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假如你是李华，你校上周日组织同学们前往科学博物馆进行研学活动。请你根据下面的表格写一封70词左右的邮件向你的美国笔友Sally介绍此次活动。
要求:1.在表格内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;2.不得在邮件中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名;3.邮件的格式、开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sally,
I'm writing to share my meaningful and unforgettable study trip with you.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你校上周日组织同学们前往科学博物馆进行研学活动。请你根据下面的表格写一封70词左右的邮件向你的美国笔友Sally介绍此次活动。
要求:1.在表格内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;2.不得在邮件中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名;3.邮件的格式、开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sally,
I'm writing to share my meaningful and unforgettable study trip with you.
Last Sunday, I went to the science museum with my teacher and classmates. We met up at the school gate at 7:30 and then took the bus there. The museum is a wonderful place for young people to visit.
At the museum,I saw many different kinds of robots. They can even play chess. They are really cool! My teacher showed us around the museum. I took a lot of great photos.
After that,I went to the gift shop and bought some gifts for my sister.
I learned a lot about science and I felt so excited and happy.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sally,
I'm writing to share my meaningful and unforgettable study trip with you.
Last Sunday, I went to the science museum with my teacher and classmates. We met up at the school gate at 7:30 and then took the bus there. The museum is a wonderful place for young people to visit. At the museum,I saw many different kinds of robots. They can even play chess. They are really cool! My teacher showed us around the museum. I took a lot of great photos. After that,I went to the gift shop and bought some gifts for my sister.
I learned a lot about science and I felt so excited and happy.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Li Hua
Dear Sally,
I'm writing to share my meaningful and unforgettable study trip with you.
Last Sunday, I went to the science museum with my teacher and classmates. We met up at the school gate at 7:30 and then took the bus there. The museum is a wonderful place for young people to visit. At the museum,I saw many different kinds of robots. They can even play chess. They are really cool! My teacher showed us around the museum. I took a lot of great photos. After that,I went to the gift shop and bought some gifts for my sister.
I learned a lot about science and I felt so excited and happy.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给美国笔友Sally写邮件，介绍上周日的科学博物馆研学活动，开头和结尾已给出。需结合表格中的时间、地点、交通、活动、收获、感受等提示信息，适当补充合理细节（如同行人员、集合时间、机器人的具体表现等），使用一般过去时写作，字数约70词，不得出现真实信息，语气需符合笔友间交流的真诚感。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头点明核心信息：Last Sunday, I went to the science museum with my classmates and teacher. We met at the school gate early and took the bus there. 接着描述活动细节：At the museum, I saw many cool robots—some could even play chess. My teacher showed us around, I took photos and bought a small gift for my sister. 最后说明收获与感受：I learned a lot about science and felt really excited. 这样既覆盖了所有提示内容，又合理拓展，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sally,
I'm writing to share my meaningful and unforgettable study trip with you.
Last Sunday, I went to the science museum with my teacher and classmates. We met up at the school gate at 7:30 and then took the bus there. The museum is a wonderful place for young people to visit. At the museum,I saw many different kinds of robots. They can even play chess. They are really cool! My teacher showed us around the museum. I took a lot of great photos. After that,I went to the gift shop and bought some gifts for my sister.
I learned a lot about science and I felt so excited and happy.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，一般过去时，邮件格式
【点评】
本题考查英语应用文写作能力，要求学生根据给定提示整合内容、合理拓展，需注意时态正确、内容连贯，符合邮件写作的规范与语境。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份给美国笔友Sally写邮件，介绍上周日的科学博物馆研学活动，开头和结尾已给出。需结合表格中的时间、地点、交通、活动、收获、感受等提示信息，适当补充合理细节（如同行人员、集合时间、机器人的具体表现等），使用一般过去时写作，字数约70词，不得出现真实信息，语气需符合笔友间交流的真诚感。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头点明核心信息：Last Sunday, I went to the science museum with my classmates and teacher. We met at the school gate early and took the bus there. 接着描述活动细节：At the museum, I saw many cool robots—some could even play chess. My teacher showed us around, I took photos and bought a small gift for my sister. 最后说明收获与感受：I learned a lot about science and felt really excited. 这样既覆盖了所有提示内容，又合理拓展，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sally,
I'm writing to share my meaningful and unforgettable study trip with you.
Last Sunday, I went to the science museum with my teacher and classmates. We met up at the school gate at 7:30 and then took the bus there. The museum is a wonderful place for young people to visit. At the museum,I saw many different kinds of robots. They can even play chess. They are really cool! My teacher showed us around the museum. I took a lot of great photos. After that,I went to the gift shop and bought some gifts for my sister.
I learned a lot about science and I felt so excited and happy.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，一般过去时，邮件格式
【点评】
本题考查英语应用文写作能力，要求学生根据给定提示整合内容、合理拓展，需注意时态正确、内容连贯，符合邮件写作的规范与语境。
【难度系数】
0.5
