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【主题句子仿写】
1. 我量了体温,发现自己发烧了。(take one's temperature)
2. 勤洗手可以防止你感冒。(stop...from doing)
3. 我头痛得厉害,我正要去看医生。(be about to)
4. 你看起来很累,应该躺下休息一会儿。(lie down)
5. 从现在起,我应该更加关注我的健康。(from now on)
【主题句子仿写】
1. 我量了体温,发现自己发烧了。(take one's temperature)
I took my temperature and found that I had a fever.
2. 勤洗手可以防止你感冒。(stop...from doing)
Washing your hands often can stop you from catching a cold.
3. 我头痛得厉害,我正要去看医生。(be about to)
I have a terrible headache and I am about to see a doctor.
4. 你看起来很累,应该躺下休息一会儿。(lie down)
You look tired and you should lie down to rest for a while.
5. 从现在起,我应该更加关注我的健康。(from now on)
From now on, I should pay more attention to my health.
答案
1. I took my temperature and found that I had a fever.
2. Washing your hands often can stop you from catching a cold.
3. I have a terrible headache and I am about to see a doctor.
4. You look tired and you should lie down to rest for a while.
5. From now on, I should pay more attention to my health.
2. Washing your hands often can stop you from catching a cold.
3. I have a terrible headache and I am about to see a doctor.
4. You look tired and you should lie down to rest for a while.
5. From now on, I should pay more attention to my health.
解析
【分析】
这是给定指定短语的汉译英仿写题，解题思路如下：1. 先定位每道题给出的提示核心短语，明确短语的正确用法和搭配要求；2. 拆分中文原句的逻辑，确定句子的时态、主语和基本句型，大部分句子是并列逻辑，可用and连接两个并列分句；3. 补充对应场景的常用固定搭配，比如“发烧”have a fever、“感冒”catch a cold等，注意非谓语、主从句的语法规则；4. 代入提示短语组合成完整句子后，检查语法错误，确保提示短语使用准确，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 动作“量体温”“发现发烧”都已经完成，用一般过去时，提示短语take one's temperature变为took my temperature，后半句用and连接并列谓语，find后接宾语从句，“发烧”译为have a fever，遵循主过从过规则have变为had，最终得到对应句子。
2. 句子主语“勤洗手”是动作，需要用动名词短语Washing your hands often充当主语，提示结构stop...from doing后接动词catch的动名词形式catching，“感冒”是catch a cold，加入情态动词can表能力，组合得到对应句子。
3. 前半句表述当前的状态“头痛得厉害”，用一般现在时译为have a terrible headache，后半句提示短语be about to表示即将发生的动作，主语为I，be动词搭配am，后接see a doctor，用and连接两个分句，得到对应句子。
4. 前半句“你看起来很累”用一般现在时译为You look tired，后半句情态动词should后接提示短语lie down，用不定式to rest for a while表目的，组合得到对应句子。
5. 提示短语from now on放在句首作时间状语，“更加关注”用固定搭配pay more attention to，主语I后接情态动词should，组合得到对应句子。
【答案】
1. I took my temperature and found that I had a fever.
2. Washing your hands often can stop you from catching a cold.
3. I have a terrible headache and I am about to see a doctor.
4. You look tired and you should lie down to rest for a while.
5. From now on, I should pay more attention to my health.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配
并列句构造
动名词作主语
【点评】
本题属于健康主题的基础造句练习，明确给出了核心提示短语，降低了造句的难度，主要考察学生对已学重点短语的运用能力，同时巩固日常场景的英语表达，需要学生注意区分不同语境下的时态选择，避免出现短语搭配错误、谓语形式误用的问题，夯实汉译英的基础能力。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是给定指定短语的汉译英仿写题，解题思路如下：1. 先定位每道题给出的提示核心短语，明确短语的正确用法和搭配要求；2. 拆分中文原句的逻辑，确定句子的时态、主语和基本句型，大部分句子是并列逻辑，可用and连接两个并列分句；3. 补充对应场景的常用固定搭配，比如“发烧”have a fever、“感冒”catch a cold等，注意非谓语、主从句的语法规则；4. 代入提示短语组合成完整句子后，检查语法错误，确保提示短语使用准确，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 动作“量体温”“发现发烧”都已经完成，用一般过去时，提示短语take one's temperature变为took my temperature，后半句用and连接并列谓语，find后接宾语从句，“发烧”译为have a fever，遵循主过从过规则have变为had，最终得到对应句子。
2. 句子主语“勤洗手”是动作，需要用动名词短语Washing your hands often充当主语，提示结构stop...from doing后接动词catch的动名词形式catching，“感冒”是catch a cold，加入情态动词can表能力，组合得到对应句子。
3. 前半句表述当前的状态“头痛得厉害”，用一般现在时译为have a terrible headache，后半句提示短语be about to表示即将发生的动作，主语为I，be动词搭配am，后接see a doctor，用and连接两个分句，得到对应句子。
4. 前半句“你看起来很累”用一般现在时译为You look tired，后半句情态动词should后接提示短语lie down，用不定式to rest for a while表目的，组合得到对应句子。
5. 提示短语from now on放在句首作时间状语，“更加关注”用固定搭配pay more attention to，主语I后接情态动词should，组合得到对应句子。
【答案】
1. I took my temperature and found that I had a fever.
2. Washing your hands often can stop you from catching a cold.
3. I have a terrible headache and I am about to see a doctor.
4. You look tired and you should lie down to rest for a while.
5. From now on, I should pay more attention to my health.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配
并列句构造
动名词作主语
【点评】
本题属于健康主题的基础造句练习，明确给出了核心提示短语，降低了造句的难度，主要考察学生对已学重点短语的运用能力，同时巩固日常场景的英语表达，需要学生注意区分不同语境下的时态选择，避免出现短语搭配错误、谓语形式误用的问题，夯实汉译英的基础能力。
【难度系数】
0.8
假如你是李华,今天收到加拿大笔友Andrew发来的一封电子邮件,在邮件中Andrew说他最近总感冒,而且时常感到疲劳。请你根据下面的图示给他回复一封电子邮件,针对他的身体状况给出几点建议。
注意:
(1)邮件必须包含以上所有提示信息,可以适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;
(3)写作词数为80左右(开头和结尾都已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Andrew,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. Here's some advice for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲:
规范作文:
Dear Andrew,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. Here's some advice for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
注意:
(1)邮件必须包含以上所有提示信息,可以适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;
(3)写作词数为80左右(开头和结尾都已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Andrew,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. Here's some advice for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲:
规范作文:
Dear Andrew,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. Here's some advice for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Andrew,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. Here's some advice for you.
First, it's good for you to eat more fruit and vegetables. They are rich in vitamins which can help protect you from a bad cold. Second, make sure you get enough sleep. Sleep is pretty important for you, especially when you have a cold. Third, if you begin to feel a little better, you can take some exercise, such as going for a run or riding a bike. Last but not least, remember to dress warmly when the weather
gets cold. This will stop the cold from getting worse.
I hope my advice can work for you and you can get better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. Here's some advice for you.
First, it's good for you to eat more fruit and vegetables. They are rich in vitamins which can help protect you from a bad cold. Second, make sure you get enough sleep. Sleep is pretty important for you, especially when you have a cold. Third, if you begin to feel a little better, you can take some exercise, such as going for a run or riding a bike. Last but not least, remember to dress warmly when the weather
gets cold. This will stop the cold from getting worse.
I hope my advice can work for you and you can get better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先明确审题要点：1. 写作身份是李华，收信人是加拿大笔友Andrew，对方的现状是频繁感冒、时常感觉疲劳，写作目的是给对方提出针对性的健康建议；2. 要覆盖所有提示的建议维度，行文符合日常邮件的亲切语气，词数控制在80左右，不能出现真实个人信息。接下来梳理写作思路：首先用逻辑连接词依次引出4个核心建议：第一从饮食角度，建议多吃蔬果补充维生素帮助抵御感冒；第二从作息角度，建议保证充足睡眠，缓解身体的疲劳感；第三从运动角度，状态好转后适当做慢跑、骑行这类运动增强体质；第四从日常防护角度，降温时注意保暖避免感冒加重。最后补充一句祝福对方早日康复的收尾句，把内容连贯起来就可以完成符合要求的作文。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头，用First、Second、Third、Last but not least这类逻辑过渡词串联所有建议，让行文条理清晰，层次分明。
2. 每个建议都补充简短的合理性说明，比如说明蔬果富含维生素能防感冒、睡眠对感冒恢复很重要等，让内容更自然饱满，不会显得生硬突兀。
3. 最后补充符合场景的祝福语句，贴合邮件交流的语境，整体内容完全覆盖所有提示要点，词数符合题干要求，没有出现任何真实姓名、校名等违规信息。
【答案】
Dear Andrew,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. Here's some advice for you.
First, it's good for you to eat more fruit and vegetables. They are rich in vitamins which can help protect you from a bad cold. Second, make sure you get enough sleep. Sleep is pretty important for you, especially when you have a cold. Third, if you begin to feel a little better, you can take some exercise, such as going for a run or riding a bike. Last but not least, remember to dress warmly when the weather gets cold. This will stop the cold from getting worse.
I hope my advice can work for you and you can get better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
建议类邮件写作
健康话题英语表达
逻辑过渡词运用
【点评】
这篇范文完全符合题干的所有写作要求，所有提示的建议要点都完整覆盖，用过渡词串联内容逻辑非常清晰，语气贴合笔友之间交流的轻松亲切感，每个建议都补充了对应的作用说明，内容充实不冗余，词数控制得当，是非常典型的提纲类应用文写作优秀范例，学生可以参考学习这类建议类作文的谋篇布局方式。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先先明确审题要点：1. 写作身份是李华，收信人是加拿大笔友Andrew，对方的现状是频繁感冒、时常感觉疲劳，写作目的是给对方提出针对性的健康建议；2. 要覆盖所有提示的建议维度，行文符合日常邮件的亲切语气，词数控制在80左右，不能出现真实个人信息。接下来梳理写作思路：首先用逻辑连接词依次引出4个核心建议：第一从饮食角度，建议多吃蔬果补充维生素帮助抵御感冒；第二从作息角度，建议保证充足睡眠，缓解身体的疲劳感；第三从运动角度，状态好转后适当做慢跑、骑行这类运动增强体质；第四从日常防护角度，降温时注意保暖避免感冒加重。最后补充一句祝福对方早日康复的收尾句，把内容连贯起来就可以完成符合要求的作文。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头，用First、Second、Third、Last but not least这类逻辑过渡词串联所有建议，让行文条理清晰，层次分明。
2. 每个建议都补充简短的合理性说明，比如说明蔬果富含维生素能防感冒、睡眠对感冒恢复很重要等，让内容更自然饱满，不会显得生硬突兀。
3. 最后补充符合场景的祝福语句，贴合邮件交流的语境，整体内容完全覆盖所有提示要点，词数符合题干要求，没有出现任何真实姓名、校名等违规信息。
【答案】
Dear Andrew,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. Here's some advice for you.
First, it's good for you to eat more fruit and vegetables. They are rich in vitamins which can help protect you from a bad cold. Second, make sure you get enough sleep. Sleep is pretty important for you, especially when you have a cold. Third, if you begin to feel a little better, you can take some exercise, such as going for a run or riding a bike. Last but not least, remember to dress warmly when the weather gets cold. This will stop the cold from getting worse.
I hope my advice can work for you and you can get better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
建议类邮件写作
健康话题英语表达
逻辑过渡词运用
【点评】
这篇范文完全符合题干的所有写作要求，所有提示的建议要点都完整覆盖，用过渡词串联内容逻辑非常清晰，语气贴合笔友之间交流的轻松亲切感，每个建议都补充了对应的作用说明，内容充实不冗余，词数控制得当，是非常典型的提纲类应用文写作优秀范例，学生可以参考学习这类建议类作文的谋篇布局方式。
【难度系数】
0.6
