其余学生选择去科学博物馆，见导图二。请根据你所选择的游览地点写一篇英语日记，记录当天的经历和感受。
导图一:
导图二:
注意:
1. 日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数80左右，日记格式及首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Friday, April 7th
Today I had a school trip.
今年4月7日，你校组织了一次短途旅行，部分学生选择去红星农场，见导图一，其余学生选择去科学博物馆，见导图二。请根据你所选择的游览地点写一篇英语日记，记录当天的经历和感受。
导图一:
导图二:
注意:
1. 日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数80左右，日记格式及首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Friday, April 7th
Today I had a school trip.
答案
【高分范文】
(1) Friday, April 7th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine.
My classmates and I started off for Hongxing Farm by bus in the morning.
When we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I fed some food to them, they ran over to me. We picked strawberries after lunch. We ate a lot when we picked.
I had a wonderful time today! I hope to go there again in the future!
(2) Friday, April 7th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine.
My classmates and I went to the Science Museum by subway at 7:00 a.m.
When we got to the museum, we were excited to see lots of pictures about science. We watched the video about different scientists. We also learned a lot about science from the video. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots.
I had a wonderful time today! I hope to go there again!
(1) Friday, April 7th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine.
My classmates and I started off for Hongxing Farm by bus in the morning.
When we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I fed some food to them, they ran over to me. We picked strawberries after lunch. We ate a lot when we picked.
I had a wonderful time today! I hope to go there again in the future!
(2) Friday, April 7th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine.
My classmates and I went to the Science Museum by subway at 7:00 a.m.
When we got to the museum, we were excited to see lots of pictures about science. We watched the video about different scientists. We also learned a lot about science from the video. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots.
I had a wonderful time today! I hope to go there again!
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求根据给定的短途旅行地点（红星农场或科学博物馆）写一篇英语日记。解题思路：1. 确定选择的游览地点；2. 梳理该地点的核心活动要点；3. 遵循日记格式，使用一般过去时，补充细节使内容连贯，控制词数在80左右，避免真实信息，准确表达经历与感受。
【解析】以选择红星农场为例，写作步骤：① 承接首句补充天气情况；② 说明出发的时间、交通方式；③ 描述到达后的活动（散步、喂鸡、摘草莓）；④ 表达个人感受与愿望。全程使用一般过去时，语句通顺，涵盖所有要点，符合日记格式要求。
【答案】Friday, April 7th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine.
My classmates and I started off for Hongxing Farm by bus in the morning.
When we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I fed some food to them, they ran over to me. We picked strawberries after lunch. We ate a lot when we picked.
I had a wonderful time today! I hope to go there again in the future!
【知识点】英语日记写作、一般过去时的运用、词汇与句型表达
【点评】本题贴近学生校园生活，考查英语应用文写作能力，要求结合给定要点完成内容，既注重语言准确性，又强调内容连贯性，是初中英语常见的写作题型，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】以选择红星农场为例，写作步骤：① 承接首句补充天气情况；② 说明出发的时间、交通方式；③ 描述到达后的活动（散步、喂鸡、摘草莓）；④ 表达个人感受与愿望。全程使用一般过去时，语句通顺，涵盖所有要点，符合日记格式要求。
【答案】Friday, April 7th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine.
My classmates and I started off for Hongxing Farm by bus in the morning.
When we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I fed some food to them, they ran over to me. We picked strawberries after lunch. We ate a lot when we picked.
I had a wonderful time today! I hope to go there again in the future!
【知识点】英语日记写作、一般过去时的运用、词汇与句型表达
【点评】本题贴近学生校园生活，考查英语应用文写作能力，要求结合给定要点完成内容，既注重语言准确性，又强调内容连贯性，是初中英语常见的写作题型，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
