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七、书面表达(共1大题，满分20分)
本学期，你所在的学校举办了“校园音乐文化节”系列活动，活动形式丰富多彩，如音乐微课堂(music lecture)、乐器体验工坊(instrument workshop)、校园歌手大赛(school singing competition)等。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文参加学校英语报的专题征文活动。
What activity did you take part in?
Why did you choose this activity?
How do you like this activity?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息，词数100左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
This term, our school held a “School Music Festival” event.
本学期，你所在的学校举办了“校园音乐文化节”系列活动，活动形式丰富多彩，如音乐微课堂(music lecture)、乐器体验工坊(instrument workshop)、校园歌手大赛(school singing competition)等。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文参加学校英语报的专题征文活动。
What activity did you take part in?
Why did you choose this activity?
How do you like this activity?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息，词数100左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
This term, our school held a “School Music Festival” event.
答案
[参考范文]
This term, our school held a “School Music Festival” event. I took part in the instrument workshop. I chose it because I have always been interested in traditional musical instruments and wanted to learn more practical skills.
During the activity, I tried playing the guzheng, a beautiful 21-string instrument. With the teacher’s help, I learned basic finger techniques. I also learned some music theory, such as reading simple notation. It was challenging but meaningful and fun. My classmates and I even played a short melody together.
This music festival not only enriched our school life, but also helped us feel the beauty of music. I hope we can have more wonderful activities like this in the future.
This term, our school held a “School Music Festival” event. I took part in the instrument workshop. I chose it because I have always been interested in traditional musical instruments and wanted to learn more practical skills.
During the activity, I tried playing the guzheng, a beautiful 21-string instrument. With the teacher’s help, I learned basic finger techniques. I also learned some music theory, such as reading simple notation. It was challenging but meaningful and fun. My classmates and I even played a short melody together.
This music festival not only enriched our school life, but also helped us feel the beauty of music. I hope we can have more wonderful activities like this in the future.
解析
【分析】
首先审题明确征文要求：需回答参加的音乐节活动、选择原因、对活动的看法，补充细节，词数100左右，开头已给出。解题步骤：1. 确定参加的具体活动（如乐器体验工坊）；2. 说明选择该活动的理由（结合自身兴趣，如对传统乐器的喜爱）；3. 补充活动中的具体经历（如学习古筝技巧、和同学合作等）；4. 表达对活动的评价及期望，确保内容完整、语言通顺，符合要求。
【解析】
根据题目要求，先承接开头点明参加的活动为乐器体验工坊；接着说明选择原因是对传统乐器感兴趣，想学习实用技能；再补充活动中的具体内容：尝试古筝，在老师帮助下学习指法和乐理，和同学合奏短旋律；最后总结活动意义，表达对未来类似活动的期望，完成短文。
【答案】
This term, our school held a “School Music Festival” event. I took part in the instrument workshop. I chose it because I have always been interested in traditional musical instruments and wanted to learn more practical skills.
During the activity, I tried playing the guzheng, a beautiful 21-string instrument. With the teacher’s help, I learned basic finger techniques. I also learned some music theory, such as reading simple notation. It was challenging but meaningful and fun. My classmates and I even played a short melody together.
This music festival not only enriched our school life, but also helped us feel the beauty of music. I hope we can have more wonderful activities like this in the future.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、校园活动话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要点，内容充实，细节具体，语言准确流畅，符合词数要求，是符合征文要求的优秀作品。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先审题明确征文要求：需回答参加的音乐节活动、选择原因、对活动的看法，补充细节，词数100左右，开头已给出。解题步骤：1. 确定参加的具体活动（如乐器体验工坊）；2. 说明选择该活动的理由（结合自身兴趣，如对传统乐器的喜爱）；3. 补充活动中的具体经历（如学习古筝技巧、和同学合作等）；4. 表达对活动的评价及期望，确保内容完整、语言通顺，符合要求。
【解析】
根据题目要求，先承接开头点明参加的活动为乐器体验工坊；接着说明选择原因是对传统乐器感兴趣，想学习实用技能；再补充活动中的具体内容：尝试古筝，在老师帮助下学习指法和乐理，和同学合奏短旋律；最后总结活动意义，表达对未来类似活动的期望，完成短文。
【答案】
This term, our school held a “School Music Festival” event. I took part in the instrument workshop. I chose it because I have always been interested in traditional musical instruments and wanted to learn more practical skills.
During the activity, I tried playing the guzheng, a beautiful 21-string instrument. With the teacher’s help, I learned basic finger techniques. I also learned some music theory, such as reading simple notation. It was challenging but meaningful and fun. My classmates and I even played a short melody together.
This music festival not only enriched our school life, but also helped us feel the beauty of music. I hope we can have more wonderful activities like this in the future.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、校园活动话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要点，内容充实，细节具体，语言准确流畅，符合词数要求，是符合征文要求的优秀作品。
【难度系数】
0.7
