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假如你是李华,你的好朋友 Judy 经常脖子痛。请你根据写作要点,给她写封邮件。
要点:1. What Judy shouldn't do. 2. What Judy should do.
要求:1.包含所有写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;3.不少于80词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Judy,
I'm sorry to hear that you often have a sore neck. Here is my advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
要点:1. What Judy shouldn't do. 2. What Judy should do.
要求:1.包含所有写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;3.不少于80词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Judy,
I'm sorry to hear that you often have a sore neck. Here is my advice.
First, you should avoid playing computer games too much. Spending hours in front of the screen with your head in a fixed position can put great pressure on your neck. Second, don't read books with your head lowered for a long time. Try to keep your neck in a comfortable position while reading. Besides, it's important to take proper breaks. For example, take a 10-minute break every hour to stretch your body. Last but not least, doing proper exercise like neck-stretching exercises and jogging can strengthen your neck muscles and improve blood circulation.
I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Judy,
I'm sorry to hear that you often have a sore neck. Here is my advice.
First, you should avoid playing computer games too much. Spending hours in front of the screen with your head in a fixed position can put great pressure on your neck. Second, don't read books with your head lowered for a long time. Try to keep your neck in a comfortable position while reading. Besides, it's important to take proper breaks. For example, take a 10-minute break every hour to stretch your body. Last but not least, doing proper exercise like neck-stretching exercises and jogging can strengthen your neck muscles and improve blood circulation.
I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Judy,
I'm sorry to hear that you often have a sore neck. Here is my advice.
First, you should avoid playing computer games too much. Spending hours in front of the screen with your head in a fixed position can put great pressure on your neck. Second, don't read books with your head lowered for a long time. Try to keep your neck in a comfortable position while reading. Besides, it's important to take proper breaks. For example, take a 10-minute break every hour to stretch your body. Last but not least, doing proper exercise like neck-stretching exercises and jogging can strengthen your neck muscles and improve blood circulation.
I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作（邮件），需围绕Judy脖子痛的问题，紧扣“不该做的事”和“该做的事”两个要点给出建议。思考步骤：1. 承接已给开头，明确提出建议；2. 分点列举“不该做的行为”（如长时间玩电脑、低头看书）与“该做的行为”（如定时休息、颈部锻炼）；3. 补充合理细节使行文连贯，最后添加祝福，确保符合邮件格式、字数要求，无真实信息。
【解析】
按照邮件格式组织内容：先承接开头，分点说明建议：First, you should avoid playing computer games too much. Spending hours in front of the screen with your head in a fixed position can put great pressure on your neck. Second, don't read books with your head lowered for a long time. Try to keep your neck in a comfortable position while reading. Besides, it's important to take proper breaks. For example, take a 10-minute break every hour to stretch your body. Last but not least, doing proper exercise like neck-stretching exercises and jogging can strengthen your neck muscles and improve blood circulation. 最后补充祝福，使邮件完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Judy,
I'm sorry to hear that you often have a sore neck. Here is my advice.
First, you should avoid playing computer games too much. Spending hours in front of the screen with your head in a fixed position can put great pressure on your neck. Second, don't read books with your head lowered for a long time. Try to keep your neck in a comfortable position while reading. Besides, it's important to take proper breaks. For example, take a 10-minute break every hour to stretch your body. Last but not least, doing proper exercise like neck-stretching exercises and jogging can strengthen your neck muscles and improve blood circulation.
I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、健康话题表达
【点评】
本题考查学生运用英语解决实际健康问题的实用写作能力，要求紧扣要点、条理清晰、语言连贯，符合邮件格式，是初中英语常见写作题型，侧重考查语言运用的实用性。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作（邮件），需围绕Judy脖子痛的问题，紧扣“不该做的事”和“该做的事”两个要点给出建议。思考步骤：1. 承接已给开头，明确提出建议；2. 分点列举“不该做的行为”（如长时间玩电脑、低头看书）与“该做的行为”（如定时休息、颈部锻炼）；3. 补充合理细节使行文连贯，最后添加祝福，确保符合邮件格式、字数要求，无真实信息。
【解析】
按照邮件格式组织内容：先承接开头，分点说明建议：First, you should avoid playing computer games too much. Spending hours in front of the screen with your head in a fixed position can put great pressure on your neck. Second, don't read books with your head lowered for a long time. Try to keep your neck in a comfortable position while reading. Besides, it's important to take proper breaks. For example, take a 10-minute break every hour to stretch your body. Last but not least, doing proper exercise like neck-stretching exercises and jogging can strengthen your neck muscles and improve blood circulation. 最后补充祝福，使邮件完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Judy,
I'm sorry to hear that you often have a sore neck. Here is my advice.
First, you should avoid playing computer games too much. Spending hours in front of the screen with your head in a fixed position can put great pressure on your neck. Second, don't read books with your head lowered for a long time. Try to keep your neck in a comfortable position while reading. Besides, it's important to take proper breaks. For example, take a 10-minute break every hour to stretch your body. Last but not least, doing proper exercise like neck-stretching exercises and jogging can strengthen your neck muscles and improve blood circulation.
I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、健康话题表达
【点评】
本题考查学生运用英语解决实际健康问题的实用写作能力，要求紧扣要点、条理清晰、语言连贯，符合邮件格式，是初中英语常见写作题型，侧重考查语言运用的实用性。
【难度系数】
0.5
