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某英文网站正在开展以“重要的人，成长的光”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位对你产生积极影响的人，并讲述在日常生活中他/她是如何影响你的。
内容提示：1. Who inspires you the most?
2. How does he/she influence you?
注意：1. 短文须包含以上所有提示，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3. 词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I'm glad to share something about the person who inspires me the most.
请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。
某英文网站正在开展以“重要的人，成长的光”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位对你产生积极影响的人，并讲述在日常生活中他/她是如何影响你的。
内容提示：1. Who inspires you the most?
2. How does he/she influence you?
注意：1. 短文须包含以上所有提示，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3. 词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I'm glad to share something about the person who inspires me the most.
请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。
答案
One possible version:
I'm glad to share something about the person who inspires me the most. She is not a person who is known to many people. She is just the person I want to thank the most. She is my deskmate, Lily.
She's a hard-working girl—she always finishes her homework carefully and takes an active part in class activities. When I had trouble with maths last term, she didn't laugh at me. Instead, she encouraged me not to give up, and set a good example to me by sharing her useful study skills. Gradually, I learned that keeping trying works well. Now I feel more confident in maths and my maths grades have improved a lot.
She's like the warm light in my school life, and I'm really thankful to her.
I'm glad to share something about the person who inspires me the most. She is not a person who is known to many people. She is just the person I want to thank the most. She is my deskmate, Lily.
She's a hard-working girl—she always finishes her homework carefully and takes an active part in class activities. When I had trouble with maths last term, she didn't laugh at me. Instead, she encouraged me not to give up, and set a good example to me by sharing her useful study skills. Gradually, I learned that keeping trying works well. Now I feel more confident in maths and my maths grades have improved a lot.
She's like the warm light in my school life, and I'm really thankful to her.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：围绕“重要的人，成长的光”主题，介绍对自己有积极影响的人，需包含两个提示点：1. 该人物是谁；2. 他/她如何影响自己。开头已给出，需续写，词数约100词，不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。解题思路：第一步，确定写作对象（选择身边的普通人物，如同桌，避免真实信息）；第二步，构思具体事例（选取学习中遇到困难时对方给予帮助的经历，体现积极影响）；第三步，组织语言，使用衔接词（如instead、gradually等），确保语法正确、要点齐全，呼应主题。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，介绍写作对象：She is my deskmate, a common but warm person. 2. 具体描述影响事例：When I had trouble with maths last term, she didn’t laugh at me. Instead, she encouraged me not to give up and shared useful study skills with me. Gradually, I learned that keeping trying works well. 3. 收尾点题：Now I feel more confident in maths and she is like the warm light in my school life, and I’m really thankful to her. 注意使用正确时态，丰富词汇，确保拼写、语法、标点正确，要点齐全，符合主题要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I'm glad to share something about the person who inspires me the most. She is not a person who is known to many people. She is just the person I want to thank the most. She is my deskmate, Lily.
She's a hard-working girl—she always finishes her homework carefully and takes an active part in class activities. When I had trouble with maths last term, she didn't laugh at me. Instead, she encouraged me not to give up, and set a good example to me by sharing her useful study skills. Gradually, I learned that keeping trying works well. Now I feel more confident in maths and my maths grades have improved a lot.
She's like the warm light in my school life, and I'm really thankful to her.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，英语记叙文写作，英语词汇语法运用
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，要点齐全，通过具体事例展现了人物对自己的积极影响，语言通顺，使用了合适的衔接词和语法结构，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的应征短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作任务：围绕“重要的人，成长的光”主题，介绍对自己有积极影响的人，需包含两个提示点：1. 该人物是谁；2. 他/她如何影响自己。开头已给出，需续写，词数约100词，不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。解题思路：第一步，确定写作对象（选择身边的普通人物，如同桌，避免真实信息）；第二步，构思具体事例（选取学习中遇到困难时对方给予帮助的经历，体现积极影响）；第三步，组织语言，使用衔接词（如instead、gradually等），确保语法正确、要点齐全，呼应主题。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，介绍写作对象：She is my deskmate, a common but warm person. 2. 具体描述影响事例：When I had trouble with maths last term, she didn’t laugh at me. Instead, she encouraged me not to give up and shared useful study skills with me. Gradually, I learned that keeping trying works well. 3. 收尾点题：Now I feel more confident in maths and she is like the warm light in my school life, and I’m really thankful to her. 注意使用正确时态，丰富词汇，确保拼写、语法、标点正确，要点齐全，符合主题要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I'm glad to share something about the person who inspires me the most. She is not a person who is known to many people. She is just the person I want to thank the most. She is my deskmate, Lily.
She's a hard-working girl—she always finishes her homework carefully and takes an active part in class activities. When I had trouble with maths last term, she didn't laugh at me. Instead, she encouraged me not to give up, and set a good example to me by sharing her useful study skills. Gradually, I learned that keeping trying works well. Now I feel more confident in maths and my maths grades have improved a lot.
She's like the warm light in my school life, and I'm really thankful to her.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，英语记叙文写作，英语词汇语法运用
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，要点齐全，通过具体事例展现了人物对自己的积极影响，语言通顺，使用了合适的衔接词和语法结构，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的应征短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
任务一:匹配人物及其事迹。
A. Li Dengyue
B. Zhang Guimei
C. Luan Enjie
Inspiring Chinese People
A. Li Dengyue
B. Zhang Guimei
C. Luan Enjie
Inspiring Chinese People
B
1. She helps poor girls achieve their dreams through education.C
2. He leads China's moon exploration and devotes all to China's aerospace(航空航天) industry and lunar exploration(月球探测) projects.A
3. He,a 101-year-old veteran(老兵),experienced many wars but held firm beliefs forever.答案
1. B
2. C
3. A
2. C
3. A
解析
【分析】先明确每个描述的核心事迹，再对应三位人物的身份与贡献：1.帮助贫困女孩通过教育圆梦对应张桂梅；2.领导中国探月、投身航天航空事业对应栾恩杰；3.101岁老兵对应李延年，据此完成匹配。
【解析】1.描述“帮助贫困女孩通过教育实现梦想”是张桂梅的事迹，对应B；2.描述“领导中国探月、投身航空航天与月球探测项目”是栾恩杰的事迹，对应C；3.描述“101岁老兵，经历多场战争且信念坚定”是Li Dengyue的事迹，对应A。
【答案】1.B；2.C；3.A
【知识点】人物事迹匹配；英语应用
【点评】本题为基础的人物事迹匹配题，考察对中国杰出人物事迹的了解，题型简单。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1.描述“帮助贫困女孩通过教育实现梦想”是张桂梅的事迹，对应B；2.描述“领导中国探月、投身航空航天与月球探测项目”是栾恩杰的事迹，对应C；3.描述“101岁老兵，经历多场战争且信念坚定”是Li Dengyue的事迹，对应A。
【答案】1.B；2.C；3.A
【知识点】人物事迹匹配；英语应用
【点评】本题为基础的人物事迹匹配题，考察对中国杰出人物事迹的了解，题型简单。
【难度系数】0.3
任务二:假如你是校园英文广播站的小记者,请选择任务一中的一位人物,播报他/她的成就与精神。
Hello,everyone. This is the school English radio. Today ,let's talk about an inspiring Chinese person.
Hello,everyone. This is the school English radio. Today ,let's talk about an inspiring Chinese person.
Let's take Luan Enjie as an example. He was a great aerospace engineering expert. He spent his whole life working on aerospace and lunar exploration projects.
Because of his hard work, China's lunar exploration projects have achieved great progress. He helped China's aerospace industry step into the front ranks of the world. His story teaches us to be brave to explore and never to give up our dreams.
答案
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. This is the school English radio. Today, let's talk about an inspiring Chinese person.
Let's take Luan Enjie as an example. He was a great aerospace engineering expert. He spent his whole life working on aerospace and lunar exploration projects. Because of his hard work, China's lunar exploration projects have achieved great progress. He helped China's aerospace industry step into the front ranks of the world. His story teaches us to be brave to explore and never to give up our dreams.
Hello, everyone. This is the school English radio. Today, let's talk about an inspiring Chinese person.
Let's take Luan Enjie as an example. He was a great aerospace engineering expert. He spent his whole life working on aerospace and lunar exploration projects. Because of his hard work, China's lunar exploration projects have achieved great progress. He helped China's aerospace industry step into the front ranks of the world. His story teaches us to be brave to explore and never to give up our dreams.
解析
【分析】本题要求以校园英文广播站小记者的身份，播报一位中国励志人物的成就与精神，需承接给定的开头，选择合适的人物（参考答案选取航天领域专家栾恩杰），按照“引出人物→介绍身份→阐述成就→点明精神”的逻辑组织内容，语言要符合广播稿口语化、正式亲切的风格，紧扣“成就”“精神”两个核心要点。
【解析】本题为英文应用文写作题，解题步骤如下：1. 承接给定开头，引出要介绍的人物；2. 明确人物身份（如航天工程专家栾恩杰）；3. 具体阐述其成就（毕生投身航天与探月工程，推动中国探月项目进步，助力中国航天跻身世界前列）；4. 点明其体现的精神（勇于探索、坚守梦想不放弃）；5. 语言贴合校园广播语境，流畅自然。
【答案】Hello, everyone. This is the school English radio. Today, let's talk about an inspiring Chinese person.
Let's take Luan Enjie as an example. He was a great aerospace engineering expert. He spent his whole life working on aerospace and lunar exploration projects. Because of his hard work, China's lunar exploration projects have achieved great progress. He helped China's aerospace industry step into the front ranks of the world. His story teaches us to be brave to explore and never to give up our dreams.
【知识点】英文广播稿写作、人物介绍类英文表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英文应用文写作能力，要求结合人物成就与精神进行播报，需贴合校园广播语境，既考查语言组织能力，也考查对人物事迹的理解提炼能力，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】本题为英文应用文写作题，解题步骤如下：1. 承接给定开头，引出要介绍的人物；2. 明确人物身份（如航天工程专家栾恩杰）；3. 具体阐述其成就（毕生投身航天与探月工程，推动中国探月项目进步，助力中国航天跻身世界前列）；4. 点明其体现的精神（勇于探索、坚守梦想不放弃）；5. 语言贴合校园广播语境，流畅自然。
【答案】Hello, everyone. This is the school English radio. Today, let's talk about an inspiring Chinese person.
Let's take Luan Enjie as an example. He was a great aerospace engineering expert. He spent his whole life working on aerospace and lunar exploration projects. Because of his hard work, China's lunar exploration projects have achieved great progress. He helped China's aerospace industry step into the front ranks of the world. His story teaches us to be brave to explore and never to give up our dreams.
【知识点】英文广播稿写作、人物介绍类英文表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英文应用文写作能力，要求结合人物成就与精神进行播报，需贴合校园广播语境，既考查语言组织能力，也考查对人物事迹的理解提炼能力，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
