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【写作导引】
本单元以“自然灾害”为话题，属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“灾害防范”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①谈论自然灾害发生时正在做的事情；②谈论防范自然灾害的措施；③谈论自然灾害发生时的安全建议。
【写作任务】
为提升学生在地震中的自救能力，你校英文报发起了以“How to protect ourselves in earthquakes”为题的征文活动。请根据提示，写一篇关于地震避险的短文。
【精彩范文】
本单元以“自然灾害”为话题，属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“灾害防范”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①谈论自然灾害发生时正在做的事情；②谈论防范自然灾害的措施；③谈论自然灾害发生时的安全建议。
【写作任务】
为提升学生在地震中的自救能力，你校英文报发起了以“How to protect ourselves in earthquakes”为题的征文活动。请根据提示，写一篇关于地震避险的短文。
【精彩范文】
答案
How to protect ourselves in earthquakes
Earthquakes are dangerous natural disasters. It is very important for us to learn the right ways to protect ourselves when earthquakes happen.
First, if you stay inside a building when the earthquake starts, do not rush to run out. You can hide under a strong table or desk first. Remember to keep away from windows and heavy furniture. Never take the lift, it is extremely dangerous. Second, if you are outside, move to an open area at once. Do not stand near tall buildings, trees or power lines, in case they fall down and hurt you. Besides, try not to be afraid and always keep calm, which can help you make correct choices.
If we keep these rules in mind, we can protect ourselves much better when earthquakes come.
Earthquakes are dangerous natural disasters. It is very important for us to learn the right ways to protect ourselves when earthquakes happen.
First, if you stay inside a building when the earthquake starts, do not rush to run out. You can hide under a strong table or desk first. Remember to keep away from windows and heavy furniture. Never take the lift, it is extremely dangerous. Second, if you are outside, move to an open area at once. Do not stand near tall buildings, trees or power lines, in case they fall down and hurt you. Besides, try not to be afraid and always keep calm, which can help you make correct choices.
If we keep these rules in mind, we can protect ourselves much better when earthquakes come.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“How to protect ourselves in earthquakes”为题写一篇关于地震避险的英文短文，属于话题类应用文写作。解题思路为：1. 开头点明地震的危险性，引出学习自救方法的重要性；2. 中间分室内、室外两种场景，分别给出具体的避险措施，同时补充保持冷静的建议；3. 结尾总结强调记住这些规则的意义，形成总分总的结构，确保内容清晰有条理。
【解析】
按照写作结构依次完成：1. 开头：说明地震是危险的自然灾害，强调学习自救方法的重要性；2. 主体：分室内（躲在坚固家具下、远离窗户重物、不乘电梯）、室外（到开阔地带、远离高大建筑等）的不同做法，以及保持冷静的重要性；3. 结尾：总结记住这些规则能更好保护自己。
【答案】
How to protect ourselves in earthquakes
Earthquakes are dangerous natural disasters. It is very important for us to learn the right ways to protect ourselves when earthquakes happen.
First, if you stay inside a building when the earthquake starts, do not rush to run out. You can hide under a strong table or desk first. Remember to keep away from windows and heavy furniture. Never take the lift, it is extremely dangerous. Second, if you are outside, move to an open area at once. Do not stand near tall buildings, trees or power lines, in case they fall down and hurt you. Besides, try not to be afraid and always keep calm, which can help you make correct choices.
If we keep these rules in mind, we can protect ourselves much better when earthquakes come.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题写作（自然灾害）、英文段落结构
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，采用总分总结构，分室内、室外场景给出具体可操作的地震避险措施，语言简洁规范，符合征文要求，能有效传递地震自救知识，是一篇优秀的话题写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“How to protect ourselves in earthquakes”为题写一篇关于地震避险的英文短文，属于话题类应用文写作。解题思路为：1. 开头点明地震的危险性，引出学习自救方法的重要性；2. 中间分室内、室外两种场景，分别给出具体的避险措施，同时补充保持冷静的建议；3. 结尾总结强调记住这些规则的意义，形成总分总的结构，确保内容清晰有条理。
【解析】
按照写作结构依次完成：1. 开头：说明地震是危险的自然灾害，强调学习自救方法的重要性；2. 主体：分室内（躲在坚固家具下、远离窗户重物、不乘电梯）、室外（到开阔地带、远离高大建筑等）的不同做法，以及保持冷静的重要性；3. 结尾：总结记住这些规则能更好保护自己。
【答案】
How to protect ourselves in earthquakes
Earthquakes are dangerous natural disasters. It is very important for us to learn the right ways to protect ourselves when earthquakes happen.
First, if you stay inside a building when the earthquake starts, do not rush to run out. You can hide under a strong table or desk first. Remember to keep away from windows and heavy furniture. Never take the lift, it is extremely dangerous. Second, if you are outside, move to an open area at once. Do not stand near tall buildings, trees or power lines, in case they fall down and hurt you. Besides, try not to be afraid and always keep calm, which can help you make correct choices.
If we keep these rules in mind, we can protect ourselves much better when earthquakes come.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题写作（自然灾害）、英文段落结构
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，采用总分总结构，分室内、室外场景给出具体可操作的地震避险措施，语言简洁规范，符合征文要求，能有效传递地震自救知识，是一篇优秀的话题写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
How to protect ourselves in earthquakes
Many earthquakes happen every year. As students, we must know about some ways of protecting ourselves in the earthquake.
If we are indoors, the safest place is under a strong table or a desk³. Try to use our hands and arms to protect our heads. We should keep away from windows and be close to a wall because it is safer than standing in the middle of the room⁴. If we are outdoors, move to an open area and stay away from buildings and trees².
If we are in the ruins, don’t be nervous. The most important thing is to stay calm. We can shout for help.
These are the ways of protecting ourselves in earthquakes. I hope they can help you.
注意: 词数80左右(开头已写好,不计入总词数)。
How to protect ourselves in earthquakes
Many earthquakes happen every year. As students, we must know about some ways of protecting ourselves in the earthquake.
Many earthquakes happen every year. As students, we must know about some ways of protecting ourselves in the earthquake.
If we are indoors, the safest place is under a strong table or a desk³. Try to use our hands and arms to protect our heads. We should keep away from windows and be close to a wall because it is safer than standing in the middle of the room⁴. If we are outdoors, move to an open area and stay away from buildings and trees².
If we are in the ruins, don’t be nervous. The most important thing is to stay calm. We can shout for help.
These are the ways of protecting ourselves in earthquakes. I hope they can help you.
注意: 词数80左右(开头已写好,不计入总词数)。
How to protect ourselves in earthquakes
Many earthquakes happen every year. As students, we must know about some ways of protecting ourselves in the earthquake.
答案
If we are indoors, we should stay under a strong table first, and use our hands and arms to protect our heads. We need to keep away from windows and get close to a nearby wall.
If we are outdoors, move to an open area quickly, and stay away from buildings and tall trees. When we are in the ruins, don't be nervous, we should stay calm first and shout for help when we hear people nearby. These methods can help us keep safe in earthquakes.
If we are outdoors, move to an open area quickly, and stay away from buildings and tall trees. When we are in the ruins, don't be nervous, we should stay calm first and shout for help when we hear people nearby. These methods can help us keep safe in earthquakes.
解析
【分析】本题是英语应用文写作题，要求围绕“地震中如何自救”的主题，结合给定的室内、室外、废墟三个场景的自救要点完成短文。写作时需明确三个场景的核心要点，用连贯的英语语句串联，注意词数要求（80左右），时态统一用一般现在时，确保内容贴合主题、逻辑清晰。
【解析】首先对应室内场景，表达“躲在坚固桌子下，用手和手臂护头，远离窗户、靠近墙”；其次对应室外场景，表达“快速移到开阔区域，远离建筑和大树”；最后对应废墟场景，表达“保持冷静，听到附近有人时呼救”。将这些要点组织成连贯句子，衔接自然，控制词数在要求范围内，形成完整短文。
【答案】If we are indoors, we should stay under a strong table first, and use our hands and arms to protect our heads. We need to keep away from windows and get close to a nearby wall. If we are outdoors, move to an open area quickly, and stay away from buildings and tall trees. When we are in the ruins, don't be nervous, we should stay calm first and shout for help when we hear people nearby. These methods can help us keep safe in earthquakes.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、话题表达整合
【点评】本文紧扣地震自救主题，覆盖了室内、室外、废墟三个核心场景的自救要点，语言简洁规范，逻辑清晰，符合词数要求，能有效传递实用的地震自救知识。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先对应室内场景，表达“躲在坚固桌子下，用手和手臂护头，远离窗户、靠近墙”；其次对应室外场景，表达“快速移到开阔区域，远离建筑和大树”；最后对应废墟场景，表达“保持冷静，听到附近有人时呼救”。将这些要点组织成连贯句子，衔接自然，控制词数在要求范围内，形成完整短文。
【答案】If we are indoors, we should stay under a strong table first, and use our hands and arms to protect our heads. We need to keep away from windows and get close to a nearby wall. If we are outdoors, move to an open area quickly, and stay away from buildings and tall trees. When we are in the ruins, don't be nervous, we should stay calm first and shout for help when we hear people nearby. These methods can help us keep safe in earthquakes.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、话题表达整合
【点评】本文紧扣地震自救主题，覆盖了室内、室外、废墟三个核心场景的自救要点，语言简洁规范，逻辑清晰，符合词数要求，能有效传递实用的地震自救知识。
【难度系数】0.5
每到夏天，总有些地方洪水肆虐。如何在洪水中保护自己呢？你班在英语课上就这一问题进行了讨论。请你根据以下提示，用英语说说自己的观点。
注意：1. 包含所有给出的提示要点，可适当发挥，省略号部分要求至少自拟1点；
2. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I’d like to talk about how to
注意：1. 包含所有给出的提示要点，可适当发挥，省略号部分要求至少自拟1点；
2. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I’d like to talk about how to
protect ourselves in the flood. Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes.
Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the flood water.
Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can hold onto something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water. If we need help, we can also call the police.
答案
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the flood water. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can hold onto something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water. If we need help, we can also call the police.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the flood water. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can hold onto something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water. If we need help, we can also call the police.
解析
【分析】这是一篇关于洪水自救的英语应用文写作题，解题思路为：1. 承接给定开头，明确写作主题为洪水自救；2. 按提示分灾前、灾中两个阶段，灾前需包含关注洪水新闻、准备应急物资；灾中需包含转移到高处、不要游泳，同时自拟至少1点自救方法；3. 用连接词串联内容，确保结构清晰，覆盖所有要点，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头承接给定内容，点明主题；2. 灾前部分：写关注洪水新闻、准备水、食物和药品；3. 灾中部分：写立刻转移到高处、不要游泳，再添加自拟要点（如被洪水冲走时保持冷静，抓住木质物品，必要时报警）；4. 使用连接词使语句连贯，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数在80左右。
【答案】Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood. Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the flood water. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can hold onto something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water. If we need help, we can also call the police.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、话题表达（洪水自救）
【点评】本文紧扣主题，覆盖所有提示要点，添加了合理的自拟自救内容，结构清晰，语言准确流畅，符合英语写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头承接给定内容，点明主题；2. 灾前部分：写关注洪水新闻、准备水、食物和药品；3. 灾中部分：写立刻转移到高处、不要游泳，再添加自拟要点（如被洪水冲走时保持冷静，抓住木质物品，必要时报警）；4. 使用连接词使语句连贯，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数在80左右。
【答案】Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood. Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the flood water. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can hold onto something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water. If we need help, we can also call the police.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、话题表达（洪水自救）
【点评】本文紧扣主题，覆盖所有提示要点，添加了合理的自拟自救内容，结构清晰，语言准确流畅，符合英语写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
