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假设你是学校英语社团的一名成员，社团正在举办“中国自然奇观”广告设计比赛。请选择一处中国著名自然景观(如黄山、九寨沟等)，用英语写一篇旅游广告，要求包含以下内容：
(1)景观名称及地理位置。
(2)特色景点描述。
(3)推荐理由。
注意：
(1)内容要包含上述要点，可适当发挥。
(2)语句连贯，词数80左右。
假设你是学校英语社团的一名成员，社团正在举办“中国自然奇观”广告设计比赛。请选择一处中国著名自然景观(如黄山、九寨沟等)，用英语写一篇旅游广告，要求包含以下内容：
(1)景观名称及地理位置。
(2)特色景点描述。
(3)推荐理由。
注意：
(1)内容要包含上述要点，可适当发挥。
(2)语句连贯，词数80左右。
Discover the Amazing Mount Huangshan!
Do you love nature? Don't miss Mount Huangshan!
Mount Huangshan is one of the natural wonders of China. It is located in Anhui Province. Its highest peak is 1,864 metres above sea level. The clouds here are so magical that they look like a white sea.
The rocks have many different shapes. Some look like monkeys, and some look like old men. If you come here, you will see beautiful pine trees everywhere.
The waterfalls sing songs as they fall down. The stones there feel warm in the sun. What a magical place!
Come and enjoy nature's masterpiece with your family!
答案
参考范文：
Discover the Amazing Mount Huangshan!
Do you love nature? Don't miss Mount Huangshan!
Mount Huangshan is one of the natural wonders of China. It is located in Anhui Province. Its highest peak is 1,864 metres above sea level. The clouds here are so magical that they look like a white sea. The rocks have many different shapes. Some look like monkeys, and some look like old men. If you come here, you will see beautiful pine trees everywhere. The waterfalls sing songs as they fall down. The stones there feel warm in the sun. What a magical place!
Come and enjoy nature's masterpiece with your family!
Discover the Amazing Mount Huangshan!
Do you love nature? Don't miss Mount Huangshan!
Mount Huangshan is one of the natural wonders of China. It is located in Anhui Province. Its highest peak is 1,864 metres above sea level. The clouds here are so magical that they look like a white sea. The rocks have many different shapes. Some look like monkeys, and some look like old men. If you come here, you will see beautiful pine trees everywhere. The waterfalls sing songs as they fall down. The stones there feel warm in the sun. What a magical place!
Come and enjoy nature's masterpiece with your family!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：作为学校英语社团成员，为“中国自然奇观”广告设计比赛撰写英语旅游广告，需包含景观名称及地理位置、特色景点描述、推荐理由三个要点，词数控制在80左右。解题思路：1. 选择有代表性且易描述的中国自然景观（如黄山）；2. 搭建结构：开头吸引读者→介绍景观名称与位置→描述标志性特色景点→说明推荐理由→结尾发出号召；3. 用词生动贴合广告属性，确保覆盖所有要求要点，控制词数。
【解析】
1. 标题：以“Discover the Amazing Mount Huangshan!”点明主题，吸引读者注意力；
2. 开头：用“Do you love nature?”引发读者共鸣，自然引出黄山；
3. 名称与位置：说明黄山是中国自然奇观之一，位于安徽省；
4. 特色景点：选取黄山标志性的云海（如白色海洋）、怪石（形状各异，如猴、老人）、奇松、瀑布等，用生动语言描述；
5. 推荐理由：强调是自然杰作，适合全家游玩；
6. 结尾：发出号召，邀请读者体验，确保语句连贯、词数符合要求。
【答案】
Discover the Amazing Mount Huangshan!
Do you love nature? Don't miss Mount Huangshan!
Mount Huangshan is one of the natural wonders of China. It is located in Anhui Province. The clouds here are so magical that they look like a white sea. The rocks have many different shapes. Some look like monkeys, and some look like old men. If you come here, you will see beautiful pine trees everywhere. The waterfalls sing songs as they fall down. What a magical place!
Come and enjoy nature's masterpiece with your family!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、中国自然景观英语介绍
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖景观名称及地理位置、特色景点描述、推荐理由三大要点，语言生动形象，符合旅游广告的宣传性特点，结构清晰，词数恰当，是一篇优秀的书面表达作品。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务：作为学校英语社团成员，为“中国自然奇观”广告设计比赛撰写英语旅游广告，需包含景观名称及地理位置、特色景点描述、推荐理由三个要点，词数控制在80左右。解题思路：1. 选择有代表性且易描述的中国自然景观（如黄山）；2. 搭建结构：开头吸引读者→介绍景观名称与位置→描述标志性特色景点→说明推荐理由→结尾发出号召；3. 用词生动贴合广告属性，确保覆盖所有要求要点，控制词数。
【解析】
1. 标题：以“Discover the Amazing Mount Huangshan!”点明主题，吸引读者注意力；
2. 开头：用“Do you love nature?”引发读者共鸣，自然引出黄山；
3. 名称与位置：说明黄山是中国自然奇观之一，位于安徽省；
4. 特色景点：选取黄山标志性的云海（如白色海洋）、怪石（形状各异，如猴、老人）、奇松、瀑布等，用生动语言描述；
5. 推荐理由：强调是自然杰作，适合全家游玩；
6. 结尾：发出号召，邀请读者体验，确保语句连贯、词数符合要求。
【答案】
Discover the Amazing Mount Huangshan!
Do you love nature? Don't miss Mount Huangshan!
Mount Huangshan is one of the natural wonders of China. It is located in Anhui Province. The clouds here are so magical that they look like a white sea. The rocks have many different shapes. Some look like monkeys, and some look like old men. If you come here, you will see beautiful pine trees everywhere. The waterfalls sing songs as they fall down. What a magical place!
Come and enjoy nature's masterpiece with your family!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、中国自然景观英语介绍
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖景观名称及地理位置、特色景点描述、推荐理由三大要点，语言生动形象，符合旅游广告的宣传性特点，结构清晰，词数恰当，是一篇优秀的书面表达作品。
【难度系数】
0.6
