三、书面表达
你们学校英文报正在举办以“My Volunteering Experience”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据下面的写作提示和写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,分享一次令你难忘的志愿服务经历。
写作提示:
1. 你何时、何地参与了志愿服务活动;
2. 你具体做了哪些事情;
3. 你对这次活动的感受与体会。
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数90左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Do you have the experience of helping others? I do. Let me share my story with you.
你们学校英文报正在举办以“My Volunteering Experience”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据下面的写作提示和写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,分享一次令你难忘的志愿服务经历。
写作提示:
1. 你何时、何地参与了志愿服务活动;
2. 你具体做了哪些事情;
3. 你对这次活动的感受与体会。
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数90左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Do you have the experience of helping others? I do. Let me share my story with you.
Since last winter, I've been a volunteer at the old people's home. Last Saturday afternoon, I spent time with Grandma Wang there. First, I cleaned her room when she shared stories of her youth. Then, we played games and sang songs. She was really active, and we had a great time. When I saw her bright smile, my heart felt warm.
Through this experience, I've learned that helping others not only brings them happiness but also enriches our own lives. It has made me understand the value of giving and caring. I'll keep on being a volunteer to make a difference to others.
Through this experience, I've learned that helping others not only brings them happiness but also enriches our own lives. It has made me understand the value of giving and caring. I'll keep on being a volunteer to make a difference to others.
答案
One possible version:
Do you have the experience of helping others?
I do. Let me share my story with you.
Since last winter, I've been a volunteer at the old people's home. Last Saturday afternoon, I spent time with Grandma Wang there. First, I cleaned her room when she shared stories of her youth. Then, we played games and sang songs. She was really active, and we had a great time. When I saw her bright smile, my heart felt warm.
Through this experience, I've learned that helping others not only brings them happiness but also enriches our own lives. It has made me understand the value of giving and caring. I'll keep on being a volunteer to make a difference to others.
Do you have the experience of helping others?
I do. Let me share my story with you.
Since last winter, I've been a volunteer at the old people's home. Last Saturday afternoon, I spent time with Grandma Wang there. First, I cleaned her room when she shared stories of her youth. Then, we played games and sang songs. She was really active, and we had a great time. When I saw her bright smile, my heart felt warm.
Through this experience, I've learned that helping others not only brings them happiness but also enriches our own lives. It has made me understand the value of giving and caring. I'll keep on being a volunteer to make a difference to others.
解析
【分析】首先审题,明确征文主题为“My Volunteering Experience”,需包含三个核心要点:参与志愿服务的时间与地点、具体做的事、感受体会;其次选择贴近生活的敬老院志愿服务作为写作素材,易上手且情感真挚;接着安排结构:承接给定开头,先点明参与的时间和地点,再叙述具体活动,最后升华感悟;最后注意语言简洁,避免复杂句式,控制词数,不出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【解析】1. 承接给定开头,点明志愿服务的时间与地点:Since last winter, I've been a volunteer at the old people's home. Last Saturday afternoon, I spent time with Grandma Wang there. 2. 叙述具体活动:First, I cleaned her room when she shared stories of her youth. Then, we played games and sang songs. She was really active, and we had a great time. 3. 表达感受与体会:When I saw her bright smile, my heart felt warm. Through this experience, I've learned that helping others not only brings them happiness but also enriches our own lives. It has made me understand the value of giving and caring. I'll keep on being a volunteer to make a difference to others.
【答案】One possible version:
Do you have the experience of helping others?
I do. Let me share my story with you.
Since last winter, I've been a volunteer at the old people's home. Last Saturday afternoon, I spent time with Grandma Wang there. First, I cleaned her room when she shared stories of her youth. Then, we played games and sang songs. She was really active, and we had a great time. When I saw her bright smile, my heart felt warm.
Through this experience, I've learned that helping others not only brings them happiness but also enriches our own lives. It has made me understand the value of giving and caring. I'll keep on being a volunteer to make a difference to others.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、英语主题征文写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题,完整覆盖所有写作提示,结构清晰(引入-叙事-感悟),语言简洁流畅,情感真挚自然,符合词数要求,是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 承接给定开头,点明志愿服务的时间与地点:Since last winter, I've been a volunteer at the old people's home. Last Saturday afternoon, I spent time with Grandma Wang there. 2. 叙述具体活动:First, I cleaned her room when she shared stories of her youth. Then, we played games and sang songs. She was really active, and we had a great time. 3. 表达感受与体会:When I saw her bright smile, my heart felt warm. Through this experience, I've learned that helping others not only brings them happiness but also enriches our own lives. It has made me understand the value of giving and caring. I'll keep on being a volunteer to make a difference to others.
【答案】One possible version:
Do you have the experience of helping others?
I do. Let me share my story with you.
Since last winter, I've been a volunteer at the old people's home. Last Saturday afternoon, I spent time with Grandma Wang there. First, I cleaned her room when she shared stories of her youth. Then, we played games and sang songs. She was really active, and we had a great time. When I saw her bright smile, my heart felt warm.
Through this experience, I've learned that helping others not only brings them happiness but also enriches our own lives. It has made me understand the value of giving and caring. I'll keep on being a volunteer to make a difference to others.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、英语主题征文写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题,完整覆盖所有写作提示,结构清晰(引入-叙事-感悟),语言简洁流畅,情感真挚自然,符合词数要求,是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】0.6
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