Ⅴ. 书面表达。
在即将告别母校之际,你想如何表达对母校、老师和同学的感恩之情?请根据下面表格中的内容,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。

在即将告别母校之际,你想如何表达对母校、老师和同学的感恩之情?请根据下面表格中的内容,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
答案
One possible version:
How time flies! We're leaving our school. I have so many words from my heart to say.
Thanks, my dear school. You're a beautiful and happy place for us to grow up. I hope you'll
be better and better. Thanks, my dear teachers. You've taught us lots of knowledge and
encouraged us to make progress. When we were in trouble, you helped us a lot. I'll
remember you forever. Thanks, my dear classmates. We've got on well with each other and
helped each other. Let's always keep in touch.
I hope you will be happy all the time. Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you!
How time flies! We're leaving our school. I have so many words from my heart to say.
Thanks, my dear school. You're a beautiful and happy place for us to grow up. I hope you'll
be better and better. Thanks, my dear teachers. You've taught us lots of knowledge and
encouraged us to make progress. When we were in trouble, you helped us a lot. I'll
remember you forever. Thanks, my dear classmates. We've got on well with each other and
helped each other. Let's always keep in touch.
I hope you will be happy all the time. Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you!
解析
【分析】
本题要求根据表格内容,用英语短文表达对母校、老师、同学的感恩之情,需围绕三个感恩对象,分别对应“存档记忆”和“未来与祝福”展开写作,确保语句通顺、内容完整,字数不少于80词。解题思路为:先点明告别母校的背景引出感恩主题,再依次叙述对母校、老师、同学的感恩内容(结合记忆与祝福),最后总结表达整体祝福,紧扣主题,结构清晰。
【解析】
1. 开头:点明时间飞逝,即将告别母校,引出感恩的核心主题;
2. 对母校:结合表格中“a beautiful and happy place”,描述母校是成长的美好场所,表达对母校越来越好的祝福;
3. 对老师:叙述老师传授知识、鼓励进步,遇到困难时给予帮助,表达永远铭记老师的感恩;
4. 对同学:描述同学间相处融洽、互相帮助,表达希望保持联系的祝福;
5. 结尾:总结对所有感恩对象的祝福,完成短文。
【答案】
One possible version:
How time flies! We're leaving our school. I have so many words from my heart to say.
Thanks, my dear school. You're a beautiful and happy place for us to grow up. I hope you'll be better and better. Thanks, my dear teachers. You've taught us lots of knowledge and encouraged us to make progress. When we were in trouble, you helped us a lot. I'll remember you forever. Thanks, my dear classmates. We've got on well with each other and helped each other. Let's always keep in touch.
I hope you will be happy all the time. Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、感恩主题写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,围绕母校、老师、同学三个感恩对象,分别结合“存档记忆”与“未来祝福”展开,结构清晰,语言流畅自然,情感真挚,符合英语写作表达习惯,是一篇优秀的感恩主题短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求根据表格内容,用英语短文表达对母校、老师、同学的感恩之情,需围绕三个感恩对象,分别对应“存档记忆”和“未来与祝福”展开写作,确保语句通顺、内容完整,字数不少于80词。解题思路为:先点明告别母校的背景引出感恩主题,再依次叙述对母校、老师、同学的感恩内容(结合记忆与祝福),最后总结表达整体祝福,紧扣主题,结构清晰。
【解析】
1. 开头:点明时间飞逝,即将告别母校,引出感恩的核心主题;
2. 对母校:结合表格中“a beautiful and happy place”,描述母校是成长的美好场所,表达对母校越来越好的祝福;
3. 对老师:叙述老师传授知识、鼓励进步,遇到困难时给予帮助,表达永远铭记老师的感恩;
4. 对同学:描述同学间相处融洽、互相帮助,表达希望保持联系的祝福;
5. 结尾:总结对所有感恩对象的祝福,完成短文。
【答案】
One possible version:
How time flies! We're leaving our school. I have so many words from my heart to say.
Thanks, my dear school. You're a beautiful and happy place for us to grow up. I hope you'll be better and better. Thanks, my dear teachers. You've taught us lots of knowledge and encouraged us to make progress. When we were in trouble, you helped us a lot. I'll remember you forever. Thanks, my dear classmates. We've got on well with each other and helped each other. Let's always keep in touch.
I hope you will be happy all the time. Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、感恩主题写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,围绕母校、老师、同学三个感恩对象,分别结合“存档记忆”与“未来祝福”展开,结构清晰,语言流畅自然,情感真挚,符合英语写作表达习惯,是一篇优秀的感恩主题短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
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